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Red VeIocity
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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:00 pm


Ok! It's time for a little contest.

Here are the rules...

You have to make a poem about anything.

Winners will have their poem shown in "Hall of Fame!!!"
In the contest section.

Now let the game begin!
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 3:16 pm


ok...heres mine

Water

It flows down the ocean, dancing with its freinds
and runs too close to the surface,
where the sun burns its skin,
and it shreiks and escapes
into the air.
It forms with others as a white monster
and drives on the blue highway.
It comes above a town
and the little one sees
his freinds drop down to earth
as he and the others drift farther into the sky.
It gets colder and colder
and he and his freinds freeze.
They drop onto a rocky mountain
and stay there, shivering.
The sun comes, with open arms,
it finally caught up wit him,
and his coat melts off,
and as he slides down to the river,
he begins his cycle again.

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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:46 am


< Fate-kuu will get to making hers. >
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 3:39 am


Ok this is what i came up with ^_^ its called "Love made me whole again"

Love, it is like a rose,
Beautiful yet elegant,
Love, it can make you,
Yet it can so easily break you,
A flood of tears it can bring,
Showers of sadness and dismay,
Or it can light up your life,
Making you sparkle,
Come alive, come back to life,
Each and every day,
Love, is a precious thing,
Love made me whole again.

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Red VeIocity
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 9:26 am


((note:My poem can't win because it will make me look selfish so even though it is the best i wont say it is))
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 9:49 am


((mines is a free verse poem i dont think itll win cause free verse poems dont rhyme))

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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 12:08 pm


He smiles, as he enters his poem into this contest. His green eyes are bright and smile wide.
"I hereby submit my poem, formally known as Razgriz. It isn't really finished, but it isn't really worked on. It was originally a series, though..."
He stops talking, and walks away.


Part One:
Razgriz

Amidst the eternal waves of time,
From a ripple of change shall the storm arise,
From the Abyss peers the eyes of a demon.
Behold, Razgriz wings of black sheath,has arisen.

Part Two: Demon
The demon soars through the darken skies,
Fear and death trailing it's black shadow,
Until the men,united, wield the hallowed sabre.
In final of reckoning, the demon is slain.

Part Three: Blood and Madness
As the Demon sleeps, man turns on man.
His own blood and madness soon cover the Earth.
From the depths of despair, awaken the Razgriz.
It's raven wings ablaze in majestic light.

Part Four,The Final Installment: War
As the demon arises, the weapons of death have fallen.
In the wings of the home, peace has become on those who have fought.
Waiting once more for time to show them their way.
Until death comes to them, it's claws of doom with their soul.
And as they fall, so does the war.

Part Five, The Continuum: Phoenix
As more lives are lost, the wings of Razgriz become blacker as the night.
Until the blackened feathers, lighter than clouds, burst to ash.
As the Flame Of Life is extinguished, the fighters of war are lost.
As all feathers of the wing of Razgriz fall to wet ground,
Bursting to black flame as black as night.
As the Razgriz disappears never to be seen again.
Until war returns, as the dark phoenix is arisen from the ashes once more.
To forever finish what was started.

Part Six, the Revelation: Scars of past
As the winged demon soars through the shaded skies,
His wings darker then night sky,
Black ash falling from black feathers,
As the beast has been reborn anew once more,
to heal what it could of the Scars of Past,
And finish the War of Deceit

Part Seven,The Revival: Gore.
As the demon phoenix wings it's way to the House of War,
It's feathers light with delight,
As the talons thirst for gore,

As the sun rises from east,
It alights the shaded beast,
As bullets find targets and weapons of war create the gore,

The darken raven comes to fight,
It's black talons ripping, shredding, and torturing those who get in the way,
So soon this war will end, to leave those are hurt to heal in their own bed,
Long ago this war began, putting it's own men on the lines,
To just get caught in time of doom, of shadow, and death.

The raven goes through the lines,
coming once more for death one more time,
winging it's way to the one of chaos, to end his evil life.

The darken raven and the shaded phoenix came to end this war,
And that is what shall happen once more.
As the Revival of Doom comes once more,
To take it's prizes and wallow in gore.

Part Eight, The beginning and the End: Eternity
As the bringers of the End of War, they bring with them the beginning of a new time.
As once dead cold flakes littered the ground, the warming rays open up to bring great warmth.
Forever, in eternity, shall they be one.
Forever, in eternity, shall Eternity be reached.

Forever, in reality, shall this war be at an end.
For Eternity, the end is only the beginning.

Part Nine: Closure

As the war begins to end,
With fallen warriors going to the bend.
The darken phoenix flies once more,
On it the ashes of a fallen soul.

As it flies, the sun comes from the sky,
The shadows revealing the long-fought and now past.
In the light, the black wings of the demon shine a majestic white,
As light returns to shaded lands.

As Trees live once more,
The leaves of green shine once more.
Emerald and golden light shines through a blanket of leaves,
As the blue domain shines with the golden circle.
The symbol of hope and peace,
Signaling the end of the flight of a phoenix.

The end if the flight,the light shining bright,
The emerald and brown trees to the azure domain,
Right to the orb of hope, lies the closure.
Closer of a war of years. Closure of the darken phoenix.

Part Ten:End
As the azure domain opens to the green ground below,
The halo of light shines down white light of delight,

As green tops flow in the wind,
As gray fluffs sail in the sky,
As the war ends, so does the Razgriz.

