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Lovely Morningstar

PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:38 pm



A simple act of hurting and pain with the intensity of the heat of the act,
you burned them, from inside out, their inside scarred their mind a crisp,
I saw the scars of one who was burned she sobbed until she could no longer stop
"My scars are too deep!" she cried as she held her head against the desk.
The act was hot for both, one was painful the other was fine.

one felt the heat of the sun, the other felt a sunny day.

I asked the victim "How did he burn you?"
With a saddned look she replied "He burned me on the inside"
 
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:07 pm


i can feel the emotion coming from the girl. it's very strong. defined. great job.

marieaskelinton

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