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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 1:10 pm


http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/LastScan-2.jpg
There are a few changes since i last uploaded this, i need help with the back and the muscles of the back.
I also for whatever reason cant understand perspective, so if anyone could help i would appreciate it.

and please no 'i love it!' or 'i hate it!'
tell me why you like it, why you hate it, and how it can be imporved, please dont ask about a background i plan on making one eventually.
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 1:35 pm


You could always use a reference image to help you draw the back muscles. I'd say work on the hand, and the pants look to smooth near the waist area, but then again maybe thats what you are going for.

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:16 pm


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The hand on the shoulder definitely needs working on. The thumb, especially looks out of proportion.


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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:28 pm


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You could always use a reference image to help you draw the back muscles. I'd say work on the hand, and the pants look to smooth near the waist area, but then again maybe thats what you are going for.


It depends on which outfit i go with
this is my oc, and i plan on giving him at least two outifts, one has fairly tight pants (looser on bottom) and the other has looser pants.
I have tried using a referance picture, its hard to find one xp

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:31 pm


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The hand on the shoulder definitely needs working on. The thumb, especially looks out of proportion.


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Curse my incabability to draw hands!
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Thanks, will work on that
(would it be sad to say that is one of the better hands ive ever drawn?)
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:42 pm


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That's not too bad. Everyone has their weaknesses and hands are often very tricky, I certainly avoid drawing them wherever possible.

Try and find a reference for the hand, or if you can't find one take one of your own. When I was practicing drawing hands I was taking pictures of my own hands to use as a reference a lot!



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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 2:55 pm


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That's not too bad. Everyone has their weaknesses and hands are often very tricky, I certainly avoid drawing them wherever possible.

Try and find a reference for the hand, or if you can't find one take one of your own. When I was practicing drawing hands I was taking pictures of my own hands to use as a reference a lot!



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hands are hard but my weakness are faces, eyes especially
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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 3:25 pm


If you are going for a scrannier look, then it is a basics of what a thinner male would look like. >3

You have the basic line to show his shoulder blades, and his spine. I do feel that you are missing some folds in the fabric, but thats just where you look up pictures of males in tight pants. >DDDDDD And look at their asses. XDDDD

Any ways, as far as the back... I can see if I can come up with something as far as a ref picture.

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 3:42 pm


roseankitty
If you are going for a scrannier look, then it is a basics of what a thinner male would look like. >3

You have the basic line to show his shoulder blades, and his spine. I do feel that you are missing some folds in the fabric, but thats just where you look up pictures of males in tight pants. >DDDDDD And look at their asses. XDDDD

Any ways, as far as the back... I can see if I can come up with something as far as a ref picture.


I noticed that with the way the arms are positioned the arm just hanging down by his side, that shoulder blade would stick out, while the other one wouldnt.
I think the line for the spine doesnt seem right in the way it looks, like it would look differnt on a normal person.
I probably am missing some folds, i will work on the clothes more after i decide which outfit im going with rofl

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 4:09 pm


mkay... I don't use the program I used all that often, so the figure isn't perfect... >.< The right shoulder is a bit messed up, and it is opposite your picture! Go figure... ^^;;; But Poser is a hard program, and I have no training in it.. but I was able to come up with this for you:

Poser Figure

>3 Idk if that helps or not -mind you the shoulder is a bit off... >.<- but thought I would offer.. >3

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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 4:13 pm


roseankitty
mkay... I don't use the program I used all that often, so the figure isn't perfect... >.< The right shoulder is a bit messed up, and it is opposite your picture! Go figure... ^^;;; But Poser is a hard program, and I have no training in it.. but I was able to come up with this for you:

Poser Figure

>3 Idk if that helps or not -mind you the shoulder is a bit off... >.<- but thought I would offer.. >3


I think this should be helpful
Thank you very much heart
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 4:15 pm


Vanna1994
roseankitty
mkay... I don't use the program I used all that often, so the figure isn't perfect... >.< The right shoulder is a bit messed up, and it is opposite your picture! Go figure... ^^;;; But Poser is a hard program, and I have no training in it.. but I was able to come up with this for you:

Poser Figure

>3 Idk if that helps or not -mind you the shoulder is a bit off... >.<- but thought I would offer.. >3


I think this should be helpful
Thank you very much heart


hehe, no problem. >3 I know how hard it can be to find that ref picture. >3

roseankitty

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