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 Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:16 pm
I usually consider this a game mainly because of how entertaining it can become. In my next post, I will have the beginning of a story written.
Each of the posts following are to go over the story thus far, and continue it for about a paragraph. (Usually considered 3-5 sentences, can be more, just don't finish the story all on your own.)
The only rules to follow:
1) Don't completely jump to a different storyline. If we are on the streets of New York in the middle of a conversation, don't have us in outer space fighting aliens in the next paragraph. You can change the story however you want, just make it flow like a normal story would.
2) Don't ramble. Unless the character is rambling of course. In general, don't try repeating the same thing constantly or rant about a specific thing unless you feel it is necessary for the story.
3) Use proper english & grammar. If we were sending this to a publisher, would you want them to see that?
4) Have fun!
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:19 pm
I was walking home without thinking of how I was getting there. I desprately wanted to forget where I was coming from. All I wanted to do was forget the thoughts that kept creeping into my mind. I went to search for my lighter in my pocket, and thats when I heard it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 9:29 pm
((alright. let me try this out.))
it was a car or maybe a truck?
i didn't see the crash clearly, i just heard the impact and turned around just in time to see it explode. i was lifted up, everything was blurred, the heat was unbearable. as i fell backwards, i saw an object fly past my face, but it was too fast and i didn't see it clearly.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:42 am
(I do this stuff all the time... with my twin shared stories rock)
The next thing I know I'm waking up in the hospital, surrounded by all types of monitors and machines. I barely have time to sit up before a nurse walks into the room sqwauks(SP?) at me and rushes out of the room again. My head feels like it's been run over by a mac truck so I don't think about it to much, must of hit my head when I fell.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:44 am
No more than a minute later, a handful of people entered the room. My vision had begun to blur again, so I couldn't tell who they were. At least one was the nurse who had been in moments before. I could tell by the familiar squak that she repeated upon entering.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:32 am
they talked hurriedly, almost in a panic. the nurse sticks a needle in my arm, soon my vision begins to fade and my head begins to throb.
i felt like my blood was boiling. everything got dark, and soon, everything was silent again.
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 2:01 pm
I wake up again, but in no familiar place. The only light in the room is a blacklight. I get up and find that my shirt happens to be missing. I start looking around and am shocked by what I see.
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:30 pm
bars. steel bars.
i was sitting in some kind of cell. i walked up to the to the bars and tried to look out, my head wouldn't fit. i stepped back, looked around. what was going on? where am i? why did my head hurt so much?
the questions were interupted by the sound of approaching footsteps.
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:36 am
The woman who walked up was none other than the nurse who had been back in the hospital room.
"Who are you? Where am I & why am I here?" I demanded. I hate not knowing. Even if it's something I want to forget, at least I'll have known.
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:11 am
The nurse gave a kind smile.
"I'm Nurse Joy and you're at the Hentai Fantasy Hospital where all your fantasies...don't necessarily come true, but we do our best to make it..." Nurse Joy pauses for a moment as her smile turns into an evil looking grin. "...You're going to be part of a snuff film."
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:44 pm
I'm oddly horrified by this prospect as I gape at the strange nurse before me. "Snuff film?!" I sputter "I'm not sure what that is but I'm pretty sure you could find a willing participant?!" She smiles mysteriously at me and dissappears back into the dark... leaving me to sit in silnece for what feels like hours.
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:15 pm
after some thought i decided that i had to get out of this place.
if they had to kidnap me to get me to participate this film was bound to end badly for me.
i got up and looked around.
no windows and the only exit was blocked by heavy bars. i tried to squeeze out, no good. i looked at the lock and saw that the only thing keeping this door closed was a thin steel bar. if only i could break it.
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:50 am
I turned around to search and see what else was in the cell with me. I could barely tell what some things were thanks to the poor lighting. I heard a noise again & as I turned, I tripped.
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:41 pm
A nurse with red hair walks in and quickly sets up chart. She
ignores the patient on the floor and begins explaining what a
snuff film is.
"Ahem...a snuff film or snuff movie is a motion picture genre that
depicts the actual death or murder of a person or people, without
the aid of special effects, for the express purpose of distribution
and entertainment or financial exploitation."
With that, she puts away the chart and
walks away locking the door behind her.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:01 pm
i got up and ran to the door.
too late, it was locked.
so, they were going to kill me. without even asking if i was ok with it or offering some form of payment, the bastards. i looked at the door, it was locked again but the hinges looked rusted and i might be able to break the door open if i hit it with enough force. i kicked it. nothing happened.
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