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Soul Shimo ~Captain of Squad 6~

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:08 pm


Username: Soul_eater178
Character's Name: Soul Shimo
Character's Age: 20/416
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Race: Vizard
Squad: 6
Rank: Captain
Current Rank Among Vizards: N/A

Likes:
-Training
-Tea
-Calm
-Happy people
Dislikes:
-Fighting
-People in bad moods
-Getting drunk
-Very loud places
Personality: Soul is the kind and caring person. He gets very into his work because of what he does, being internal affairs he wants to make sure he makes everyone safe. He loves to hang out with fellow shinigami and if someone was indanger he would risk himself to save them.

Appearance: He wears a standard shinigami uniform with white over coat over captain's haori that is able to store reiatsu. (This picture is for what his face, hair, and eyes look like only)
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Markings: Clan Symbol between his shoulder blades
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Mask Appearance: Has the ability of cero, sonido, and a type of hierro. (Uses spirit energy and condenses it around his body to act as hierro.)
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Zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Name: Onishimo (Demon Ice)

Zanpakuto Appearance:
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Zanpakuto Element: Ice

Zanpakuto Type: Offensive and Defensive

Sealed Appearance: Katana

Zanpakuto Spirit: Onishimo is much like Soul, he is calm and caring. He doesn't like to fight much so if a fight comes up he tries and calms the person down.
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Zanpakuto Release Incantation: "Cool them down, Onishimo"

Shikai Appearance:
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Shikai Ability: I can control ice and shield myself and my allies with it.

Generic Attack: Ice Maze- Soul can also create a ice maze which he can sink into to it and fire his attacks anywhere he wants to in the maze, but it is still brakeable if you have above a captains power.

Attack #1: Explosive shards- by condensing reiatsu into the shards they become tiny but powerful bombs.

Attack #2: Blizzard- this attack summons a large and powerful blizzard with ice shards hidden throughout it making it so that if my oppenent isn't carefull they could recieve several very small lacerations. (6 posts)

Attack #3: Ice blades- this attack is somewhat like Byakuya's second phase of bankai. About one hundred ice blades will appear floating around Soul in no pattern. Soul is able to control these blades to fight against his opponent, making his opponent fight several things at once, but the opponent is truly only fighting one person.

Bankai Achieved: Achieved

Bankai Appearance:
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Bankai Ability: In bankai i still have control over ice and my ice becomes faster and a lot more difficult to destory. While in bankai i can create a gaint pyramid that works just like the ice maze. If his oppenent was ever to make it all the way to the top of the pyramid they would enter the room Soul is most of the time in. This room is rather magnificent, in this room there are three pillars each bigger than the first, from the ceiling is falling millions of little ice specks that glitter in the light, lastly the room is flat except for the pillars in the middle and it as with all the pyramid is made of ice that Soul is able to control. (After about 5 posts on each floor (There is about 4 floors before the room each gets smaller as they go so one floor is 5 posts the next 4 then so on and so forth) the person is able to move onto the next floor)

Generic Attack: Ice Maze- Soul can also create a ice maze which he can sink into to it and fire his attacks anywhere he wants to in the maze, but it is still brakeable if you have above a captains power.


Attack #1: Ice bird- With this attack Soul creates a gaint ice falcon that he can ride upon and use it to attack his opponent. If he lets the falcon fly at and hit anything without him on it the falcon will cover whatever it hit with about 6 feet of ice completely freezing it over and then the ice will break apart and if he hit his opponent the most it will do is take a limb off. (Arm or leg only)

Attack #2: Winter blast- For this attack Soul will stab his blade towards his opponent and much like Rukia's attack an area of about 400 feet infront and 55 feet from one edge to the other will be completely consumed by ice freezing his opponent, if his opponent is caught in the attack it will cause hypothermia and because it will be so cold their skin would crack open being when the ice releases them (Which is in the next post) they would have received several lacerations. The attack is possibly the fastest of Soul's attacks because as soon as he stabs forward the water in the air freezes and ice erupts from the tip in less than maybe 3 seconds and it only takes 3 seconds for it to cover 250 feet infront of him so in less than maybe 6 seconds the whole 400 feet is covered with this attack.

