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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 11:19 pm
this is a naruto fan fic i have bin working on check it out XD
“H i, my name is obito mandara uchiha (lol I fit it all in somehow XD) but people just call me Tobi.” “Now I guess you’re expecting me to come out and tell you how great my life is and how smooth things are going .how I have the perfect boy friend, family, and friends right?...well you are wrong” “my family passed away when I was young…way too young to remember, my boy friend is really sick…he has his ups and downs…but he is soooo stubborn to the point to where I think it might be killing him more…you were right about the friends though my friends are awesome and would stick their necks out for me..At least I hope they will….”
Chapter 1 When you come back. “Oh man, oh man. Oh man I’m going to be soooo late!” .I ran down the hall as if rabid dogs were hot on my heals, I couldn’t afforded to be late. My high grade point average was already at risk I couldn’t even afford another absence, see I have some of the highest scores in the school distract and no I’m not like those other kids whose parents force them to do it or I’m trying to redeem myself..I’m just really smart is all., But for the past week or two iv bin late to school I give lame excuses like “well I had to do the morning paper run”, or, “I slept in” you know something lame like that, but really I was visiting some one more important to me than my grade point average, see…my boy friend…was diagnosed with some sort of illness…and on my own will iv been visiting him every morning since he has been ill…even though he gets angry…and that is something he is a lot..….I still come, but let me tell you even though he loves me he doesn’t hold back on the insults. I was starting to lose my breath, running to school has never taken me this long, come to mention I never run to school, I usually walk, even if I’m late. But something told me if I didn’t get to school on time I would miss something big, RIIIINNNGGG! Oh no there goes the first bell and I’m not even at my home room yet! I have like a minute before the seconded bell comes. But if I try my luck and cut through the teachers’ lounge I could make it there in enough.
“Offf”, my thoughts were cut short when I ran into something and went flying back “Hay Hay! Watch ware you’re going piece of trash”. “Owww”. I muttered as I sat up. “Sorry I wasn’t watching ware I was going” .I said as a pathetic apology. “Tobi? I though such good students like you would be in class by now. “ya well not everything works as planed” I grumbled opening my eyes only to see the silver haired joshinest., I stood up. “Why aren’t you in class hidan?” I asked probably knowing the answer. “The teachers said either clean up your mouth or get out”. He said with a shrug, I sighed, ”so how is he?”,I froze for a minute and looked up. “well that is a new question, how’s about a “hi Tobi how is your day so far?”
“You know what I mean brat!” he said giving me a glare. “Not like you would care”, I said rolling my eyes well at least my visible eye, “but he is having his ups and downs, Why? Kakuzu think that he could pawn off some of his stuff?” I said with a snicker. “Most likely”. He said with a shrug. “What ever just tell the rest of the group how he is doing” .he said waving his hand as he left.
Rolling my eyes I took off, Riiiiinnnnggg .man there’s the bell what I’m I going to tell the teacher this time? “sorry I missed part of you class teacher but I was to busy visiting my sick boy friend to be interested in you boring lectures on English litterateur” ya that is going to get me out of trouble for sure
I continued to run, smiling like an idiot once I made it to the room, griping the door knob I slowly opened the it, peeking my head threw I saw the teachers back turned “perfect” I thought as I slowly made my way into the room, “Glade you could join us Mr. uchiha “ busted.. I looked over my shoulder. “S-sorry I’m late...” I muttered as he turned around. “So what is the excuse to day? Attacked by dogs? You slept in? Or my favorite Giant rabid hamsters.”? He said his look as cold as ice. I gave a nerves snicker. “I’m afraid to day I don’t have a good excuse teacher” .I muttered rubbing the back of my neck,
The teachers glare didn’t change as he waved me off to my seat and turned back to the bored. I sat down next to my cousin itachi who was also in our group and konan our leaders girl friend “pssth Tobi” .she whispered” “what?” “how is he?” .she asked me, see konan was a bit different from the other girls at school see she is the only girl in the group…and could probably take any one of us if she so chose, but she is a grate friend to talk to when you need it.
“The doc said he with the way he is going right now he might get out soon”. I said this with a smile she smiled back. “That`s good” .her smile turned into a frown. “Poor deidara..How long has it been since he has been in there?” she asked looking at me. “Almost two months… it has only been two weeks since I started visiting him in the morning though. I said with a slight frown.
“Oh...Well at least he is doing better right? And I mean tomorrow is Saturday you will have all-day to be with him”. She said fiddling with her lip ring. “Ya” I replied nodding to her. .when all was silent again I began to look out the window, it was always so pretty this time of year, I just love watching the leaves dance in the spring air, I always here how much deidara hate the spring only because nothing goes up in a beautiful show and slowly dies down like it dose when it is snowing, but I love the spring it is the time of starting over new…and maybe that means getting him better faster..But you never know life some times as a habit of taking a turn for the worst.
Time Skip I smiled as I made my way down the road, it is Saturday a whole day of me just spending time with deidara...Well at least until visiting hours are over. Walking at a brisk paste I smiled as the cool spring air blew past me, today was going to be a good day I could tell...But...Still…I couldn’t help but shake the feeling that something big still was going to happen soon...Vary soon.
I shrugged the feeling off as I entered the hospital. The lady at the front desk smiled as I approached. “Hello tobi”, she said in a warm tone “same place?” she asked her smile never fading. I smiled back and nodded eagerly. “Ok then what are you standing here for? Go on up” .she said waiving me off.
I stepped into the elevator and pressed the button with the four on it, I rocked back and forth on my heals impatiently, ding! “Floor one three more two go” I said to myself as a man and what seemed to be his daughter in a wheel chair came in. Ding! “Floor two...Two more to go” I let out a mental groan as a man in crutches came in. Ding! “Floor three one more to go” “this is getting ridicules” I growled as a woman with a portable IV came on.Ding1 “FINALY!” I yelled out loud receiving a lot of odd looks form the other passengers,” Sorry, Excuse me! Oops! I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to step on your foot!” and those were just a few of the apologies that I had to make on the way out of that overly crowded small box of death.
I made my way from the elevator to the hall and down to room 22 the room that you probably can guess he is staying in, I gave a slight knock. “Dei...Deidara you awake?” I asked opening the door any way. I allowed myself a snicker seeing him lying on his side facing the door, letting out a soft snore every now and again.
.I entered the room and quietly shut the door behind me, “Mmmmm y`ur late” I nearly jumped out of my skin at the sudden sound, I turned around letting out a couple of deep breath trying not to seem surprised at all. He snickered, and tried to give me a serious look threw his half lidded blue eyes,
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 7:59 pm
Good! :3 But, no offense... DEISASO FTW!!!!!!
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 12:36 am
lol it is ok XD im still trying o get the first chapter dobe though... sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 3:38 pm
nice even tough I haven't seen the anime in 2 years
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 3:50 pm
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