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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:16 pm


~Information~

Name: Lucid
Appearance Age: 29 years
Actual Age: 109 years
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: He only speaks when spoken to. So he is a quiet person but nice.
Bio: Lucid was raised into a wealthy family. One day, his family’s home was attacked by a large group of hollows. Lucid was lucky to escape but he saw everyone, he ever knew, die. He was found outside the door of a Shinigami’s home and was raised by him. He devoted all his time into becoming the perfect Shinigami so he would never have to see another hollow harm anyone ever again.
Division: 11th
Rank: Unknown

~Appearance~

Picture/Description: Picture
Height: 6’1
Weight: Unknown
Hair Color: Purple
Eye Color: Purple
Usual Clothing: The clothes in the picture is what he usually wears.
Zanpakutō Position: It is located on his right hip.

~Zanpakutō~

Sealed Form Appearance: It is a blade with a golden dragon in the middle with a handle that is kind of like the handle of a pirate’s sword. When the zanpakuto is in its sheath, it looks normal bu the blade of the sword is 100% black with a small golden dragon in the middle of it, plus the handle resembles the handle of a pirate’s blade.
Name: Golden Dragon
Element: Lightning
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:Spirit apperance

Shikai Appearance: The handle of the blade forms into a golden dragon head. The dragon’s mouth is open and the blade comes out of the mouth. The eyes of the dragon head are red gems. The handle stays the same.
Shikai Command: “shock them all"
Shikai Abilities: In Shikai form, it can control lightning. It has basic lightning base attacks. The lightning, on a normal day, is developed from the handle of the sword and the blades sends out a blast of lightning when needed or days when there is lightning outside, the attacks are increased by 50%.
Obtained?: ?

Bankai Appearance: Bankai is released
Extended Name: Golden Dragon of Lighting
Bankai Abilities: It allows him speeds up to 150 miles per hour. His wings can absorb lightning, which he uses for his shock wave attack and his lightning shield. His wings generate lighting from his back and he release that build up of lighting from his hands or his mouth and tail. He can also detach his wings and control them as little blades that are surrounded by lighting.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:33 pm


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Please use this coding.
I fixed up some of the grammar and spelling mistakes.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:02 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.I'm not uh, taking any more members. I've got enough as it is. Sorry...

Love you Angel~

-will look over this when not lazy-
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:05 pm


Taigaa-tono
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.I'm not uh, taking any more members. I've got enough as it is. Sorry...

Love you Angel~

-will look over this when not lazy-


Nothing to be sorry about. I changed it

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 2:02 am


I am not a fan of cloning being so high first of all. 20 clones is easily goddy in my opinion. Even Hei powerful as he is can only have up to what is it four or five in Bankai? Second I would like to see more detail with his Shikai and Bankai and it's abilities. Another thing you might want to choose another Division I believe Zique is still absent isn't he? If your person doesn't like Kido I would suggest Eleventh Division honestly. More detail period would be nice. Also you don't have to quote your profile just edit the first post and let us know when it's been edited.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:28 am


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Okies, here I go.

Super speed: I'd like to know exactly what this means. If a mph/kph cannot be given, then use something to compare it to.

Clones: I'd need to get an explanation as to how he can clone outside of Shikai or Bankai. 20 is far too much as well, like Clifford said.

Bankai: Why did the motif switch from lightning to light?

Skills, Techniques, and Kidō This is where abilities like Shunpo and air Walking go. However, you don't know what rank
you will be getting yet so you probably won't have Shunpo or Air Walking as of yet.

And yes, the 3rd Division Captain has been out for a month or two, so it might not be the best course of action to join that one. 7th, 9th, and 10th aren't active either.


I deleted your quoted profile post and will probably shrink Angel's post to a certain degree so this thread isn't so messy. But yes, like Clifford said, when you make an edit, just say so, don't quote the whole thing. I'm a big girl, I can tell when something has been changed. ;D

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:32 pm


I'm....active enough. I check here every day. Just lazy. rofl

Yeah... join whatever interests you, I guess. We got a couple of Mini and Private Roleplays going around, so...go crazy.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:29 pm


Ekeanyanwu
I'm....active enough. I check here every day. Just lazy. rofl

Yeah... join whatever interests you, I guess. We got a couple of Mini and Private Roleplays going around, so...go crazy.

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Al brave heart bull

PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:59 pm


fixed it up
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 5:04 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.150 is slow compared to Shunpo. Oh well!. ;D

Approved.

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Al brave heart bull

PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:13 pm


i didnt want to make it seem like i was god modding so i put a random number ha. but thanks for the aprroval
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:17 pm


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Ekeanyanwu
I'm....active enough. I check here every day. Just lazy. rofl

Yeah... join whatever interests you, I guess. We got a couple of Mini and Private Roleplays going around, so...go crazy.

LIES!


YOU LIE! YOU CAN'T DISPROVE ME!

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:19 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Okay what the ********? Stop spamming a profile or I will castrate you with a spoon. End of discussion, thread closed. Post again in here and I kill you.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:24 pm


eek calm down beautiful talking on my profile isnt a big deal. haha. no need for killing

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