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 Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:13 pm
This is what will happen
Brambleberry tells them the prophecy and says Bloodpool will arrive once again, but this time with rouges and kittypets.
The 5 make the long journey home when they discover The tribe of Rushing water. (i know what you're thinking. trouble.) however they only pass by.
the tribe decides to follow the cats home from a distance.
Fadingpaw and Redpaw fall in love
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:44 pm
ooc: continued from chapter two.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxR e d p a w .xx
It was Specklepaw whom had chimed up first to his questions, mentioning some of the dramatics of Shadowclan. It felt kind of wierd, hearing the she-cat belittle her clan, then again, Redpaw was no threat to them. No, he had family in that clan, blood in that clan. Pale orange hues grew round in astonishment as Specklepaw mentioned some of the warriors have gone to become rogues and kittypets. He couldn't imagine it. But almost instantly, the apprentice's mind jumped to his father, the deputy. His jaws parted to ask about Stormrace, when Specklepaw answered his unwhispered question. The relief in his expression was obvious, and he breathed a sight. "I'm sorry about the hardships of Shadowclan, but they're strong, and nothing will threaten them." Redpaw reasurred softly, deciding to be oblivious to Fadingpaw's harsh glare to the other she cat.
Looking to the other orange tabby, Redpaw's tail unfurled curiously. "Glad to hear Cinderstar is getting along. And as for all those mouse-brains that tease you, don't let it get to you. Tell them Redpaw will come and set them straight." Of course, Redpaw could never go beat some fox-hearted apprentice into place, not from another clan, it would bring an outrage to Riverclan, but the thought was there. "And Windclan is doing great, Swiftstar has been busy lately, and Swiftpaw is as troublesome as ever. But they're good." The orage tabby tom remarked softly.
They had been travelling a for a while now, Redpaw's pads rubbed to the bone. He couldn't remember the last time his paws had ever been this sore, but the thought of helping his clan, and all the clans, helped drive him forward. Fadingpaw was always at his side, and the pair seemed to really get along. Specklepaw had become a good friend too, but he couldn't help but feel the draw toward the young medicine cat apprentice. Starpaw and Crowpaw had really hit it off too, which was always good. Specklepaw mentioned the appproach of a storm, and instinctively, a shiver lulled along the tom's spine. "I certainly hope it passes us." Redpaw remarked with a glance to the dark, rolling clouds above.
Starpaw bounded ahead, she halted at the crest of the hill before turning back to her comrades. Interest plucked at Redpaw's whiskers as she yowled out to them. Quickening the pace alongside Specklepaw and Fadingpaw, the tabby tom couldn't help but feel the breath suck out of him at the sight before his eyes. "Wow, it's amazing." A purr rumbled in his throat as he gave Fadingpaw a swift lick on the shoulder.
Bewilderment flashed upon the tom as the upset Spekclepaw bounded away. "Specklepaw!" He yowled after the she cat, to no pervail. Thunder shook the earth, and the storm began. Redpaw was just about to bound after her when Starpaw threw herself at Fadingpaw. Redpaw tensed, preparing to put himself between the two she cats when Crowpaw interveened. Swallowing, Redpaw cast a guilt felt glance at Specklepaw before turning to Fadingpaw as she asked to talk to him. "Sure." The orange tabby responded softly, padding a few fox lengths away beside the she cat.
At the arrival of Brambleberry, Redpaw decided he'd investigate after talking to Fadingpaw.
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:39 pm
((you filled in nice. i changed my mind. we are sticking to the way the plot says it. And memories, FADINGPAW AND REDPAW ARE NOT MEANT TO BE TOGETHER))
Specklepaw
Specklepaw glared at Fadingpaw as she turned toward Fadingpaw to see her sneaking off. She had to stop this. "And where do you think you're going?" she demanded. "This is Starpaw's mother who seems to know about why Starclan has sent us. It's best you two stay here. This could be very important." she said calmly, even though she was somewhat afraid Fadingpaw would do what Starpaw had done to her. Starpaw was her sister after all, and only they knew it.
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Brambleberry
"Yes, the two so close yet torn between in the end because of another in meeting. Just like the prophecy says." Brambleberry said. "Specklepaw come here please." she said. "How do you know my name?" Specklepaw demanded. "I am your mother!" Brambleberry snapped. "Now, who wants to know why you are here?"
