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 Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 3:39 pm
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 2:48 pm
You'll have to talk to the Guild Captain about the position.. but honestly, for such a high position, a bit more than this is required.
Have a look at how other profiles are done, and how much is written - Pad Chief wrote for his arrancar more than you did and his rpc's rank is 38. If you want to be one of the high ranks, you'll have to work on this, and expand everything, not just put in a bunch of pictures. Describe, describe, and describe.
And btw, he attacked India by himself? Like, one man against the entire country? Sorry, but that only sounds ridiculous.
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 2:52 pm
Like it says, he never got that far, before he even got close enough he was almost killed by a rain of arrows.
And yea I will work on what I have, now looking at it, it's very ridiculous for how poorly I did this.
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 5:52 pm
First off. I never approved you for a posistion of such higher rank. Your information isn't even spaced out correctly. You have few detailed expressions, plus your bio is very short. If you were even to be the Leader, you bio would need to be discussed with me. The Leader of Hueco Mundo will need to infuse the abilities of said discussed topics and abilities and myself. So you are not approved for the posistions you seek. You have to try out, duh. Last fact - You were not approved for Segunda Resurrección, and the ability to hold is unlimited is insipid.
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 6:45 pm
- Username: IkI Saigo
- Character Name: Zeyral Silvanus
- Pronunciation of the Name: Zey-ril
- Sexuality Straight
- Character Personality Zeyral is a competitive but loner at heart, he usually hates having company but when it comes to killing he would be happy with anyone around him.
- Character Likes: Blood, Death, his katana, his mask
- Character Dislikes: Shinigami, Annoying arrancar, Vizard punks.
- Character Age:
[Human Appearance] (The same)
[Arrancar Age] 675 (Looks 19)
- Character Birthday: 6/29
- Character Zodiac Sign: Leo
- Character Blood Type: O
- Bio:A Demon Samurai in Japan, Zeyral had a reputation of killing the opponent when he won a battle. He was hated by his rivals, but trusted by his lord, One of the last few Assassin Samurai who had lived because of disease. Feeling the life of killing for his way of life had finished, Zeyral,by himself attacked the Country of India and nearly died because of a rain of arrows. Unfortunately the attacked proved a catastrophe, as Zeyral saw the rain of arrows he hid behind a boulder but was unaware of a battering ram coming his way.
It was this hatred that his life was over that caused his spirit chain to disappear at a quick rate. Zeyral walked along his country sad and alone for 10 years until he his chain finally finished. Zeyral had transformed into a hollow, After years of killing wandering spirits, Zeyral grew into a Hollow with tremendous power.
Zeyral stalked and consumed every spirit, human, hollow, and shinigami he came across. Eventually he was able to transition into a Gillian class.
Once he killed enough Gillians that assaulted him, he turned into a Arrancar and acquired the ability to use a Garganta, he made his way into Hueco Mundo where he learned of the power he possessed and that there where others, each of them with only a fragment of the masks they once wore.But, his mask a huge demon helm with horns that curved back, while others only had little pieces. While in Las Noches, Zeyral was a destructive, but low ranked Arrancar, however Zeyral made his mark on Hueco Mundo his own way until he became a Espada. He earned the number 4 through attacks and bloodshed, however he nearly killed the primera Espada because of his brutal bloodthirstiness for power, He was then exiled out of the Espada.
Zeyral waited for years until he could return to his rank of Espada again. Eventually he did and was noted as the primera for his brutal ways but pure power. Zeyral now lives on in Hueco Mundo, showing his fraccion the ways of the killer but not giving them his curse, his blood-lust for battle.
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 6:46 pm
 - Character Skin Color/Ethnicity: Spanish,British
- Character Height: 6 feet 5 inches
- Character Hair Color: A smooth crimson that flows out of his mask fragment and rest on his shoulders.
- Character Hair Length/ Style (In the main picture)
- Character Eye Color: Crimson with a outline of white.
- Character Description: Muscular, thin, athletic.
- Character Hollow Hole Location: A giant hole in his stomach.
- Character Number/Rank: Arrancar #20
- Character Number Location: On his upper ribs.
- Character Attire: Regular Arrancar Robes
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 6:47 pm
- Zanpakutō Name: La Muerte
- Zanpakutō Sealed Form: La Muerte
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Activation Statement: Scream of the Forgotten Souls, Mortal Verdad
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Name: Mortal Verdad (Deadly Truth)
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Appearance 
In Zeyral's first Resurrección, his body forms blood red armor and is katana floats in-front of him as it is manipulated into a small dagger that has it's on gravity around Zeyral. The armor is as thick as a regular arrancar hierro and is mostly used to block incoming attacks, while the small dagger can transform to any weapon Zeyral chooses from a katana to a great-axe. Zeyral's armor limits his mobility making his movements 10% slower but his strikes have a 12% increase of the amount of force being used. As for a added bonus, his transformable blade can take on a element from light, fire, darkness, ice, earth.
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Abilities
♣Blade transformation-Blade Transformation is when Zeyral and change the shape, size, and element of the tiny dagger that hovers around him.
♣Blade multiplication-Zeyral multiplies the number of blades around him. (Max is 5)
♣Assassin Tactical Formation-Zeyral uses Blade Transformation to make a bladed dagger, then uses Blade Multiplication to make 4 of them that attach to his arms and legs, since Zeyral is a Sonido master he can use these to his advantage and make hand to hand impact deadly.
- Achieved? Yes
- Segunda Resurrección: Pura Oscuridad (Pure Darkness)
- Segunda Resurrección Appearance: 
In this form Zeyral is completely possessed by his hatred and looses all color besides gray, he gains two wings that can can be used as a guard or the feathers can be used as sharp projectiles, he also has two katanas that shoot out waves of darkness on command. But, a weakness is his lack of armor to his body as he has no shirt and is just wearing a simple hakama, leaving his body as a easy target if the opponent can rip threw the hierro that Zeyral has.
- Segunda Resurrección Abilities
♣Rain of Daggers-Zeyral's wings are cleaned to the bone as a group of feathers with razor sharp ends fly towards the opponent, the feathers regrow after a period of time (3 posts)Zeyral can still fly though with the bone wings
♣Double-edged disc- Zeyral combines both katanas at the hilt and spins them rapidly releasing a wheel of dark energy in the direction Zeyral wants it to be directed in.
♣Shadow Possession-Zeyral reels in all shadows, making the owner of the shadow reel in to Zeyral as he creates a giant ball of shadow energy that would slowly corrupt the person hit with it's soul and make them a ghoul under Zeyral's command.
- Segunda Resurrección Time Able to Hold: N/A
- Achieved? No
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 6:48 pm
Bala
- Color: Grey
- Range: 12 inches
- Distance: 347 yards
- Mastery Novice
Cero
- Color: Grey
- Range: 48 inches
- Distance: 800 yards
- Mastery Expert
- Hierro :
[Obtained Automatically]
Good
- Swordsmanship: (Zanjutsu)
Expert
- Sonído :
Good
- High Speed Regeneration
Novice
[Mastery? Novice?]
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