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PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:19 pm


Name: Neida Ortizz
Appearance Age: 25
Actual Age: 642
Sex: Female
Height: 5' 4'' (162.56 cm)
Weight: 131lbs (59.420 kg)
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown almost black
Personality: Neida's aspect of death is fear, not the fear she holds. She's not afraid of death, what she fears most is dying in vain and herself. She strives to be stronger, and has a strive to be something and someone different then when she was human; even though those memories are no longer a hindrance. She hates being a burden to comrades and hates being looked after. If she is saved in a battle, or an attack is blocked that was meaning to kill her, she's liable to strike the person dead who saved her, then the b*****d who threw the cheap shot. Neida will tell you if she hates you or if she cannot tolerate you. She's not shy on words when she's dealing with someone she can't stand. She believes that if you are going to have a group, then attacking in a group will prove to be more successful; so she dislikes when someone goes out of their way to be indifferent from a group. She dislikes being complacent though. She does not mind fighting, but she does not see a sense in needless killing and slaughter. A quick death though does not always cause fear. So Neida is torn between the two decisions during a fight.

Neida lacks patience for everything possible - except for the Sephira higher ranks (unless she butts heads with them). But she rarely outwardly shows it. She will not wait for an enemy to recover before she is upon them again, striking them down. Neida has a usual outward calm visage; she sometimes looses this when she has lost her patience. Neida's voice is not one that is void of motions, she usually speaks like any other well mannered woman. Neida has a low tolerance for man and woman, she hates how people easily succumb to carnal feelings of lust and greed. She is a very old fashioned woman; in that, she believes woman should not flaunt their curves in front of people. Neida solely believes in the "Strike first, ask and talk later" sort of approach.
Bio: When Neida was human, she lived during the 14th century. She was an imported slave who was forced to work on the Great Wall of China till it is finish or she died. The long grueling hours caused her to become hardened at heart. Her back was torn to pieces by the harsh slave drivers. Fellow slaves and even criminals were among her predicament. She didn't understand a word they said to her, they would often spit, taunt, and tease her with horrendous acts. She regretted not taking a guardsmen sword while he was not paying attention and drive it down his twisted evil throat.

Though, she never acted on this impulse. She felt pity for these man for having such malice towards the same race. She was truly disgusted with them. Neida slowly grew to hate humans and everything they stood for, she saw them as even lower then a dong beetle. Finally reaching the end of her rope from the constant abuse; one day, she just laid down in the middle of her whipping and let them beat her to death. After finally hoping she would go somewhere better, she would open her eyes to see she was still where she was. She cursed herself and everyone around her. She screamed at the top of her lungs and pulled constantly at the Chain of Fate that was sunk into her body above her breast. She soon went through the process of becoming a hollow and devoured humans that had previously tortured her. Becoming a Hollow came at a cost, a cost that she would not much mind, since this road would eventually lead to power. She soon escaped to Hueco Mundo after being chased by Shinigami; there, she traveled up the food chain of hollowism.

Neida's earliest memories that she has is when she was still a newly formed Adjuchas. She hated life... and wished only to see freedom from the constant devouring of hollows that she had to do in order to stay her current state. After some couple hundred years of doing so, and finally becoming Vasto Lorde, she still did not fill free from her bondage of being a hollow. She'd always wondered if there was an opposite side to her predicaments and wonder if she could flip the coin of her life. Soon, she found ways of becoming something greater, an Arrancar, which she obtained with a full grasp.
Rank: Gevurah Sephira
Mask Fragment: Around her neck, like a choker. On the left side of her head like a hair accessory.
Paths: N/A She does not have the patience for them.

