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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:26 pm

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Username: Daxslayer
Rp Name: Tenkai Lance
Rp Age: 16
Gender: Male
Race:Human
Personality: Quiet, Clever, Cocky, Intelligent
Height: 5ft/"60"
Weight: 178 LBs
Markings/Tattoos: None
Likes: Sausage, Katanas, Speed
Dislikes: Doesn't really have any dislikes
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Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: Currently Black
Hair Style Long, Straight
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~~Current Age~~

~~Younger Age~~

What you call your Power: Soul Ripper (Tamashii Yaburimasu)

Phase One Description:
Power: Tenkai unleashes a special sword formed of the spirit energy in his body.

Attack No.1
-info: Tenkai can create a orb of manifested spirit energy. It quickly evolves into a ray when launched.

Atack No. 2
-Info: Tenkai unveils a rapid jabbing attack, unleashing about 5 jabs a second. It requires a great mass of his Spirit Energy.

Phase Two Description:
Power: Tenkai unlocks his true energy and begins to form a massive aura of Spirit Energy around himself. His strength and speed slowly begin to increase. His power grows during battle, making the effect reverse in a average battle. Instead of growing weaker as he loses stamina, he grows stronger.

Attack No. 1
Name: Cosmic Shatter
-Info: Tenkai creates a massive sphere of spirit energy above his head. Using a massive amount of absorbed soul energy, he can fire a flurry of energy bullets that explode if the make contact with anything. (Tis iz a super move. If I manage to use it during combat, it will be a epic assult)

Attack Buff No. 2
-Info: Every time Tenkai's sword withdraws blood from an enemy, all of the blood staining the blade will become Tenkai's energy.

~~Sword Appearance~~

Biography/History: Tenkai has always been a extremely fast person. As a baby he started walking at 5 months of age. Within a month he mastered walking and started running. He parents found this incredible. They knew that their child would grow up as a very fast runner.

When Tenkai finality reached middle school, his spirit energy began to truly manifest. He began to see ghost, not just blurs but entire beings. Tenkai did not fret and he decided to instead ignore them. One day a strange creature attacked Tenkai's house. First thing it did was "assassinate" his parents. He did not know when suddenly it attacked him. In fear he began to run but knew even he could not outrun the great beast. He stopped and stood his ground and attempted to fight the beast but easily it wiped Tenkai out. He was in a life threatening situation when suddenly a sword began to manifest in his hand. He quickly fought back with the sword but could not win. He suddenly began to feel a increase of power. A strong spirit had approached him. Quickly he fought the beast and easily downed it. Quickly after the sword dispersed and Tenkai fainted. Ever since he knew that there was a such thing as a demon.

Tenkai has always had a weak spot in his heart after his parents had died. That is why he has become the quiet boy he is now. Even though he knows now that his powers exist, to this day he does not know how to activate them...

Theme Song: I am now completely confused on this part. I never seen what is wrong with my link. Just in case, here is a link to my song on playlist. Ain't No Rest for the Wicked

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:12 am

Your theme song link isn't correct. The following things must be adressed:

1). Attack No. 2 : 1000 slashes is too much for a human, let alone a new human in phase one, to do. Bring the number down by a lot.

2). Phase Two Power: Quadruple is considerably too much. Double or depending on how well you do and train, you can boost it to triple.

3). Phase Two Attack No. 2: Not possible. I will use another RPC as an example. Oni, a Master of Heuco Mundo, has the (self-proclaimed) fastest sonido in the Arrancar forces. Your attack says that even with that knowledge that you can overpower his speed. Again I say, not possible. Change this to something else or adapt to make it plausible, please.

4). You do not have access to the second phase. You have to work for that and meet a certain amount of posts before you can even start traing to get your second phase.

5). Explain what you mean by "the more soul energy (around him) the more powerful he gets.

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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:53 am

(PSST! I don't have the self proclaimed fastest sonido! Okami had that so i became to second fastest and since you put Okami out of his misery i became the fastest arrancar!)

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:52 pm

((No, you and pheo had been arguing about who got what. And if that were the case and Okami did have the fastest Sonido, then I have the fastest sonido. Not you. Since I was the one to gain his abilities by devouring him. So shut up and get out before I report you to the guild police for interferring with an interrogation. lol))

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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:52 pm

(You gained his abilities not his speed, and if you were to gain one more thing i would so say something about your profile having too many abilities -runs away across the border-)

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:14 pm

-stops Oni before he jumps across the border- Oni this is for official business only... don't post in here unless you have a VERY good reason to... -tosses Oni over the fence-

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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 7:37 am

Oni from now on pm someone if you have a problem instead of spamming in another profile.

Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:23 am

Thats better. Go ahead and add your phase two just make sure you change what Leo wanted you to change and once you are done either myself or Leo will be on and we shall look at it.

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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:31 am

I'm going to add in phase two just so that I know when my character unlocks it, I don't suddenly make myself super uber. (I know I just wanna deep inside lol)

Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:55 am

Soul: You are no longer an approving mod. That is Coati and I's job. So you are spamming as well. Only VC's, Coati, and I are to post in the profiles section.

