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 Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:00 am
Please criticise, I never thought I was good at poems and now I want to know what you guys think. ^.^
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:07 am
Bittersweet
Is The Taste
Of Your Lips
Against Mine.
Bittersweet
Are My Feelings
For You.
Bittersweet
Is this Path
That We Once
Shared.
Bittersweet...
The Love In
Your Hazel Eyes
When You
Look At Me.
The Anger
In Your Voice
When I Hurt
You.
The Feeling
Of Your Loving Caress
Of Your Loving Touch.
The Gun
Held In Your Hand
The Gunshot
Ringing In My Ears
Being Held
In Your Arms
Whispering
I Love You
The Tears In The Night
Banging On Your
Door.
Begging To Be Let In
Begging For The Gunshot
To Be Aimed At Something
Not You.
Bittersweet
Is This Path
We Once Shared
Bittersweet
Was Being WIth You
Bittersweet
Is Being Without You.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:17 am
Shhhh
Please
Don't Tell.
Shhhh
Please
Don't Get
Me In Trouble.
Because
If He Finds Out
He'll Come
With That Scowl
On His face.
He'll Yell
And Scream.
He'll
Kick
And He'll
Hit.
Shhh
Please
Don't Tell.
Shhh
Please
Don't Get
Me In Trouble.
○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○○
Why Did
You Tell
Why Do You
Want
Me In Trouble?
I Can Hear
His Footsteps
Making The Stairs
Creak.
I Can Hear
His Angry Voice
Calling My Name.
I Can See
His Luminous Shadow
Stretching Across The
Floor
Swollowing All The
Light.
I Can See
His Angry Face
Glaring Down At Me.
I Can See
His Fist Raising Above My Head.
I Can Hear
His Yelling
His Screaming
His Scolding.
I Can Hear
My Own Breath
Leave My Body In Gasps
My Own Yelps
My Own Sobbing
I Can Hear.
I Can Feel
The Pain
When He
Strikes Out At Me
The Pain
When He Kicks Me.
I Can Feel
The Pain
Of My Chest Aching
With Guilt
With Sorrow.
I Know I
Probably Deserve
This Pain...
But Why Did
You Tell?
Shhh
And Next Time
Please Let Me
Get Away With
What I've Done Wrong
Just To Escape
The Pain For A Day.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:25 am
Guardian,
Where are you?
Guardian,
I miss you.
It hurts,
Without you here,
To protect me,
The bruises,
The screaming,
It hurts.
Guardian,
Where are you?
Guardian,
I miss you.
Guardian,
Today I had to stand,
On my own,
Without you here,
I just get knocked back down.
Guardian,
Why aren't you here,
You promised,
They'd never hurt me,
Guardian,
You're not here to stop them.
JoAnna,
What happened,
Why do you scowl at me,
And break the promise you made?
JoAnna,
It hurts,
The bruises,
The screaming,
Without you here,
JoAnna,
It hurts so much.
JoAnna,
I had to stand on my own,
You saw,
You watched,
You did nothing,
When I was pushed back down.
JoAnna,
Please,
Stop lying.
JoAnna,
Why don't you care,
Why do you hurt us more
Than they do?
Guardian,
Please,
Please realize,
How much I miss you,
How much I love you,
How much I need you.
Guardian,
It hurts too much,
I need you to protect me again,
Please,
Please,
Please, come back.
JoAnna,
Smile, laugh, run,
Protect me,
Tell the truth,
I miss you.
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:53 am
Is It So Bad
To Want What I Lost
To Ask For Help
To Whine About The Injustice
Of This World?
Is It So Bad
To Tell You I'm Hurting
To Tell You I Need Help
To Tell You I Can't Take Anymore?
Is It So Bad
To Love Attention
To Love Others
To Love Weird Things?
Is It So Bad
To Hate The People That Took
Everything Away From Me
To Hate Things That Make People Sad
To Hate Things You Love
To Hate Saying Goodbye...?
Is It So Bad
To Feel Sad
Feel Angry
Feel Bad?
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:06 pm
When I see
The smile on your face
And the love in your eyes
When I hear
The joy in your laughter
And the happiness in your voice
When I feel
The closeness that we share
And the warmth of your hand in mine
I understand
Why this year is so special
It's because I'm sharing it with you
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:20 pm
Sylar776 Bittersweet
Is The Taste
Of Your Lips
Against Mine.
Bittersweet
Are My Feelings
For You.
Bittersweet
Is this Path
That We Once
Shared.
Bittersweet...The Love In
Your Hazel Eyes
When You
Look At Me. The Anger
In Your Voice
When I Hurt
You. The Feeling
Of Your Loving Caress
Of Your Loving Touch. The Gun
Held In Your Hand
The Gunshot
Ringing In My EarsBeing Held
In Your Arms
Whispering
I Love YouThe Tears In The Night
Banging On Your
Door.
Begging To Be Let In
Begging For The Gunshot
To Be Aimed At Something
Not You.Bittersweet
Is This Path
We Once SharedBittersweet Was Being WIth You Bittersweet Is Being Without You. Well done. Moving. a bit dark for me but it is definitely an expression of the self. If I can find them I will post some of my old poems up.
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:40 am
Shaymer Sylar776 Bittersweet
Is The Taste
Of Your Lips
Against Mine.
Bittersweet
Are My Feelings
For You.
Bittersweet
Is this Path
That We Once
Shared.
Bittersweet...The Love In
Your Hazel Eyes
When You
Look At Me. The Anger
In Your Voice
When I Hurt
You. The Feeling
Of Your Loving Caress
Of Your Loving Touch. The Gun
Held In Your Hand
The Gunshot
Ringing In My EarsBeing Held
In Your Arms
Whispering
I Love YouThe Tears In The Night
Banging On Your
Door.
Begging To Be Let In
Begging For The Gunshot
To Be Aimed At Something
Not You.Bittersweet
Is This Path
We Once SharedBittersweet Was Being WIth You Bittersweet Is Being Without You. Well done. Moving. a bit dark for me but it is definitely an expression of the self. If I can find them I will post some of my old poems up. Thanks ^.^ And yea, some of my poems are kinda sad.
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