Appearance: [here](Basically, everything in the picture is the same besides the katana.)
PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:22 pm


Zanpakutō

Zanpakutō Name: Libertad (Spanish for Freedom)
Zanpakutō Appearance: [Bo Staff form] [Swords inside Bo Staff] Her Zanpakutō is usually carried in either hand. Her Zanpakutō is about 5 feet long. And the swords inside of it are about 3 1/2 feet long each.
Resurrección: [here] (larger bust to match her pre-Resurrección form)
  • "Libertad a través de la calma" (Spanish for 'Freedom through calmness')is the command Neida uses to release her Zanpakutō to enter her Resurrección. Her Zanpakuto turns into reishi and is able to be formed whenever needed via a sword or staff. This Resurrección to her former/similar self is her at her Vasto Lorde form. What Neida lacks in long distant strong projectile attacks, her body makes it up in speed and strength. Her Reiryoku comes under her submission as she's able to freely use it to its absolute without waste.

    • El aumento de Arrancar
      Type: Sustained/Passive/Activated
      (Spanish for The Augmentation To Tear Off) One of her Resurrección's main powers is to augment all of her normal Arrancar abilities. Though, this doesn't mean that is all that means of attack she has. She's still got a few original attacks. Besides techniques and abilities, Neida's normal Speed, Strength, and Hierro are also augmented.
      • Increases Hueco to 12/10
      • Increases Fuerza-Strength 13/10
      • Increases Reiatsu-Pressure to 13/10
      • Increases Reiatsu-Hierro to 13/10
      • Increases Agilidad-Speed to 13/10
      • Increases Agilidad-Movement to 13/10

      • Cero huelga
        Type: Offensive, then continuous through out attack's finish
        Spanish for 'Zero strike'): Is a technique where a beam of Cero is create at such a fine point, and is even further condensed, that the size of this technique is small. The blast is fired out about the size of a pen, and has tremendous strength. The ability to quickly charge and fire this technique makes it note worthy. Though, unlike most smaller sized moves, this one as a more punch than piercing capabilities. Along with that, is a spiraling effect; in that, if a target is struck they'll spin - and if they are close to it, they will be drawn to the strike. The speed in which this technique travels is slightly faster than a traditional Cero. This technique is able to be concentrated and fired from almost any part of the users body except for buttocks, groin, bottoms of feet, and back side.
        • Can damage those with a 13/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
        • 8x use.

      • Sonído Instantáneo
        Type: Instantaneous/Activated/Offensive/Defensive
        (Spanish for 'Instant Sound') When she executes the technique, if one is able to follow, they will notice that her entire body is under the affects of the technique. So essentially, she's able to make use of this, and can create high-speed attacks with her hands, legs, etc.
        • Increases Agilidad-Movement to 14/10 the instant it's executed.

      • Insano Bala
        Type: Activated/Offensive/Defensive/Counter-Attack
        (Spanish for 'Insane Bullet') A sphere of Reiryoku surrounds Neida's body as she concentrates an energy similar to that of a Bala blast. This technique is used when there are multiple targets, as she's able to control of Bala blast from the sphere when combined with Pesquisa Diligente - which is able to deduce the targets placement. The sphere of Reiryoku is incapable of blocking an sort of attacks, as it's not condensed and solid enough too. But, that Bala blast it creates are stronger than normal. While the sphere is being concentrated, Neida is capable of firing the shots from in rapid succession. The shots travel faster than normal Balas.
        • Capable of damaging those with 10/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
        • 20x use.

      • Rápida Garganta
        Type: Activated/Evasive/Traversal
        (Spanish for 'Quick Throat') Unlike Neida's normal Garganta, this is simply reserved for a quick teleportation; the restriction is, is that she cannot use it to travel from the Human World to Hueco Mundo, or vice versa. Though, she is able to travel a considerable amount of distances with one Rápida Garganta; which is drawn on her body where she pleases it to be. She executes this ability by making a small incision with the nail of her left pointer finger on the body part in question.
        • By making the incision upon her sternum, Neida's entire body is turned into a pseudo-garganta and can teleport long to short distances.
        • By making the incision on any limb, a miniature garganta is formed at the base of that limb (shoulder or hip) and causes the limb to be transported and appear at another point in space, sticking out of the second mini-garganta. If at any point, the garganta is forcefully closed, loss of limb is imminent. If the incision is made below the navel, the garganta will open at her waist, and if made on the forehead, it will open at her neck.