Attack #3: Snow Fall- During this attack a massive cloud will appear over head and the temperature will drop dramatically. A hole will open in the cloud and a snow flake will fall. My opponent wouldn't see the flake till it floats right in front of their face but by then it is too late. The flake will expand to be a large ice rose, weighing the enemy down. About 100 snow flakes will fall and each one always on the opponent. Once the last one falls Soul's opponent would have died by hypothermia and because of their body completely freezing over. This attack takes everything Soul has in him and he will need a lot of rest before he can come out of the coma he will enter. Once he enters the coma the ice rose tower with his enemy in the middle will shatter into millions of tiny pieces and so will his enemy. (This attack is much like Toshiro Hitsugaya's attack)

Character History:
~Before Death~
Before Soul died his name was Nick. He grew up in Karakura Town with a mom, a dad and a younger brother named Sam. The school day just ended and he went by his brother's school to pick him up like he always does. They walked their normal way home, through allyways and away from the main streets. Everything was normal untill they rounded a corner and the ground shook that is. He reached into his pocket and grabbed his knife he carried with him. After placing his hand on his little borther's shoulder they continued walking. They walked for another ten feet and the ground shook again. The two of them exchanged looks and Nick looked around. Thats when something hit him. He went flying the last thing he saw was his little brother looking scared and running. Nick's sight went black as he felt a sharp pain on the back of his head. When Nick regained concisness or so he thought he had a chain on his chest. He looked around and saw his little brother being held down by some kind of monster. Nick didn't know what to do, he sat there stunned as the monster crushed his little brother's body. Nick began crying when all of a sudden a being with a katana and wearing a black kosode, a black hakama, and a white sash came out of nowhere and killed the beast. The person didn't seem to notice Nick sitting there because they left as fast as they came. Nick stood up and walked over to his brother and saw that he was alright. He poked him and Sam opened his eyes. After that day the two of them stayed together. The chain on their chest ate away at itself and Sam's seemed to eat faster than Nick's did. One day they were both walking when Sam's chain went berserk and ate itself fully. Nick was worried because Sam was screaming and then he exploded while Nick was calling his brother's name. Nick began to cry as the same person that killed the monster appeared. He told him that his brother was gone and if he didn't go to this place called Soul Society he would die as well. Nick let the person send him to the Soul Society.
~Shinigami Years~
After Nick was sent to the Soul Society he waited about 100 years before he attended the shinigami academy when he did he changed his name to be Soul Shimo. He graduated the academy with high marks in kido and zanjutsu. After another 200 years he made his way up through the ranks and became Captain of Squad 6. He still is captain but he also has a secert only a few people know about that could get him banished from the Soul Society. He has never forgot about the day he died and when he saw his bother become a hollow. He knew his brother was still alive but he didn't know where he was or if he evolved fully to become an arrancar.

Role Play Example: Soul could be seen walking through a forest all alone. He had his zanpaku-to strapped to his side and ready to be used. As he walked deeper through the forest the presence began getting stronger and stronger. He didn't know what it was but he did know this, it was a hollow. Soul walked into a clearing with a lone figure standing in the middle of that clearing with a blade in it's hand "What are you doing here?" Soul asked the arrancar seeing that it had a fragment of a mask and a zanpaku-to "I have come to kill anyone i see might be a challenge....." The arrancar replied as it vanished appearing in front of Soul slashing diagonally at his chest. Soul was quick to draw his blade and block the attack and once they locked blades he pushed the arrancar off as he did a back flip to get a few feet between him and it. The arrancar grinned as it dashed forward stabbing at Soul's chest. Soul parried the attack and slashed diagonally down from the arrancar's left shoulder down to his right hip. The arrancar took a step back but Soul was fast, his slash made contact and a small gash was now on the arrancar's body. Soul stood there the arrancar's blood dripping from his blade as he waited for the arrancar to make it's move. The arrancar laughed as he jumped at Soul his blade held over his head with both hands, he intended to cut Soul in half. Soul looked up and took a step forward bringing his blade up in a poewrful arc slashing across the arrancar's side. The arrancar's eyes widen as he felt a pain in his side and it continued on to his other side. Soul took another step and turned around still ready for battle as he looked at the now cut in half arrancar. "It seems you chose someone above your skill level..." Soul said as he sheathed his blade at the same time the arrancar's body began to disappear.

Extra:
Soul has the ability to change into a falcon
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:53 pm


Soul there are several things wrong with your profile. We are cracking down hard on these now.

1. You are too old. I realize that you have been allowed to be that old in the past, but that ain't happening now. Jubaku is only in his 600's so tone it way down.

2. You can't store Reiatsu in your coat. Not possible, take it off, please.

3. Coati and I just discussed this. You cannot have all of those multiple abilities. Post your maze as an attack and be descriptive within the info. Your maze needs a weakness, fire (or something close to it)is my suggestion.

4. Your Generic Attack cannot be that powerful. Strong enough to cut a heirro with thousands of sharp ice shards? Not happening, please change it; number and strength.

5. Your blizzard needs a time limit. I will allow the power behind it, but it needs a time limit post wise.

6. Your Bankai Ability is denied. Too complicated for one thing, with all the traps in it. It also doesn't allow for the persona chance to hit you as you are waiting for them at the top of the pyramid. You say you would also be able to control the ice within the pyramid, so for them to get to the next floor you have to allow them? That is not going to be allowed. I suggest you take another ability.

7. Ice bird special ability is iffy. You say if he hits his opponent. Your opponent is covered in ice. They can't move...what "if" is there? It is a move that will stop the persons movements completely and allow you to hit them without protest. What is it's weakness besides to stay away from the gaiant flying ice fowl?

