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 Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:38 pm
So I was working on a tektek, and I need your help to polish it up. Here it is:  I would love some rates for it and suggestions for it please. 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:52 pm
Very cute and lovely color combo~ Five colors, including purple and yellow? Nice. The random pink blush doesn't bother me at all. It helps fill in the face. What bothers me is the lack of white at the feet. Maybe try the white vaudeville cane?
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:57 pm
sdrawkcab Very cute and lovely color combo~ Five colors, including purple and yellow? Nice. The random pink blush doesn't bother me at all. It helps fill in the face. What bothers me is the lack of white at the feet. Maybe try the white vaudeville cane? I have no idea why, but I hate the way canes look on avatars. xD But thanks for the advice. I'll see what I can do about the white.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:12 pm
Kiwi Popsicle sdrawkcab Very cute and lovely color combo~ Five colors, including purple and yellow? Nice. The random pink blush doesn't bother me at all. It helps fill in the face. What bothers me is the lack of white at the feet. Maybe try the white vaudeville cane? I have no idea why, but I hate the way canes look on avatars. xD But thanks for the advice. I'll see what I can do about the white.
Umm~ you could use a white picnic blanket or baseball base, but I don't think they're right for this outfit. The silver laurel anklets would unequip your legwarmers. I hate suggesting expensive items, but you could add a katana to tektek hand 2.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:35 pm
sweatdrop im wondering if those shoes even layer... but if this is just a tektek does it matter?
im wanting to cover the arms.... since the legs are totally covered
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:52 pm
pig_girl sweatdrop im wondering if those shoes even layer... but if this is just a tektek does it matter? im wanting to cover the arms.... since the legs are totally covered
And the sock and legging feet will get cut off by those shoes.
And I think her arms will look fine once she has some white at the feet. > < She needs the white arms to add white to the middle. (If she continues to use the greyish white lotus skin.)
I just looked at the items on the tektek. The blacklight socks would cover up too much of the yellow... You'd be better off without them. (Unless you add something like yellow and black shoes. Or yellow shoes and d.anklets. Or something else along that train of thought.)
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:13 pm
sdrawkcab Kiwi Popsicle sdrawkcab Very cute and lovely color combo~ Five colors, including purple and yellow? Nice. The random pink blush doesn't bother me at all. It helps fill in the face. What bothers me is the lack of white at the feet. Maybe try the white vaudeville cane? I have no idea why, but I hate the way canes look on avatars. xD But thanks for the advice. I'll see what I can do about the white.
Umm~ you could use a white picnic blanket or baseball base, but I don't think they're right for this outfit. The silver laurel anklets would unequip your legwarmers. I hate suggesting expensive items, but you could add a katana to tektek hand 2. This avatar is already stretching my budget, but the katana is a great suggestion. Too bad I am one of those hoarders who refuses to sell their old items for new ones. emo
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:19 pm
I feel like the figure is lost in the torso. It looks boxy.
I think you should take out the gray/white. It dulls everything down.
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