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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:42 am


- Username: Dragon_of_red
- Character Name: Evela Akkenai
- Pronunciation of the Name: Eve-ay-la Ack-n-eye
- Character Rank: Vice Captain
- Sexuality Heterosexual
- Character Personality Evela is a cheerful character. He almost always finds the humor in situations. The only time when he is not a happy person, is when someone around him is doing something wrong, or he is bored. He speaks very informally, even to his superiors, which lands him in a lot of trouble. He does not get angry very often. it just happens every so often, when he is, he gets very hasty and rushes into things.
- Character Likes: Almost everything. Music and anything that can ocuppy his mind e.g. Learning.
- Character Dislikes: Anything that causes depression or Sadness. Nothing happening.
- Character Age:

[Human Age] Eh? What do I add here?

[Shinigami Age] 337

- Character Birthday: 18th of June
- Character Zodiac Sign: Gemini
- Character Blood Type: O-
- Bio: Evela had a quite short life. Only living until he was 35. He spent his entire life playing concerts for people, being in a band ever since he could play an instrument.

He started with playing guitar in a Metal band with his friends; he was the singer and lead guitarist. They did mediocre for several years before they decided to break up the band so they could focus on their school work. Evela didn’t like the band breaking up but he loved the extra study time he was able to get. Spending Two Years straight studying, he passed with flying colours and was able to go to any University of his choice. He decided to go fly to the nearest big city and study Chemistry there.

By the first month there, he was already in 3 bands, singing in 2 and playing guitar in the other. The bands ranged from Metal, to Techno, to a soft rock one. He somehow found the time to be in all of these bands, practise and still excell at his studies.

He stayed at University until he obtained his PhD. None of his bands really did anything special. So he left them to search for a better job in a new town, he was sick of this place. When he arrived at his new job, a research facility designed to help cure diseases. Quickly he was able to find some helpful things to cure some minor diseases. Nothing major, but he was doing quite well for himself.

He was asked to join an old friend’s band who had kept with his music more than Evela. And had made a large fan base for himself. Evela agreed readily, he felt his talents were being wasted at the research institute, so he left and joined his friend on the road.

After 5 years with his new band, with 3 Albums, all doing modestly well, and a few million dollars, his life felt empty. He brought up his concerns with the band but they could not afford to lose him. They let him change up their live shows, which made him immensely happy. He went back to him chemistry roots and began making pyrotechnics for the shows. He made a name for his band at the end of each show, he would find some chemicals, douse himself in them, and light himself on fire, having a range of colourful flames reach off of him. It would only last for the last few seconds of the final song, but it added extra depth into his songs.

On his last show, he was going to do his trick again, but he though it would be better if it was in the middle of his guitar solo. He got the roadie to light him on fire mid solo. It worked fine, but by the end of the song he was really feeling it, the band however did not know that, and the roadie kept putting more and more chemicals on him, making the flames brighter and more colourful.

He yelled to stop, and to put him out but the roadie just threw some dangerous chemicals his way, some went into his mouth. He stopped playing and clutched his throat, he new he was going to die. It was sodium; he would almost explode from the inside.

He ran off the stage and collapsed in the green room, still alight. By the time they had put him out, the sodium had done his job and he was already dead.

After Death:

He spent another year haunting that Music theatre, he had just enough connection to still play some of the instruments. A Soul Reaper came past to send him to soul society. He was nice enough and brought back a few of the instruments for him.

He was sent to 75th district, he could not find anyone to allow him into his family, so he spent 1 human year on the street, playing his guitar and busking for anything he needed.

During his year of busking, he found that if he tries really hard, and concentrates on each note after they have left the guitar, he can make people stay for longer, and give him better stuff. He tried his trick on a wandering Soul Reaper, he noticed what he was doing as a primitive form of using his reiatsu. He asked if he wanted to go the Acedmy to learn how to refine it. Evela agreed.

At the Soul Reaper Academy:

Evela had fun at the Academy, finally he was learning and had something to stimulate his brain again. He applied himself to everything. There was only one thing he was not good at, it was Kido. No matter how he tried, he could not get as good as everyone else, so he stayed almost bottom of the class for it.

He never trained with his hand to hand, he did not find it as interesting as playing with his sword.

