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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:00 pm
Ok! It's time for a little contest.
Here are the rules...
You have to make a poem about anything.
Winners will have their poem shown in "Hall of Fame!!!" In the contest section.
Now let the game begin!
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 3:16 pm
ok...heres mine
Water
It flows down the ocean, dancing with its freinds and runs too close to the surface, where the sun burns its skin, and it shreiks and escapes into the air. It forms with others as a white monster and drives on the blue highway. It comes above a town and the little one sees his freinds drop down to earth as he and the others drift farther into the sky. It gets colder and colder and he and his freinds freeze. They drop onto a rocky mountain and stay there, shivering. The sun comes, with open arms, it finally caught up wit him, and his coat melts off, and as he slides down to the river, he begins his cycle again.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:46 am
< Fate-kuu will get to making hers. >
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 3:39 am
Ok this is what i came up with ^_^ its called "Love made me whole again"
Love, it is like a rose, Beautiful yet elegant, Love, it can make you, Yet it can so easily break you, A flood of tears it can bring, Showers of sadness and dismay, Or it can light up your life, Making you sparkle, Come alive, come back to life, Each and every day, Love, is a precious thing, Love made me whole again.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 9:26 am
((note:My poem can't win because it will make me look selfish so even though it is the best i wont say it is))
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 9:49 am
((mines is a free verse poem i dont think itll win cause free verse poems dont rhyme))
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King Ianus Somnium Caeli Crew
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 12:08 pm
He smiles, as he enters his poem into this contest. His green eyes are bright and smile wide. "I hereby submit my poem, formally known as Razgriz. It isn't really finished, but it isn't really worked on. It was originally a series, though..." He stops talking, and walks away.
Part One: Razgriz Amidst the eternal waves of time, From a ripple of change shall the storm arise, From the Abyss peers the eyes of a demon. Behold, Razgriz wings of black sheath,has arisen.
Part Two: Demon The demon soars through the darken skies, Fear and death trailing it's black shadow, Until the men,united, wield the hallowed sabre. In final of reckoning, the demon is slain.
Part Three: Blood and Madness As the Demon sleeps, man turns on man. His own blood and madness soon cover the Earth. From the depths of despair, awaken the Razgriz. It's raven wings ablaze in majestic light.
Part Four,The Final Installment: War As the demon arises, the weapons of death have fallen. In the wings of the home, peace has become on those who have fought. Waiting once more for time to show them their way. Until death comes to them, it's claws of doom with their soul. And as they fall, so does the war.
Part Five, The Continuum: Phoenix As more lives are lost, the wings of Razgriz become blacker as the night. Until the blackened feathers, lighter than clouds, burst to ash. As the Flame Of Life is extinguished, the fighters of war are lost. As all feathers of the wing of Razgriz fall to wet ground, Bursting to black flame as black as night. As the Razgriz disappears never to be seen again. Until war returns, as the dark phoenix is arisen from the ashes once more. To forever finish what was started.
Part Six, the Revelation: Scars of past As the winged demon soars through the shaded skies, His wings darker then night sky, Black ash falling from black feathers, As the beast has been reborn anew once more, to heal what it could of the Scars of Past, And finish the War of Deceit
Part Seven,The Revival: Gore. As the demon phoenix wings it's way to the House of War, It's feathers light with delight, As the talons thirst for gore,
As the sun rises from east, It alights the shaded beast, As bullets find targets and weapons of war create the gore,
The darken raven comes to fight, It's black talons ripping, shredding, and torturing those who get in the way, So soon this war will end, to leave those are hurt to heal in their own bed, Long ago this war began, putting it's own men on the lines, To just get caught in time of doom, of shadow, and death.
The raven goes through the lines, coming once more for death one more time, winging it's way to the one of chaos, to end his evil life.
The darken raven and the shaded phoenix came to end this war, And that is what shall happen once more. As the Revival of Doom comes once more, To take it's prizes and wallow in gore.
Part Eight, The beginning and the End: Eternity As the bringers of the End of War, they bring with them the beginning of a new time. As once dead cold flakes littered the ground, the warming rays open up to bring great warmth. Forever, in eternity, shall they be one. Forever, in eternity, shall Eternity be reached.
Forever, in reality, shall this war be at an end. For Eternity, the end is only the beginning.
Part Nine: Closure
As the war begins to end, With fallen warriors going to the bend. The darken phoenix flies once more, On it the ashes of a fallen soul.
As it flies, the sun comes from the sky, The shadows revealing the long-fought and now past. In the light, the black wings of the demon shine a majestic white, As light returns to shaded lands.
As Trees live once more, The leaves of green shine once more. Emerald and golden light shines through a blanket of leaves, As the blue domain shines with the golden circle. The symbol of hope and peace, Signaling the end of the flight of a phoenix.
The end if the flight,the light shining bright, The emerald and brown trees to the azure domain, Right to the orb of hope, lies the closure. Closer of a war of years. Closure of the darken phoenix.
