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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:11 pm


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Name: Zaine Tsukioma
Aliases/ Nicknames: The Fang of the Elements
Age: 17
Division/Seat: Squad 13 Taicho
Height: 5'11"
Weight:154lbs
Personality: Zaine is a pretty likeable guy, however he can be very unpredictable, and has had many instances of hugging people on the spur of the moment he is a joker, but kindhearted and extremely gentle when needed, fiercely loyal to anyone he becomes close to
Theme Song(s): Chain

Physical Description: Since achieving Shikai Zaine's clothing has changed, he no longer wears a chain shirt beneath his cloak and has even changed the design of his cloak to a looser, more durable fabric and has incorperated some of his own designs on it. The cloak has a multitude of hidden pockets that Zaine uses to store various items, his eyes reflect his reiatsu, being gold flecked sporadically throughout with dark crimson. He wears a belt emblazoned with the symbol of his squad in lieu of a conventional Haori.


Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Za Shotou Ookami - The Elemental Wolves Together Fenris and Fenrir, unlike many duel spirited Zanpakuto, happen to share the same body. Instead of two twin weapons with slight modifications, the blade takes form as a beautifully crafted double bladed katana. Each blade shares slight similarity with the fluent water-like patterns drawn gracefully against the shimmering metallic display. At the shared base of these two blades lies a crystalline guard, magnificent in design and crafted just as finely as the other characteristics of the blade. The next portion of the blade, the hilt, is of a very peculiar design; all black and white with strange interlacing patterns, splayed about at random across the handle. Placed at the weapon's guard, tied about the crystal structure, is a dark red cloth with it's own specific and fiery aura. Also, at the duel-blade's hilt, is a single tassel. The pure white, intertwined strings are used for firmly grasping the small Amulet that hangs lightly from the hilt's rounded bottom. This little token holds the feral image of a wolf within its centre.

Seperate ((Seperate form true descript WIP))

Zanpaku-to Sword Type: Renbato that seperates into two katana
Zanpaku-to Element: All
Zanpakutō Spirits: The spirits that inhabit Zaine's Zanpakutoh are a strange pair of twins, usually they don the form of two large wolves, the female appears as a pristine white shewolf that reaches just below Zaine's
ribs, the male is pitch black and reaches Zaine's third rib. They occasionally assume a humanish form, but both still retain some lupine traits, such as fangs, claws and ears. The two of them wear the uniform of a shinigami with a few modifications to them, each posses a sword of unknown orgin and design. The female has snow white hair, and is attractive, however she is somwhat sadistic and enjoy's to make Zaine uncomfortable, always quick to anger the only person who seems to hold sway over her is her brother. The male posseses ravenwing hair and a strong build, his face is handsome and unlike his sister he is quiet and friendly, using few words but eminating an aura of control and safety.

Zanpakuto Spirit true form:The twins become the whole that they are derived from, the man looks similar to Fenrir but is grey, his hair, clothing, and eyes are all grey, instead of a single sword he carries the two blades that the twins had carried, he is the whole and the parts, his voice a blend of the two spirits he had incarnated himself in for most interactions. His forms also are similar to the twins, but in his Wolf body he reaches the height of the mythic wolves of old, somewhere between 3 and 4 stories tall. His name is, Za Kemutai Ookami Shotou (The Smoky Wolf Elemental), He answers to Kemu and will aid Zaine in any way possible in battle, out of a fight he possesses a wicked sense of humor and loves to pull pranks on his owner.


Inner World: A cave, or rather, an intricate, endless cavernous area that has breaks in the ceiling, allowing the constant full moon to shine inside the place, all branches of caverns meet in what Zaine considers the "Heart of the world." An impossibly large cavern, in the center of which is an breathtakingly beautiful underground lake, lit with a gentle glow from within. The ceiling of this room is carved so that the moon can be seen perfectly, the rays of this large guardian of the night sky reveal delicate flowers that are in fact crystalline in structure, gems such as Diamond, Sapphire, Rubies, and others can be found in these beautiful flowers, the lake's interior is in fact packed full of these structures and may be the source of the light within the lake.