Slayer:

1). Ok, that is fixed

2). How slowly does his speed and strength increase? (Post wise)

3). How much of a speed boost? I am really tempted not to allow this, because you already state that your phase 2 gives you more power as you go along and if you can speed with every hit, it is the same thing as quadrupling it, but more.

4). Much better

5). You have yet to explain what you meant

6). In your Phase two Attack no. 1: He creates a sphere of energy over his head, then fires energy bullets from it?

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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:57 am

Think before you post Leo. I have been given permission from Lloyd to become a third profile approver why else would i say either myself or Leo will be on to approve it?

Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:02 am

Soul until I hear from Lloyd do not approve profiles. Leo does a godo job by himself. He has not told or discussed this with me.

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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:21 am

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Soul: You are no longer an approving mod. That is Coati and I's job. So you are spamming as well. Only VC's, Coati, and I are to post in the profiles section.

Slayer:

1). Ok, that is fixed

2). How slowly does his speed and strength increase? (Post wise)

3). How much of a speed boost? I am really tempted not to allow this, because you already state that your phase 2 gives you more power as you go along and if you can speed with every hit, it is the same thing as quadrupling it, but more.

4). Much better

5). You have yet to explain what you meant

6). In your Phase two Attack no. 1: He creates a sphere of energy over his head, then fires energy bullets from it?

You don't make a lot of sense. First of all, no it is not as powerful as quadruple speed. I don't think you are using much common sense if you are asking how fast is slowly. In phase two attack no.1, I pretty much explain it. Picture a sphere of blue spirit energy floating above someone firing energy bullets from it. In fact if you actually payed attention, my character can't even do any of this yet. He can't even activate his powers yet. I think maybe you are afraid of a human becoming a little strong in the future or something like that..

Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:40 am

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Soul: You are no longer an approving mod. That is Coati and I's job. So you are spamming as well. Only VC's, Coati, and I are to post in the profiles section.

Slayer:

1). Ok, that is fixed

2). How slowly does his speed and strength increase? (Post wise)

3). How much of a speed boost? I am really tempted not to allow this, because you already state that your phase 2 gives you more power as you go along and if you can speed with every hit, it is the same thing as quadrupling it, but more.

4). Much better

5). You have yet to explain what you meant

6). In your Phase two Attack no. 1: He creates a sphere of energy over his head, then fires energy bullets from it?

You don't make a lot of sense. First of all, no it is not as powerful as quadruple speed. I don't think you are using much common sense if you are asking how fast is slowly. In phase two attack no.1, I pretty much explain it. Picture a sphere of blue spirit energy floating above someone firing energy bullets from it. In fact if you actually payed attention, my character can't even do any of this yet. He can't even activate his powers yet. I think maybe you are afraid of a human becoming a little strong in the future or something like that..

I make perfect sense, you just aren't understanding it. Do not assume I am not paying attention. I am paying attention, what you need to realize is that having a sour attitude does not help you here. I know he cannot activate his power, like you said before this is for future notice. So we do not have problems in the future. I am not afraid of a human becomming strong. I am Captain of Squad 10 and a Master of Heuco Mundo. WHat do I have to fear from a human with speed? I am watching out for those who are not as strong as I, Soul, Oni, Zechs, or any of the other mods.

Now, you ask what I mean by how slowly does your speed and strength increase? THis is what you said:

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Tenkai unlocks his true energy...His strength and speed SLOWLY begin to increase.

How slowly does it take for him to gain his speed? How many posts until his speed reaches the next level? Is that better to understand?

For your phase two attack, I was simply asking a question. I wanted to be sure that was what I was reading. Now, can he move with said sphere over his head? Or no?

As for your speed, again, I make perfect sense. This is what you said out of the entire second phase:

Ability:

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His strength and speed slowly begin Increase. His power grows during battle...Instead of growing weaker...he grows stronger.

Attack no. 2:

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Tenkai's speed increase (again) starting with doubling. With every hit...he absorbs...energy and uses it as a speed booster.

This is how it goes. You can speed gradually while fighting. (It's gaining to the point of double already). THen your speed increases AGAIN by doubling THAT. Then it increases further with every hit you land. Count it...that is over four times. Over Quadruple. Get my meaning?

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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:34 pm

Fine, let me edit it. And also isn't this supposed to be roleplaying, not a rpg? If it was a rpg maybe then you could be a little like what you are saying. If it is roleplaying, then loosen up. My power isn't just gonna be like DOUBLE every post, but more like during the time of combat my character makes a attack after that attack he shows almost no improvement in speed. The fighters go into a stareoff, my character's speed increases alot more since they are just standing there. I'm gonna edit the part where my character gains speed every time he hits. Instead, it will be for every time he manages to withdraw blood. If he makes like a little scratch, it will have little to no effect. If my character's sword like slices off someone's arm, all of the blood covering the blade will become my character's energy. K?

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