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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:52 pm

I drew this but I kind want feedback I apologize for the size ^^;;
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:49 pm

Would you like your heart to be anatomically correct? It'll get mightly complicated to draw, though. I won't be able to do it! razz

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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:58 pm

Lol I don't understand your fancy big words

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Would you like your heart to be anatomically correct? It'll get mightly complicated to draw, though. I won't be able to do it! razz

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:03 pm

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I drew this but I kind want feedback I apologize for the size ^^;;
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Well i like the idea - and how you drew the wing is nice!
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maybe you should draw the outlines stronger, (i guess you took a photo right? If it's scanned, you could edit a bit in photoshop or any related programm)
biggrin How about trying some shading - setting the shadow on the left side for example?
The right part looks like a half heart - just wondering biggrin

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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:03 pm

lol^^ i like it^^

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:08 pm

Yeah lol I get what your saying I would shade but I always screw it up somehow

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I drew this but I kind want feedback I apologize for the size ^^;;
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Well i like the idea - and how you drew the wing is nice!
Okay
maybe you should draw the outlines stronger, (i guess you took a photo right? If it's scanned, you could edit a bit in photoshop or any related programm)
biggrin How about trying some shading - setting the shadow on the left side for example?
The right part looks like a half heart - just wondering biggrin

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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:13 pm

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Yeah lol I get what your saying I would shade but I always screw it up somehow

i bet you will do a good job, just try! Don't give up - since i can see you have talent! When i was young i thought the same but with every drawing i improved and had to pratice a lot! ;D

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:18 pm

Yeah the reason I drew this is because 1. My art teacher gave me a sketch pad and 2. My best friend ripped my heart out and thats what I decided my heart looked like for some odd reason xD

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Yeah lol I get what your saying I would shade but I always screw it up somehow

i bet you will do a good job, just try! Don't give up - since i can see you have talent! When i was young i thought the same but with every drawing i improved and had to pratice a lot! ;D

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Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 9:33 pm

Wrath the Warmachine

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I drew this but I kind want feedback I apologize for the size ^^;;
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Well i like the idea - and how you drew the wing is nice!
Okay
maybe you should draw the outlines stronger, (i guess you took a photo right? If it's scanned, you could edit a bit in photoshop or any related programm)
biggrin How about trying some shading - setting the shadow on the left side for example?
The right part looks like a half heart - just wondering biggrin

^w^ I like it, although I have to agree with Wrath. If scanned you'd be able to apply shading as well as make the outline darker and stand out more, using an editing program. I heart how you drew the wings, they look awesome!! o.o Although I have to ask, is it a half heart? It looks like that from my p.o.v.

Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:00 pm

i like the idea....but i also think u need to darken the outlines a little so ur drawing can stand out

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