- Shikai -
Release Phrase: Bare your fangs and Howl, Za Shotou Ookami -


Upon release Zaine's shikai engulfs his body in a blinding light, allowing complete loss of visibilty,, the light only takes moments to appear and dissapear, and with it comes an amazing spike in Zaine's already considerable reiatsu level. Once the light dissapears Zaine is revealed weilding two large blades, one is obsidian and on the flat depicts an ivory wolf running across an open field, the detail is such that the pictures seems to move as Zaine does, the blade he carries in his left hand is pure white, with a similar design of a wolf, this one running across a lake view area, the water appears to shimmer and move even when the blade is at rest. Both blades posses no guard nor any obstanant decore aside from a curvature at the end of each hilt that resemble the canine fang of a wolf. The power of his shikai allows Zaine to choose two elements for each blade and control the power of that element, also Zaine's reiatsu becomes infused with the elemental power he chooses for his blades, utilising Sentakushi Tougyo or Selective control he can convert his blades to use the same element, giving him 50% control over that one element, as opposed to the regular 25% per element he has when using two different elements. However Zaine cannot switch elements freely, if he desires to change the elements he has he has to reseal his zanpakuto, wait a cool down period ((2 posts)) and then he has to re-release his shikai.


  • Controlled elements: Water, Wind, Fire, and Earth


Release Phrase: Awaken O' ancient one, Raise your head to the moon, Za Kemutai Ookami Shotou! Bankai"-

Zaine blades dissapear, in their place, a pair of bladed gauntlets sit upon Zaine's arms, the left is alabaster white, leading up to an ebony fur attached at the shoulders, the right gauntlet was obsidian black, and like the left, ended in fur only this was ivory. Each gauntlet possesed a snarling wolf-head design, upon his legs are a set of misty grey bladed greaves, upon which a great smokey grey wolf is engraved upon the shin area, the tops of the greaves possess a gunsteel grey fur that lines the edges, he becomes more lupine in appearance. (Hair becomes more wild, canine fangs grow, ect...)

  • (Basic info atm) Zaine loses his choice from the elements, instead he is limited to a constant elemental list of, Water, Wind, Fire, Earth, Light, and Shadows.




Kidou:
Bakudo:
  • #1 - Sai ("Obstruction")
    Calls forth bindings to immobilize the target's arms.

    #4 - Hainawa ("Crawling Rope")
    Calls forth a yellow rope made of reaitsu to bind the target's hands.

    #8 - Seki ("Repulse")
    Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it

    #9 - Geki ("Conquer")
    Surrounds the target in a paralyzing red light.
    Incantation: "Disintegrate, black dog of Rondaniini. Look upon your burning soul and sever your throat."

    #9 - Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle)
    Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together.
    Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!"

    #12
    Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
    Momo Hinamori uses this spell in conjunction with Shot of Red Fire and a Kidō net that has entangled her opponents resulting in a large explosion around them all. Rangiku Matsumoto states that it is number 12, but does not specify whether it is a Destructive or a Binding Spell although from the name and effect, it is highly likely to be a Binding spell.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    ○?○
    Hakufuku (白伏, White Crawl)
    This technique muddles the consciousness of its target. Momo Hinamori uses this spell while imprisoned to knock out a guard and destroy everything within a certain radius of herself. The Bleach Official Character Book Souls states that it is a Binding spell.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    ○?○
    Kyōmon (鏡門, Mirror Door)
    Tōshirō Hitsugaya used this to seal Momo Hinamori's hospital room. It creates a glass-like barrier which is difficult to break from the outside, but quite simple to break from the inside.
    Incantation:
    unknown.


    #21- Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape) Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.

    #26- Kyokko (曲光, Curved Light) Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object

    #30
    Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam)
    Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of an equilateral triangle
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #37
    Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
    Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #39
    Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield)
    Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #58
    Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
    Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.
    Incantation:
    "Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain." ("南の心臓 北の瞳 西の指先 東の踵 風持ちて 集い雨払いて散れ")

    #61
    Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light)
    Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams
    Incantation:
    "Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!" ("雷鳴の馬車 糸車の間隙 光もて此を六に別つ!")