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:44 pm
 ((But Whitefang and I have it all planned out! Shouldn't the roleplayers decide who is who's mate like you said before? It makes it much more fair))
Fadingpaw smiled at Redpaw and padded far away from the group so they couldn't hear what she was going to before turning to Redpaw. She ignored Specklepaw and then turned to Redpaw. She glanced at the ground for a second before taking a deep breath. She wasn't quite sure how to word it but she just had to tell him! She couldn't let Specklepaw steal him away from her! ThunderClan had stolen her father and she wasn't going to let Redpaw go. Fadingpaw glanced up and mewed, "Redpaw, over the past few days I've enjoyed every minute of it. Not because I'm going to save my clan and am a bug important cat but because I have been so lucky to spend time with you. At first, I was blinded because all I saw was Crowpaw but StarClan had it set out that he is too be with Starpaw, and I have accepted that." She paused for a second and took a deep breath. "And then I finally saw you and that night I did you took my breath away. I've wanted to be close to you ever since our first night out here. I knwo it's wrong, and it goes against everything I knwo but I love you, Redpaw, I truly do. you're the first cat to truly see me for who I am. To look past the shyness and the fear and to bring out the real me," she mewed gently and then stopped and flicked her tail. Her gaze stayed on him as she waited for his answer. What would he say? did he even feel the same about her or would he hate her for telling him this? She then glanced toward Starpaw and Specklepaw. If he did feel the same, those two would never forgive her. Maybe she shouldn't have... no! She wasn't going to let Specklepaw have him without knowing if he felt the same way she did!
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:05 pm
(((YOU WHAT? AND NOBODY TOLD ME??!!! grrrrr)))
"Fadingpaw stop now and come here before I rip your claws out!" Brambleberry spat. "I know about your mother and father, and im not afraid to tell. Infact its no longer a secret! Everyone knows and has known before you were born!" she hissed.
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"Mother please dont make this so hard on her! And by the way Fadingpaw what a dramatic scene. We all heard you. What a cat so thirsty for love. You are a medicine cat. Your duty is to your clan." Starpaw said calmly, ignoring the shocked and angered glance of Crowpaw.
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Brambleberry looked at Starpaw, then back at Fadingpaw. Fadingpaw had no idea of what had happened to her father, and it was obvious she was just asuming that she herself had murdered him. "Starpaw is right Fadingpaw. And to think you asume I was kicked out of Thunderclan for murdering him. Do you really know what really happened?"
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:08 pm
((We did it today through PMs and how could they hear?? It was supposed to be PRIVATE talk. And again NO ONE and I repeat NO ONE knows about Hauntedheart and Foxclaw! And Fadignpaw doesn't knwo who killed her father! She just knows a ThunderClan cat did!!))
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:44 pm
|| ooc; || Uh, I seem to have created a slight mishap. D: I'm not sure how to reply just yet, but maybe we can work things out?
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:43 am
crowpaw rpessed up against Starpaw and licked her ear. "Your mother seems very nice and wise, just like you,' he purred.
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:44 pm
"Crowpaw but she is being so terrible to Fadingpaw. Why cant she just leave her alone? I dont even know what she's talking about!" Starpaw mewed sadly.
Brambleberry had had enough. "Okay new subject. Who wants to know why they are here on this stormy night?" she paused, "Of course you all do! Now follow me to the hidden cave I live in." she said taking the lead, Specklepaw on her heals. "Specklepaw," she whispered. "no offence but why dont you leave Fadingpaw and Redpaw alone? You dont need him. Shadowclan has many open cats im sure." she said winking at Fadingpaw. Fadingpaw was happy and Brambleberry could see that. She did not want one of her own kin to ruin it. "But Brambleberry!" Specklepaw protested. There are hardly any cats in Shadowclan!"
"Shut up!" Brambleberry spat. now she knew. Specklepaw had a sharp tongue! And with that she marched forward, and started down the hill.
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:46 pm
"I know," Crowpaw mewed, "But I'm sure he is just like you. Beautiful, smart, strong-willed, and the greatest she-cat in all the clans." He tried ot make it sound like he was relating ehr to her mother, but in trueth he was telling Starpaw all the thing he felt for her.
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:25 am
"I believe you." Starpaw mewed. "Now lets go catch up. I want to know why we are here. That is--" she paused and took a deep breath. "That is I dont mind. As log as Im here with you." she said softly.
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:35 am
Crowpaw felt his pelt grow hot and he purred. The tom nuzzled Starpaw. "I'd travel to the end of the world for you, Starpaw," he told her affectionately.
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:38 am
"I would too." Starpaw said happily. "Now come on scardy cat!" she teased. "I'll race you!" And she raced down after the others.
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:40 am
"Think you can beat a SkyClan cat? Well lets see!" he called after her and bounded after her. His long legs gained on her quickly and he smiled
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:43 am
"Not fair! And remember Im half Skyclan too." Starpaw yelled. Crowpaw was gaining on her. She leaped forward, and landed with a start. "That was the biggest ive ever leaped." Starpaw said. She felt as if the world was on top of her. Her whole mind was dizzy. "Ugh."
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