      • Pesquisa Diligente
        Type:Activated/Detection
        (Spanish for 'Thorough Inquiry') Neida's Pesquisa Diligente is a quick invisible sonar that is sent out from her body that can detect invisible targets and attacks, as well as having the normal abilities of a Pesquisa. It is capable of detecting a Shunpo, Sonído, and even a Quincy's Hirenkyaku, while that target is using this type of technique and moving with it - the challenge comes with keeping up with the movement of the target. Through mastery, she's been able to negate the cool down for this technique.


Resurrección: Segunda Etapa

  • Más allá de la Libertad (Spanish for ["Beyond Freedom"]) Neida gains an armor like skin around her body. Más allá de la Libertad is Neida's Segunda Etapa. Her armor has a white-blue hue to it, and her face becomes hidden. Her sight is collected from anywhere on her body, so she's able to see behind herself without turning her head. While in Segunda Etapa - the same as her first Resurrección - she is able to reproduce her Bo Staff -or sword- out of reishi. She grows in height as well, to 5' 7".
    • Increases Hueco to 15/10
    • Increases Fuerza-Strength 14/10
    • Increases Reiatsu-Pressure to 14/10
    • Increases Reiatsu-Hierro to 14/10
    • Increases Agilidad-Speed to 15/10
    • Increases Agilidad-Movement to 15/10

    • Doble Cero Oscuras (Double Black Hollow Flash) Just like the name hints to, Neida is able to fire off two Cero Oscuras at once from her hands or chest. If fired from her chest, she can direct the blast diagonally.
      • Can damage those with a 15/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
      • 4x use. Does not count toward regular Cero Oscuras

    • Bala Verdadera (True Bullet) Neida unleashes a Bala which looks like any normal Bala, but it is capable of splitting into three hundred smaller Balas; it's used to block wide attacks and to cause an enemy to slow down or dash through the blasts.
      • Capable of damaging those with 11/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
      • 15x use.

    • Sonido Ligero (Light Sound) The movements of her Sonido are barely audible (if they are heard, the sound will come after her appearing), as well as she is able to perform the same basics as Sonído Instantáneo: able to have any part of her body move with the speed of her Segunda Etapa Sonido. She cannot use it quick succession attacks, because the speed and strength of her attack will literally rip her body apart. Though with her High-Speed Regeneration she is able to perform more attacks, but doing so will quickly wear her out.
      • Increases Agilidad-Movement to 14/10.

    • Curva Gran Rey Cero (Royal Hollow Flash Curve) Neida is able to bend her Gran Rey Cero blast, having it able to turn on the dime at the flick of her wrist. She is also able to split the beam in half, but this also splits the power in half as well.
      • Can damage those with a 13/10 in Armor and Hierro normally

    • Super Rápida Garganta (Super Quick Throat) Just like her Resurrección, she is unable to travel between Human World to Hueco Mundo, etc... though with Super Rápida Garganta, she is able to travel half of the size of the earth in one bound. And she is no longer limited to cutting herself with her finger; virtually being able to create one while her Reiryoku allows it. Though this technique does take a good amount of this energy.
    • Siempre Pesquisa (Always Inquiry) Is a constant sonar always being emitted from her body, though is weaker on directly behind her neck. She is able to sense any sort of invisible or silent attacks/movements.
    • Cero Rápido (Rapid Zero) From one hand, Neida is able to fire a volley of a 100 Cero blast, but she is only able to do so from one hand at a time, or from her chest. Each strike can be individually directed into a discrete angle of her choosing, making this ability able to cover a wide spreed area.
      • Can damage those with a 11/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
      • 10x use. Each volley is counted per use, this does not count toward any other Cero.

