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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 2:21 pm

Lunar Rose

A rose so white
Yet so dark
Sharp and ragged thorns
Soft and Smooth Petals
its Shimmers in the moon light
It hides in the Shadows of dawn
Frail and beautifull
Dangerous and gaurded
Shaming other roses
as it shimmers and glows
A rose so divine
With a crule nature
A white coating
With a black inside
The Lunar Rose

that is one of my good poems and im not Gay! stare
tell me what you think

please exuse the spelling

Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 2:50 pm

Not bad zebra. Not bad. ninja

Water Faerie Naomi
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Damian rane

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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 3:21 pm

*zebra* thanks.. i think

Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 3:44 pm

Damian rane

*zebra* thanks.. i think

I am saying its not bad. That means its good. That is a complement.

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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 3:45 pm

*zebra* oh sorry im having a mental melt down so i can't think streight my bad xd

Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 4:03 pm

Damian rane

*zebra* oh sorry im having a mental melt down so i can't think streight my bad xd

Darn. You logged off.

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Damian rane

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Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 10:38 am

*Zebra* but i logged back on..

Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 1:44 pm

Damian rane

*Zebra* but i logged back on..

Yes. I don't mind. ^.^
Oh. I got a P.M....?

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Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 2:13 pm

*Zebra* ooh a P.M

Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 5:23 pm

Friend. >_>

Water Faerie Naomi
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Damian rane

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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:14 am

*Zebra* i got a wack in the face >.>
stupid volly ball

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:28 am

Dirps of red.

the sweat on my brow
the ache of my Stomach
My head spins
I clutch my fits
the silver tint
and the sharp edge
shanking finger tips
quivering flesh
......
dripples of red
stain the clean silver tint
and shap edge
flesh is open
my head feels like it can fly
the flesh is numb
it feels nothing
the blood keeps coming
its not stopping
it justs keep coming

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Water Faerie Naomi
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:35 pm

Damian rane

*Zebra* i got a wack in the face >.>
stupid volly ball

Thats nothing, I used to get hit by a basket ball 'cause people suck at passing. ^^

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:37 pm

Damian rane

Dirps of red.

the sweat on my brow
the ache of my Stomach
My head spins
I clutch my fits
the silver tint
and the sharp edge
shanking finger tips
quivering flesh
......
dripples of red
stain the clean silver tint
and shap edge
flesh is open
my head feels like it can fly
the flesh is numb
it feels nothing
the blood keeps coming
its not stopping
it justs keep coming

Thats why you don't cut. =p

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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:21 pm

so far so good. i like both - but i favor lunar rose a lot more.

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