Part Ten:End As the azure domain opens to the green ground below, The halo of light shines down white light of delight,
As green tops flow in the wind, As gray fluffs sail in the sky, As the war ends, so does the Razgriz.
Bursting to white flame, as white as light, Bursting from feather and flesh to ash in a mess, Falling from the sky, In it's way to die, As it comes to an end.
End, the reign of shadows is. End, the loss of light. Begun has the era of healing, Begun, has the end of the soaring raven phoenix.
The end, has begun. And never again shall this Razgriz fly.
Part Eleven, The Beginning Of The Second Series: The Razgriz Sacrifice In the green canopy under bright skies, Under the sight of the halo of light and the animals of forest, The Razgriz blood runs the course of a stream.
At the times of dark, under the light moon, Under black skies, in the canopy of dark, Razgriz blood completes it's course.
As Razgriz blood burns from ashes, Burns from feathers, The Razgriz revives once more.
As the Razgriz is uprising once more, It does not stay as one.
The Razgriz Sacrifice is not in vein, For as one was the only, Seven is total.
Part Twelve: Uprise As seven go to sky, The phoenix raven flies, Up to brighten sky.
With the Uprising of Razgriz, One is seven, and seven make one, While one may be one but certainly one is seven.
The seven phoenixes fly like their former, The only holder left of this land, Of black to white feathers.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 2:22 pm
Well, here is my entry. =)
Twenty Silver Doors
Twenty silver doorways Don't dare to breathe For fear to reveal What's underneath
Whispers of gold Entangled in pearls Fall around fate In delicate curls
Red waves of confusion On a moonlit shore Mending twelve broken keys To the next missing door
Twenty silver doorways In questionable existence Too many uncertain windows In the unknown distance
Discoloured shadows Bled into the cold To remain hidden there Numb and untold
The trail spreads on And all feels late For three silver doors A power over fate
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Karkette Vantas Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:54 pm
You have no clue how long it took me to format this... Each different color is a different part of it, though the greens are each a different poem on either side. The main body can be ready as a full thing, but not the branches, though it's interesting to read it like that :3 Willow Sway I waver slightly Hear Long Arms to the heavens The crack Feel Bend in the strong breeze of flames Her and Look to the world below Consume Her Soft Care And inside of this soul Her Flesh Please Don’t Dare I sway in the breeze But it’s not her To hurt And then I feel a warm feeling fault you Her I look down at my long body killed her There is smoke billowing Choking me It is flame The burning feeling Overthrows my serene face I feel terrified, oh so terrified I scream in agony but you only Hear my creaking voice as the fire Consumes me and everything that I know I am helpless to its unbearable heat and I lose myself In the dark crevice of death, I fall in ashes Now there is one less tree in the forest of life.
... ._. and the head got all deformed and stuff. Dx
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 4:51 pm
Maverick Nemean ((note:My poem can't win because it will make me look selfish so even though it is the best i wont say it is)) nice response i like it
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 4:53 pm
Maverick Nemean Ok! It's time for a little contest. Here are the rules... You have to make a poem about anything. And in a week ill decide who made the best poem. whoever did the best will have their poem featured at the home page. and it will stay there for a week during that week its up there the contest will be held again this will happen every week. And any 5 time winners will recieve a special prize. Now let the game begin! bleach and naruto rule
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 1:56 pm
HelixDragonoid Maverick Nemean Ok! It's time for a little contest. Here are the rules... You have to make a poem about anything. And in a week ill decide who made the best poem. whoever did the best will have their poem featured at the home page. and it will stay there for a week during that week its up there the contest will be held again this will happen every week. And any 5 time winners will recieve a special prize. Now let the game begin! bleach and naruto rule lmao nice poem dude. x3 This is mine, acctually, it's from a paper i'm writing about mercy killing: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ placing cold metal to warm flesh, famous last words "BEST FRIENDS FOREVER !" trigger's pulled 'BANG BANG !', 'thud' silence drapes around me, cold, hard, unforgiving... it suddenly seeps in, what have I done ?? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Fanatical Conversationalist
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 3:10 pm
Dear Summer
by Jason Jahromi
As Autumn tears the last leaf off my tree The snow will bury me in its daunting chill
For that I have lost my bright green color In return I am surrounded by only white Recalling the glorious Summer when all was bright Sickened that I am without the closest thing to me Tomorrow and on I will be without my leafs never to see
Somehow for some odd purpose, I feel as if Summer is close In spite of the bitterness of Winter and loss of my leafs to Autumn Grows within my old hollow bark a warmth again brought to life Having such a warmth that makes Autumn as cold as Winter Taking my branches towards the blazing sun which hides in snow
Inside I feel like a new tree can be born again within this hard bark
Letting Winter slip past me and all its harsh freeze Only stands the light of Beautiful Spring to take me in Valuable time was forever lost but can be made for Ever so soon with my leafs growing back Dearly I remember when my leafs truly grew again
Yet however it wasn’t Spring that grew me from Autumn and Winter Only she could have brought my leafs back Unaware of my true feelings I found that only her ….only her, Dear Summer, could bring my leafs back.
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