After he had graduated, he was asked which division he preffered to be in. Once he saw the research and science division, he wanted to join that one. He has spent the last few hundred years working his way up the ladder of the research department.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:33 am


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- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: Caucasian. A Slight Tan.
- Character Height: 6 Foot 2 Inches
- Character Hair Colour: A constant white. It has small dark tips spread around his hair.
- Character Hair Length/ Style Evela's hair is spiky and in general all over the place. It goes down to the base of his neck.
- Character Eye Colour: A dark shade of Brown, with a hint of red in there.
- Character Description: Evela is pretty skinny, although he does have wiry muscles, it is enough to be noticable through his clothes, just a little bit.
- Character Attire: Evela wears the shinigami uniform with the closest ratio of White to Black. He lost his left hand sleeve up to the elbow, leaving threads hanging off it. He left the right side sleeve as it is. He Imprinted a Treble clef on the right shoulder side of his uniform, with the bass clef on the left shoulder.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:21 am


- Zanpakutō Name: Meikyoku (Famous Music)
- Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Meikyoku stands at 6 “ 5.. He has pitch black hair that goes down a few inches past his shoulders. He wears an open trench coat that goes all the way down to his knees. He carries many instruments with him, horned instruments around his belt, with a guitar on his back.
- Zanpakutō Sealed Form: Looks like that In its sealed form, it looks like a long sword. With a small blade shooting up from the grip for protection of the swordsman’s hand.
- Zanpakutō Shikai Activation Statement: Make it Loud!
- Zanpakutō Shikai Name: Ketatamashii Meikyoku (Piercing Music)
- Zanpakutō Shikai Appearance The Shikai opens to a long meter and a half version of the sealed form. With 3 small metallic strings running down the length of it, with some small indentations in the side of the sword like the frets running down a guitar.
- Zanpakutō Shikai Abilities Chouonsoku Boutou (Sonic Boom) – Sends a Shockwaveof sound in the direction of the swinging sword. He uses a little bit of reiatsu to make the strings vibrate louder, and the swinging of the sword does the rest, therefore, only using a small amount of reiatsu, it is able to be used many times. The soundwave goes in a straight line, almost like a ball of sound. It kicks up whatever it goes past, dust, grass, small rocks, and adds to the power of it. As with most sound attacks, it is better used short range, as its power disapates the further it is from the source. By 200m, it is almost rendered useless.
Rourou Toku: (Full-Sound Shield) – Striking a chord with the strings on his blade, Evela sends a short amplified burst, stopping all projectiles in the radius. The duration, intensity and range all depend on what fret on his Shikai he uses. The lower the number, the lower intensity, but higher the range. The highest number (24), only has the energy to reach 50cm in front of him, but his highly powerful.
Shou Ishiki (Destroy the Senses) – Hitting certain notes as sending his Reiatsu along the sound waves, he can make whoever hears it, go into a trance. This trance can only last 3 minutes (3 posts), and requires Evela's full attention. It wastes a lot or Reiatsu using, so He doesn't use it very often, mainly on 2 on 1 situations, where he can sit down, relax and play.
- Achieved? Yes



- Zanpakutō Bankai Name: Tenrai Meikyoku (Divine Famous Music)
- Zanpakutō Bankai Appearance: Link to Sword: Here The sword turns into a Broadsword, allowing 7 strings to be on the sword. Having the hand guard turning into wider blades spreading around to form an axe shape. It has small holes throught the lenght of the sword, used to amplify the sound waves.
- Zanpakutō Bankai Abilities Banka hasaki (Song Of Blades) – By playing the guitar very fast, he can create little sound waves of music, about the size of small daggers, and send them towards his opponent. They fly at the speed of sound (Around 300m per second) and can go through steel if played right infront of it, by 200m, they are useless and are just small pufts of wind.
- Sentou hibiki (The Fist Sound) – Like Destroy The Senses, Evela plays a song, but instead of sending them into a trance, it can debuff enemys or buff allys.
1- Lower the enemys strentgh,
2- Lower the enemies speed,
3- Raise allies strength,
4- Raise allies speed,
5- Raises enemy's hearing, allowing for more powerful sound based attacks.
Only 1 can be used at a time, but does not require his full attnetion. He can play it once, and it lasts for 5 minutes (5 posts).
- Ijou hibiki (Surrounding Sound) – Captures the sound from the guitar and can send it off to where he wishes. This is the only attack that doesnt dissapate the further away it gets from him. The bubble of reiatsu keeps the sound together, untill releasing it in a sudden burst. Used primarily for sneak attacks. 50 can be made in a rown, creating 'mines' around the battlefield.
- Zanpakutō Bankai Time Able to Hold: Non-Existent.
- Achieved? No
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:38 am


Kido

- Bakudō: 1. Restrain (塞, sai) -Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
4. Crawling Rope (這縄, hainawa) -An energy rope entangles a target's arms.
21. Red Smoke Escape (赤煙遁, sekienton) -Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.

- Hadō: 1. Thrust (衝, shō) -Pushes the target away from the caster.

4. White Lightning (白雷, byakurai) -Fires a concentrated bolt of white lightning from the caster's forefinger.


- Healing spells:

Other

- Hand-to-hand combat: (Hakuda)
Rookie

- Agility: (Hohō)
Fast/Flexible

- Swordsmanship: (Zanjutsu)
Expert

- Shunpo:
Medium

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:50 pm


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Is this profile finished or not?


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:34 pm


I think it is finsihed... Do I need to add more onto it?