8. Bankai Attack Number Two is denied. Try again. If you want a reason, ask for it.

9. Bankai Attack Number Three is denied. It may be like Toshiro's attack, but it isn't the same. The person doesn't die of Hypothermia (which I believe Shinigami have a hard time doing as they can also go without food and water for sometime) and it doesn't shatter into millions of pieces with its captive doing the same. This would also need a limitation or weakness, but it is denied, so you need a nother idea.

10. Your History needs to be longer and more descriptive. No first person.

11. You are a Mod of this guild as well as a Captain, we have all discussed this before and I will say it again. I expect more out of you. A simple repeatitive description of a park and a persons attitude will not do it.


Denied until further notice.

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soul_eater178

PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:14 pm


1. Changed

2. Jubaku approved it

3. Changed, the maze is now in my generic ability and anything is its weakness you just have to be strong enough

4. Changed

5. 6 posts

6. Changed the traps are gone and there is a time limit on the levels of the pyramid

7. If the enemy dodges no harm done but if they don't they loose an arm or leg (their choice) i will not attack them when they are frozen because that is unfair or if i do attack them that is because i have gained their permission

8. Give me the reason because i see nothing wrong with and neither did Zechs

9. It isn't meant to be the same i made the attack my own and the only reason i would have to use it is if that person wants their character to be killed off other than that it will stay untouched and never use it. Why do you think i put that he will be in a coma? he would need several days of medical attention to gain back all the reiatsu he lost

10. Changed

11. Well that is what i got, it is very descriptive and you can not hold every person to one standard each person has a different level of literacy and mine just so happens to be that so don't push it
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:56 pm


2. Fine

3. I'll discuss this later

6. So they just have to run up the pyramid to get to you.

7. You have a good number of kill shots within your profile. You realize not everyone wants their RPC to be armless or legless and most will just auto-dodge the bird. If you want to keep it that is fine, but you need to realize how other will react to it.

8. xZechsx doesn't always catch everything, he and I have proven this before. The attack is too fast for that much damage. You say it travels 250 feet per second. You just automatically covered an area within a second and just trapped your opponent within it. No one can god-mod their way out of a seconds interval. With all that damage you just did to your opponent, you could just continuely stab at them when they are within 250 feet and they are automatically trapt. Unless you are saying something else entirely that would be my problem with this attack.

9. I know you are adding your own twist to it. I am un easy about this attac, but I will let it pass. I do not want to see it used anywhere. I'm sure you will only use it once someone is ready to die, so that person needs to post the approval as well.

10. The first part of your histroy is basically stating his personality. Afterwards is ok, but I'll let it go since I am to tired for this.

11. Hate to say it Soul, but people do hold others to one standard. You go into your English class and you are expected to do the same as everyone else or else you get a bad grade. I'm not going on literacy, I'm going on content. You are mainly describing a random, non action, meditaion scene. For a RP sample had it been submitted in to get a Second RPC, it would have been declined, not for the length, but the content alone. I will change the layout to say it must be a fighting RP samples since, I now realize anyone can just describe a random chat with another officer in here and pass it off as an RP Example. Please change it now, so you can be approved afterward.

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soul_eater178

PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:01 pm


3. It needs to be discussed now

6. pretty much

7. I know that is why i gain permission to add a twist to the storyline

8. I will change the speed but look at how fast Rukia's attack is that is about 2 seconds for it to be fully fired maybe even faster

9. Only will be used when the other person wants to die

11. Fine i will change it but you can't really do a fighting rp example because most people make the example look like they are god-modding
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:14 pm


3. I didn't mean with you so watch it

6. go ahead

7. Go ahead

8. No, she has to twirl her sword upside down then slash with it and then the circle glows and THEN the ice hits. Total minimum seconds...about 5 give or take depedning on how fast you can turn a zanpakuto upside down and slash it afterwards.

9. fine

10. People are allowed to God-Mod within an RP Sample. True good RPers will show that they can take a hit and still look bad a**. If you have to God-Mod that is fine by me, just don't do it in guild life RP. Besides, this RP example is to help the teachers and Race Leaders. It will show the literacy and skill of the RPer. Once the person is accepted into the race, the leader can see whether or not they are lit. enough to hold a good rank. This is only the prelimenaries.

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soul_eater178

PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:21 pm


3. Sorry but i thought you meant with me seeing as you didn't say you were going to discuss it with anyone

8. Like i said i am going to lengthen the time but i am not doing the whole stabbing ground thing so that means it would be faster

10. I redid it
PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:59 am


Ready to be approved i think

soul_eater178


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:01 pm


Damn it Soul nick is mine!!

other than that

Approved

Ready to be Moved
PostPosted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:08 pm


Well too bad! lol My name is truely Nick but i changed it when i entered Shinigami Academy so what now! XD

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