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Keeper Of The Dogs

PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:23 pm


Special Abilities/Extra Weapons:

Sonído (響転 (ソニード), Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound", Japanese for "Sound Ceremony")
  • Description
    A technique used by Arrancar which allows them to move at extreme speeds, making it highly similar to the Hohō that Shinigami use. While somewhat similar to Hohō, Sonído appears to be more instinctual than Hohō, requiring no previous knowledge to perform. It also makes a different sound; rather than the swishing or sometimes silent Shunpo of the Shinigami, Sonído makes a booming or static sound.
  • Requirements
    • 1/10 in Agilidad - Movement.


Gemelos Sonído (双児響転 (ヘメロス・ソニード), Hemerosu Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound Twins", Japanese for "Twins Sound Ceremony")
  • Description
    Allows the user to create clone-like afterimages of his or herself by increasing the speed of their Sonído a little. Up to five clones can be created using this technique.
  • Requirements
    • 12/10 in Agilidad - Movement.


Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet")
  • Description
    Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.
    • Capable of damaging those with 4/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
    • Capable of damaging those with 9/10 in Armor and Hierro when the Arrancar has 9/10 in Hueco.
  • Requirements
    • 1/10 in Hueco.


Cero (虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash,")
  • Description
    This technique is an energy blast, it consists of firing a blast of concentrated spirit energy at the target. They are typically red in color, but the color may vary between Arrancar
    • Can damage those with a 6/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
    • Can damage those with a 10/10 in Armor and Hierro when the Arrancar has a 11/10 in Hueco.
  • Requirements
    • 3/10 in Hueco.


Curva Cero (Spanish for "Zero Curve)
  • Description Almost like her normal Cero, but she's able to bend and curve without moving any body part. Through training, Neida has been able to progress her abilities and allow herself to perform movement after execution of this attack. It takes a few extra moments to charge this attack.
    • Can damage those with a 7/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
    • Can damage those with a 11/10 in Armor and Hierro when the Arrancar has a 11/10 in Hueco.



Cero Doble (重奏虚閃 (セロ・ドーブル), sero dōburu; Spanish for "Double Zero", Japanese for "Heavy Performance Hollow Flash")
  • Description
    A variation of a Cero achieved by swallowing an opponent's Cero and then returning it to the opponent along with their own Cero.
    • Can damage those with 8/10 in Armor and Hierro.
  • Requirements
    • 6/10 in Hueco.


Gran Rey Cero (王虚の閃光 (グラン・レイ・セロ), guran rei sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash")
  • Description
    An extremely potent higher-level Cero, allowed to be used only by the Sephira. Gran Rey Cero is performed when an Arrancar draws blood from the Cero firing appendage with their Zanpakutō and mixing their blood with their original Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power, size, speed, and force, as well as a change of color. This Cero is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, and is capable of disturbing the fabric of space. When fired, it spins like a razor upon release and compress and decompress, due to the sheer speed and raw power. Unlike most Ceros that mainly take the shape of a sphere created by user and released in a huge blast wave, the Gran Rey Cero, when fired, keeps its sphere form, even after being fired in a huge blast wave. It is a drastically potent Cero and only Sephira are allowed to use it.
    • Can damage those with a 11/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
    • Can damage those with a 13/10 in Armor and Hierro when the Arrancar has a 15/10 in Hueco.
  • Requirements
    • 9/10 in Hueco.


Cero Oscuras (黒虚閃 (セロ・オスキュラス), sero osukyurasu; Spanish for "Dark Zero," Japanese for "Black Hollow Flash")
  • Description
    When using this technique, the Arrancar concentrates his or her vast spiritual energy with only his or her index finger into an condensed jet-black Cero with great might. The result of being used in their released state is a much greater Cero, exceeding even Gran Rey Cero, the ultimate Cero, and has been referred to as "a Sephira's fully-powered Cero." When fired, it covers any exposed light into absolute pitch darkness. The Cero Oscuras's range is vast, and is mighty enough to completely shatter a Hollow mask, critically injuring a Vizard in the process, and strong enough to destroy half of the dome over Las Noches.
    • Can damage those with a 15/10 in Armor and Hierro normally.
    • Can damage to those with a 17/10 in Armor and Hierro when the Arrancar has a 15/10 in Hueco.
  • Requirements
    • 11/10 in Hueco.


Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキス), Pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry", Japanese for "Probe Circuit")
  • Description
    An Arrancar's ability to detect, sense and gauge the amount of Reiatsu in his or her vicinity. It functions similarly to Sonar.
  • Requirements
    • 1/10 in Hueco.



Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity")
  • Description
    The method for Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows to move to and from Hueco Mundo. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.
  • Requirements
    • 3/10 in Hueco.


Negación (反膜 (ネガシオン), negashion; Spanish for "Negation," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane")
  • Description
    Energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field.


Caja Negación (反膜の匪 (カハ・ネガシオン), kaha negashion; Spanish for "Negation Box," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane of Negation")
  • Description
    A small cube meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their subordinates if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it is being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Sephira themselves, can escape given enough time.


Gonzui (魂吸, lit. "Soul Inhalation")
  • Description
    Is a supplementary technique used by Arrancar to devour as many souls as possible within a large radius to significantly restore their spiritual energy, while being content from the devouring of souls.
  • Requirements
    • 6/10 in Hueco.


High-Speed Regeneration (超速再生, Chōsoku Saisei; lit. "Ultra-Fast Regeneration")
  • Description
    A supplementary ability possessed by many Hollows, as well as some Shinigami that have undergone Hollowfication. It allows them to recover from any damage that they sustain by causing them to heal at an increased rate, closing the wounds on their body and causing any limbs that they have lost to grow back. While high-speed regeneration is indeed a powerful ability, it is not without its flaws. Despite the extent to which it can heal the body, internal organs such as the brain cannot be regenerated; if such irreparable damage is sustained, the rest of the body can continue to regenerate, though to no avail. In addition, if the body is damaged before it has the chance to heal, or if enough damage is inflicted on it at once, then it can be destroyed.
  • Requirements
    • 15/10 in Fuerza - Endurance.


Resurrección: Segunda Etapa (刀剣解放第二階層 (レスレクシオン・セグンダ・エターパ), resurekushion segunda etāpa; Spanish for "Resurrection Second Stage", Japanese for "Sword's Release: Second Level")
  • Description
    A second form to the Arrancar's Resurrección, granted only to those who have honed their Resurrección's abilities above and beyond mastery.
  • Requirements
    • A 14/15 in Armas - Resurrección.


Point System

  • Armas 10/10
    • Resurrección - 15/10
      The Arrancar's Segunda Etapa is at full power and the Arrancar is touted as a master of their Resurrección in it's entirety.
    • Swordsmanship - 5/10
      The Arrancar's Swordsmanship is starting to become more refined. They can perform thrusts and parries, but not in rapid succession of one another.

  • Hueco 8/10
    Gonzui and Cero Doble may be performed.

  • Agilidad 10/10
    • Speed - 10/10
      The user's movement allows for them to quickly execute high-speed attacks with both Mano and Swordsmanship. Dashes now reach speeds of up to 75mph, as fast as a cheetah.
    • Movement - 10/10
      Sonído is further increased from a distance 400ft, in 100 milliseconds, the reaction time of a human.

  • Mano 10/10
    • Offense - 11/10
      The Arrancar's aptitude for offensive Mano is unparalleled and they are known across Hueco Mundo as masters of the art. They move like liquid and are proficient with dealing damage by executing multiple and alternating strikes in rapid succession without any visible effort.
    • Defense - 9/10
      The Arrancar has mastered defensive Mano and can fight toe-to-toe with sword users by using bare-handed blade interception techniques without getting their hands cut open.


  • Fuerza 12/10
    • Strength - 10/10
      The Arrancar has exceptional strength. The Arrancar can bypass 8/10 in Armor/Hierro without the aid of a weapon and harm those with 9/10 with a weapon.
    • Endurance - 14/10
      The Arrancar's endurance knows little bounds. They are capable of brushing off multiple gashes and even impalement without being visibly hindered by these wounds. The Arrancar is tricky to kill and can survive and sustain many wounds that would kill most people. A 15/10 gives access to High-Speed Regeneration.