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Well I think you need a lot more details explaining things. How long does your Zanpakuto abilities last? How can they be stopped? Things like that ya know? Then for your bio, please explain things. What happened in Rukongai? Look at more profiles if you need an example to follow to. Like my Captain-Commander. Just a recommendation. Then your kido. Unless you have a deemed rank, you can't just achieve them. You must train to get them. Another one of my pet peeves with profiles is not enough description on the abilities. Then "Evela opts to choose the shinigami uniform" What does "opts" mean? Like changes? But my whole thing is to just put more detail.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:48 pm


Okay then, Ill try and put more detail in it when I can. Which will most likely be in a few hours...

It was my first time doing a really detailed Profile, so I'm not used to putting heaps of detail in, and I just stuck by the template I had...

And may I ask, what do I do with my Kido then?

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:45 pm


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Well I think you need a lot more details explaining things. How long does your Zanpakuto abilities last? How can they be stopped? Things like that ya know? Then for your bio, please explain things. What happened in Rukongai? Look at more profiles if you need an example to follow to. Like my Captain-Commander. Just a recommendation. Then your kido. Unless you have a deemed rank, you can't just achieve them. You must train to get them. Another one of my pet peeves with profiles is not enough description on the abilities. Then "Evela opts to choose the shinigami uniform" What does "opts" mean? Like changes? But my whole thing is to just put more detail.


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All right... I tried to Edit most of it and expand o some points, making some clearer and just in general, trying to add more.

How is it now?
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:38 pm


I'll need a RP example for the rank. But approved.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:11 pm


Yay... Does it have it have to be from a Bleach one though, cause I've never been in one before...
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:12 pm


I'd like that.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:20 pm


So do I write one up for Bleach? Or just copy and paste a random one?
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:27 pm


Whatever.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:35 pm


Well... This one is from a Kingdom hearts rp...

"Hai!" Evela said as he swung his weapon down, striking his opponent. His opponent was barely able to block it, but he manages a quick counter attack directed towards Evela's mid section. Evela bought his weapon around to block it easily, it was a miss matched fight.

Evela flicks his sword up sharply, sending his opponents weapon flying out of his hands, making the spectators around him dodge. Evela raised his weapon for the final attack. He struck down fast and hard, pulling it at the last second, and tapping his student on the head.

"Good Try, You are getting better" Evela remarks in a cheery tone towards his student. He was teaching at his Dojo how to properly fight. He was testing his students, they were no way near enough to hit him, but they are good enough to earn the next rank. He bent down to be even with his student's hight. He ruffled his hair, "I hope that little hit teaches you to hold your Sword better." Referring to how easily it was hit out of his hand.

He stands back up and turns towards the rest of his students, "I hope you all learnt something from this demonstration." They all murmured a yes or bobbed their head in agreement. "I am glad to say, that everyone passed, and if they want, they can advance to the next level. It's a fair bit harder though. Feel free to leave. I get paid either way." Evela jests towards his students.

He walks over to pick up the students Kendo stick that he sent flying. It was further away than he though. Maybe I shouldn't have done it so hard... Evela thinks to himself.

After congratulating all the students again, he let them go. He stands at the front saying yet another congratulation towards the children. He watched their excitement on their faces while they told their parents what they did. He was proud of himself. Some of these children will grow up to protect this country. Maybe one or 2 will surpass me and kill the Heartless... I must ask Merlin how likely that would be...

He looks to the sky, he watches as a shooting star flies across his vision. He smiles to himself and looks back down.

A loud smash is heard around the corner, and a high pitched woman's scream, Evela wastes not time in sprinting around the corner, slowly followed by the children then their parents.
Evela makes it first and sees a young girl of about 17 years of age, surrounded by Giant Heartless. It was a floating armoury. Its body was made up of armour, and had many weapons around it. It was standing in front of a hole through the wall, quite obviously had gone through it. It was looking straight at the girl, poised to strike.

Evela did not even break his stride, he cast a fireball towards the back of his head to turn it around and stop it from harming the girl. It connects and makes it lurch forward, leaving and opening for Evela. He jumped up onto its back, mid air calling both Redemption and Tenebrex out. Both weapons pierce the armour's head, going straight through, killing it instantly. It disappears in a puff of smoke, a heart flies into the air.

Evela walks over to the girl and helps her up, "Are you okay?" He asks. She nods quickly, before running off. He turns around to see the group from the Dojo, looking worried at the scene. Oh.... They better not have seen any of this... He thought to himself. They all screamed in unison, turned around and ran.

Evela feared the worst, calling out both keyblades again and turning around, swinging his weapons in a sweeping motion. Connected on a Shadow. Turning it into a puff of smoke.
He looks further down his sight, and sees hundreds of heartless, big and small, ransacking the city. Well... Looks like I have work to do. Before running out into the fray.

It's the introduction post. I can post more if you would like.
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