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 Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:57 pm
ROSES
Just one glance.
I'm left gasping for breath,
A stom of emotions,
I'm struggling to tear my eyes away,
Tripping over my own thoughts.
One more look.
I feel like dancing,
A flame sparks inside me,
I'm flying.
Another tiny peek.
I feel warm all over,
Now I'm imagining
Roses.
I come back down to earth,
Dizzy.
He looked at me three times.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:16 am
I shivered as the room swam into my view. The hard, ice blue tile felt cold against my face. I became faintly aware of whispering from just outside the door. They sounded angry. I couldn't tell what they were saying they were talking so fast.
I heard a muffled sigh.
"She's awake."
Everything stopped.
Footsteps echoed across the long room, reverberating off the walls and pounding on my eardrums. A face swam into my field of vision...
i wrote this a long time ago and it's unfinished, if you want i might do a rewrite (i've gotten much better) and add to it then post it again ^^ but you gotta tell me
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:14 am
these are very cool. i'd like someone to review my work but i dont want to post it on here just yet...would you read a few of my poems? pm me if you would like to please. smile
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:54 am
*blinks*hmm you're very good,I'd like to see more of the second one btw,its something that fits my tastes nicely
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:22 am
InkSpiralMystique *blinks*hmm you're very good,I'd like to see more of the second one btw,its something that fits my tastes nicely i write a lot like that, and i would post more but *tears up* i lost all my stories and poems! i dont know where they are or if someone stole them or what! crying
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:55 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:59 pm
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