    #62
    Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence)
    A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #63
    Sajo Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes)
    Similar to Bakudō No. 4, but stronger, this spell binds the arms of a target.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #73
    Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)
    Creates an inverted pyramid-shaped barrier around the caster.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #75
    Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars)
    Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars which are connected to each other by chains to pin a target to the ground.
    Incantation:
    "Walls of iron sand, a priestly pagoda, glowing ironclad fireflies. Standing upright, silent to the end." ("鉄砂の壁、僧形の塔、灼鉄熒熒、湛然として終に音無し)

    #77
    Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air)
    Transmits messages mentally to anyone within an area of the caster's choosing. In addition to reciting the spell, the user must draw specific markings on their arms, which are animated by the spell to convey the messages. The messages can be spoken either by the caster or by another within the vicinity of the caster.
    Incantation:
    "Black and white net. Twenty-two bridges, sixty-six crowns and belts. Footprints, distant thunder, sharp peak, engulfing land, hidden in the night, sea of clouds, blue line. Form a circle and fly though the heavens." ("黒白の羅!二十二の橋梁 六十六の冠帯 足跡・遠雷・尖峰・回地・夜伏・雲海・蒼い隊列 太円に満ちて天を挺れはし)

    #81
    Danku (斷空, Splitting Void)
    Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88.
    Incantation:
    unknown; although Tessai hinted that it has an incantation when he fights Aizen.




Hado:
  • #1 - Shō (Thrust)
    Pushes the target away from the caster with spirit energy.

    #4
    Byakurai (White lightning)
    Fires a bolt of white lightning from the caster's finger, piercing the target

    #11
    Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning) Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through

    #31
    Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
    Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
    Incantation:
    "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" ("君臨者よ!血雨の仮面·万象·羽ばたき·ヒトの名を冠す者よ!焦熱と争乱、海隔て逆巻き南へと歩を進めよ!")[

    #33
    Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
    Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
    Incantation:
    "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws." ("君臨者よ!血肉の仮面·万象·羽ばたき·ヒトの名を冠する者よ!真理と節制、罪知らぬ夢の壁に僅かに爪を立てよ!")

    #54
    Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
    Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #58
    Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)
    A widening tornado-like blast is fired towards the target.
    Incantation:
    unknown.

    #63
    Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon)
    Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target.
    Incantation:
    "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!" ("散在する獣の骨!尖塔・紅晶・鋼鉄の車輪 動けば風 止まれば空 槍打つ音色が虚城に満ちる!")



    #73
    Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)
    Essentially a doubled version of #33 (labelled as #73 in anime), this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.
    Incantation:
    "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens." ("君臨者よ!血肉の仮面・万象・羽ばたき・ヒトの名を冠す者よ!蒼火の壁に双蓮を刻む 大火の淵を遠天にて待つ")

    #88
    Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon)
    Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion. Its full strength is however unknown since Aizen used Splitting Void before it could hit him.
    Incantation:
    unknown.




- Accessories -

  • He wears a strange cross around his neck, it has a white crescent moon intersecting it to the right and a black one to the left. He always carries basic med supplies in his cloak. (E.g. Bandages, splints, ect...)


- Skills -

  • Sentakushi Tougyo- Selective Control, meaning that he can choose to focus his control on a single element, doubling his current control of it.

  • Wind Waker
    Type: Anti-Personnel
    Description: Uses reiatsu energy to manipulate the air in the surrounding atmosphere to form a highly concentrated sphere made up of powerful air currents. This skill requires far more concentration than reiatsu energy, making it usable even by unseated shinigami. However, it does require time to get used to it and to master it is, by itself, a great feat.

  • Shunpo


- Abilities -

  • Advanced Reiatsu Manipulation- Zaine can use his own Reiatsu in various ways, both offensive and defensive. Mostly he channels it to various points on his body (Arms, legs, feet, palms, ect...)


- Other -
Zaine is fair at treating field wounds, His prowess with a blade is nothing to be ignored either. Zaine made made up for his nearly nonexistent kidou skills by training his speed and reflexes, to be able to dodge most kidou blasts. Zaine's past attempts at using kido of any level resulted in highly destructive explosions that wounded him and the surrounding area, a glaring example of this was the time he attempted to use Sho back at the academy and succeeded in destroying the class area in the explosion. However, recently he has become quite adept at kidou, and appears to have finally settled into their use and power.