  • Reiatsu 10/10
    • Pressure - 10/10
      The Arrancar's Pressure makes use of its own unique effect constantly. The Arrancar's Pressure hinders those with with a 8/10 in Pressure and debilitates those with 4/10.
    • Hierro - 10/10
      The Arrancar's Reiryoku defense is immense. The Arrancar's Hierro reduces damage of melee attacks from those with 9/10 in Strength and eliminates damage from those with a 5/10.


Total Points ~ 60
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 1:41 pm


User ImageOh ho. I see someone's adapted much of my very own personal layout.

Maybe something with flexible garganta. That'd be ******** sweet... Like she could draw one on her body and poof across the battle field.

Her Pesquisa could be enhanced to the point where she sends out a supersonic wave and can detect her opponents even if they are invisible.

Dear god, I am a genius.

-walks off praising herself-

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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 6:52 pm


Heehehe...

Yes... I hope that is OK. sweatdrop I thought it was simple and easier to understand the techniques. Though I am not one-hundred percent sure if I've got all of the techs under the right types. . .

OH MY! I never thought of something like that~

Are you hinting at like short distance teleportation, or are you talking about something else? Care to elaborate on that some more..

And I like this one too..

/ish going to steal Taigaa's~ ideas/ 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 7:01 pm


-claps enthusiastically-
Yay, I don't have to correct any spelling mistakes ~

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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 7:06 pm


User ImageYes, teleportation. But short distance, singular world limited. Meaning she couldn't teleport from HM to SS, she'd have to draw a proper garganta to do that.
PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 7:26 pm


xx__k a w a ii A N G E L- of course not... did you expect there would be such carelessness when I am making a profile? No... I tend to strive for it being proper as possible. . . 3nodding

I like this idea Taigaa-tono. . . surprised I'll get to working on it tonight, if possible for me.

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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 7:41 pm


Nope, you have the only profile I didn't have to correct...except Dai's.
People always make mistakes...
PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 8:41 pm


Oh dear...

I didn't mean it like that.

crying

I just meant, I don't like putting work off onto other people to do.

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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 12:31 pm


I actually meant it like she draws the garganta on her body or turns herself into a garganta. I like the former more though. xd
PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 12:37 pm


So, she draws a garganta on her body? So basically it's like her body rips open in a Garganta like manner and she's able to travel through it that way?

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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 1:17 pm


I was gonna suggest that it depends on where it's drawn. Like if on her arm, a mini-garganta opens up at her shoulder and another mini-garganta appears where desired and the arm can pop out of it. But it's limited to that limb and can be done on any limb. Then if drawn on her chest, the whole body can be traversed like it was sucked into a portal and pops out where desired.

I'll check with Dante on that...

Here's how I'd write the ability's description;


Quote:
Unlike Neida's normal Garganta, this is simply reserved for a quick teleportation; the restriction is, is that she cannot use it to travel from the Human World to Hueco Mundo, or vice versa. Though, she is able to travel a considerable amount of distances with one Rápida Garganta; which is drawn on her body where she pleases it to be. She executes this ability by making a small incision with the nail of her left pointer finger on the body part in question.
  • By making the incision upon her sternum, Neida's entire body is turned into a pseudo-garganta and can teleport long to short distances.
  • By making the incision on any limb, a miniature garganta is formed at the base of that limb (shoulder or hip) and causes the limb to be transported and appear at another point in space, sticking out of the second mini-garganta. If at any point, the garganta is forcefully closed, loss of limb is imminent. If the incision is made below the navel, the garganta will open at her waist, and if made on the forehead, it will open at her neck.



Something like that. If Dante thinks the limb thing is too much, then it can be removed. The incision thing is just because I think it's cool. xd
PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 2:12 pm


See~~~

you're so much better at it then I am. . . T~T

I am envious of yours skillz.

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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 4:37 pm


Spelling: Corrected "the ladder" to "the latter". (Rapida Garganta)
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