Bursting to white flame, as white as light,
Bursting from feather and flesh to ash in a mess,
Falling from the sky,
In it's way to die,
As it comes to an end.

End, the reign of shadows is.
End, the loss of light.
Begun has the era of healing,
Begun, has the end of the soaring raven phoenix.

The end, has begun.
And never again shall this Razgriz fly.

Part Eleven, The Beginning Of The Second Series: The Razgriz Sacrifice
In the green canopy under bright skies,
Under the sight of the halo of light and the animals of forest,
The Razgriz blood runs the course of a stream.

At the times of dark, under the light moon,
Under black skies, in the canopy of dark,
Razgriz blood completes it's course.

As Razgriz blood burns from ashes,
Burns from feathers,
The Razgriz revives once more.

As the Razgriz is uprising once more,
It does not stay as one.

The Razgriz Sacrifice is not in vein,
For as one was the only,
Seven is total.

Part Twelve: Uprise
As seven go to sky,
The phoenix raven flies,
Up to brighten sky.

With the Uprising of Razgriz,
One is seven, and seven make one,
While one may be one but certainly one is seven.

The seven phoenixes fly like their former,
The only holder left of this land,
Of black to white feathers.

PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 2:22 pm


Well, here is my entry. =)

Twenty Silver Doors

Twenty silver doorways
Don't dare to breathe
For fear to reveal
What's underneath

Whispers of gold
Entangled in pearls
Fall around fate
In delicate curls

Red waves of confusion
On a moonlit shore
Mending twelve broken keys
To the next missing door

Twenty silver doorways
In questionable existence
Too many uncertain windows
In the unknown distance

Discoloured shadows
Bled into the cold
To remain hidden there
Numb and untold

The trail spreads on
And all feels late
For three silver doors
A power over fate

Karkette Vantas
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Shameless Ladykiller

PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:54 pm


You have no clue how long it took me to format this... Each different color is a different part of it, though the greens are each a different poem on either side. The main body can be ready as a full thing, but not the branches, though it's interesting to read it like that :3

Willow

Sway
I waver slightly Hear
Long
Arms to the heavens The crack
Feel
Bend in the strong breeze of flames
Her and
Look to the world below Consume
Her Soft Care
And inside of this soul Her Flesh
Please Don’t Dare
I sway in the breeze But it’s not her

To hurt
And then I feel a warm feeling fault you
Her
I look down at my long body killed her
There is smoke billowing
Choking me

It is flame
The burning feeling
Overthrows my serene face
I feel terrified, oh so terrified
I scream in agony but you only
Hear my creaking voice as the fire
Consumes me and everything that I know
I am helpless to its unbearable heat and I lose myself

In the dark crevice of death, I fall in ashes
Now there is one less tree in the forest of life.


... ._. and the head got all deformed and stuff. Dx
PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2010 4:51 pm


Maverick Nemean
((note:My poem can't win because it will make me look selfish so even though it is the best i wont say it is))

nice response i like it

blitz dragonoid


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PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2010 4:53 pm


Maverick Nemean
Ok! It's time for a little contest.

Here are the rules...

You have to make a poem about anything.

And in a week ill decide who made the best poem.
whoever did the best will have their poem featured at the home page. and it will stay there for a week during that week its up there the contest will be held again this will happen every week.
And any 5 time winners will recieve a special prize.

Now let the game begin!

bleach and naruto rule
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 1:56 pm


HelixDragonoid
Maverick Nemean
Ok! It's time for a little contest.

Here are the rules...

You have to make a poem about anything.

And in a week ill decide who made the best poem.
whoever did the best will have their poem featured at the home page. and it will stay there for a week during that week its up there the contest will be held again this will happen every week.
And any 5 time winners will recieve a special prize.

Now let the game begin!

bleach and naruto rule

lmao nice poem dude. x3
This is mine, acctually, it's from a paper i'm writing about mercy killing:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
placing cold metal to warm flesh,
famous last words "BEST FRIENDS FOREVER !"
trigger's pulled
'BANG BANG !', 'thud'
silence drapes around me,
cold, hard, unforgiving...
it suddenly seeps in,
what have I done ??
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 3:10 pm


Dear Summer

by Jason Jahromi

As Autumn tears the last leaf off my tree
The snow will bury me in its daunting chill

For that I have lost my bright green color
In return I am surrounded by only white
Recalling the glorious Summer when all was bright
Sickened that I am without the closest thing to me
Tomorrow and on I will be without my leafs never to see

Somehow for some odd purpose, I feel as if Summer is close
In spite of the bitterness of Winter and loss of my leafs to Autumn
Grows within my old hollow bark a warmth again brought to life
Having such a warmth that makes Autumn as cold as Winter
Taking my branches towards the blazing sun which hides in snow

Inside I feel like a new tree can be born again within this hard bark

Letting Winter slip past me and all its harsh freeze
Only stands the light of Beautiful Spring to take me in
Valuable time was forever lost but can be made for
Ever so soon with my leafs growing back
Dearly I remember when my leafs truly grew again

Yet however it wasn’t Spring that grew me from Autumn and Winter
Only she could have brought my leafs back
Unaware of my true feelings I found that only her
….only her, Dear Summer, could bring my leafs back.
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