Biography Before Death: Unknown- to him
When he was alive he was just an average junior in high school; however he could see and interact with the recent dead. Zaine was a laid back student, not quite thinking about his future but always the philanthropist he helped those in need, giving them shelter and food. Zaine's family died in a fire leaving him alone, but for his friends. Zaine's death was officially unknown; however he was actually killed by a rampaging hollow when he tried to protect a small child from being consumed.

Biography After Death: When Zaine arrived at the Soul Society all he had to his name was his sword, his cross, and his good nature, He had arrived in the Sereitei confused and lost, that is until he saw the Gotei 13, at that very moment he knew what he wanted to do here, become a great Shinigami and protect the innocent, he made this his goal in life and applied for squad 13. He now serves as the Captain of the squad he so admired.

Soul Reaper Academy: Zaine was an unusual student, both in Kidou and sword skill, Zaine frustrated his Kidou instructor to no ends due to his unbelievable ability to control his own reiatsu, which should have allowed Zaine to perform powerful Kidou with ease. For some unknown reason though, every attempt Zaine made at performing kidou resulted in a highly destructive explosion, no matter what the kidou was. He excelled in Swordplay and regular combat though and was the pride of his teacher

Division Life: Zaine serves proudly as the Taicho of division Thirteen, he insists that he be referred to as Zaine, not Taicho or any such formalities, viewing them as needless lording of rank. He personally takes interest in all members of his squad and extends his friendship to all of them, he respects those whom he deems worthy and is quite down to earth, especially for most Captains.



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:19 pm


Okay i had a look over on this profile and I would like to make a few suggestions as to what needs to be changed before you can be approved okay?

1) Instead of all four elements could you please narrow it down to possibly one or two of the list you have already.

2) You might want to re think you attacks since some of your enemies mainly the kitsune use the basic elements as their base lines

3) as a captain you can have more kidou if you want to be Kidou focused..

4) A little more of his biography would be nice

please don't take this as you did this wrong, think of it as helpful criticism.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:28 pm


Well the Elements are only limited to two at a time in Shikai is that what was the problem?


I'll keep the elements for now, but I'll try to come up with other attacks as well if that is ok.


Edited the kidou list lol

And What would you suggest I do for the Bio? I'm really quite terrible at those damn things XD

And I know that you are helpin, glad that you are doin so too! ^_^
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:31 pm


Well how about this for attacks, you say you can use two at a time, how about wearing them down like crystals you use two they become no longer available til after you use the next two so they recharge one post - if you get what I mean. - you can have upto 4 attacks for both shikai and bankai so you can use the method in both?

As for your bio all it needs really would be a simple outline of his human life, his dead (you can be dramatic as you want) his school life the soul academy and then the progression through his rank, hope this helps.

EDIT

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:33 pm


Well I already have a limiter for that though, I can't just change the elements willy nilly lol, I have to reseal my zanpakuto, then I have to wait 2 posts before I can re release.

Kay I'll do what I can with that, am I approved in the meantime on that stuff?
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:35 pm


Change it first then Ill approve okay ~.^ but any thing to do with sealing and a weakness in your powers is good to know, sorry if I sounded mean Im not really XD

EDIT:
you can work on your bio while you rp. Sorry forgot to mention, >.> then Ill approve when you change your zanpaktou if you are >.<

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:38 pm


Bio edited, is that more what you wanted for it?


And sorry I thought I put that sealing thing in the descript lol sweatdrop


And ya didn't come off mean at all, I know you are just doin your job and I respect it alot lol
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:40 pm


Thats better,
A P P R O V E D

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:42 pm


Thanks ^_^ And I made the shikai weakness better seeable XD
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:43 pm


Yeah I know, you can now set up your thirteenth division biggrin

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:45 pm


Okay!

I hope everyone likes my rules..... twisted
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:47 pm


Im not shinigami so razz i dont need rules XD

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:48 pm


Btw do I get promoted to crew?

Just curious lol
PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:49 pm


Sorry Pal wrong person to beg ask

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:51 pm


Kay then XD
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