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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:10 pm


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Rp Name: Oshibana Notao
Rp Age: 97
Gender: Male
Race:Arrancar
Personality: Oshibana a.k.a. Oshi is a quiet man, he keeps to himself in most matters of life. When in a meeting or confrintation it is rare for him to talk but when he does its quick and to the point, he useally will stand straight even when given the choice to sit. He personally cant stand the smell of humans or bounts, if he had the choice he would live alone but he feels more at home with other arrancar.
Height: "6,6"
Weight: 246.Lb
Markings/Tattoos: None.
Likes: Solitude, Quiet places, The openess of the white desert, Good poetry.
Dislikes: Humans, Bounts, Vizards, Loud noises, Hyper active people.
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Eye Color: Gold
Hair Color: Black fading into a dark green color
Hair Style:Medium, Thick hair.
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Appearance: User Image

Mask Appearance: An ear ring that resembles a cross.

Number: 7 (I saw it wasnt taken unless im mistaken.)
Rank: 7
Espada in charge of you: None im 7

Zanpakutou Name: Inshi. (Hermit)
Zanpaktou Length: "3Ft,6Inch"
Width: 4 Inchs
Thickness: 1 inch.

General attack/ability: Outside of relese he can see all angles around him.

Release: Acheived
Release Incantation: Isolate, Inshi!
Release Description: Before he relesed he slides the blade into his stomach, he then gives off a loud roar as the loss reiatsu in the area comes together and shrouds his body from sight. He emerges from the cloud in his new form, standing 9,4 with a black cloak of corrupted reiatsu over his shoulders. It hangs down to his ankles with a hood that hangs down over part of his new face, some of his lower face is covered by what seems like an armor platted scarf. The scarf at the end of it is two claws, red and about 4 feet in length. The scarf is attached to his collar bone but these are actually a pair of his arms. Were his arms would be are medium sized arms with chains wrapped around them, the chains wrap around to his back and are attached to his wing bones. Under these arms are another set of arms, smaller but these have shield upon the forearms. His torso doesnt change much but the hollow hole is cracked around the edges. The top part of his face is covered by a newly formed mask with six eye holes, the eyes inside them are black and yellow like all hollows, two horns wrap around and hang over his shoulders like hair. Under these horns is long locks of black fading to green hair, the rest of his face seems the same but his teeth which are sharp and ragged like shark teeth. A white sash is wrapped around his waist covering his hips and the top part of a tail that is aout 6 feet long, his feet are more beast like with two fron spikes for toes and one coming out of the back of his heel.
Release Ability: Manipulation of the courrpted particles. Corruption of reiatsu, ((The spiritual particles around him turn black and liquid like, this does not effect the spiritual particles that make up spirits.))
Attack no.1: Cero Ocular, large eyes open on the body and fire cero in all directions.

Attack no.2: Slip stream, The body gets lengthened and can wipe around like a snake allowing high speed movement and attacks.

Attack no.3: Corrupt, He sends a roar through the area and begins to pull in loss spiritual particals to remake his cloak of corrupted reiatsu.

Attack no.4: Laughing stasis, a single target or group is trapped inside the black cloak covering his body were they witness images that scare the captives, there bodys are left floating in the cloak alive untouched but trapped within there own minds.

Biography/History: ..As a young hollow he was different from the rest, but he didnt have the mental ability to comprehend this at the time. His body gave off a different "aura" then the rest of whom he knew, for many years he wondered Hueco Mundo devouring anyone to cross his path. He only did it to be alone, soon after he fell into the Menos forest were he entered the Gillian stage, even in there were Menos contregated he wanted to be alone. Every Menos that came close he devoured them to, a few more years past until he entered the next stage of his life ,Adjuchas. This is when he realized that he was rather different from the others, he knew that he had to get out of the forest but had to go threw others. He to had to devour them to get ahead, finally after making it to the outside of the forest he stood on the sand and looked to the heavens laughing wildly. Others wondering about began hearing him laugh and wondered to close, all he told them was "I want to be alone," Before he devoured them as well. This chain lasted his whole life until that of Vasto Lorde, where he found his potential. He found his abilitys and he learned how to use them, he wondered the desert in his new form, taking out anyone he may need to, feeding, growing stronger still. His mask began to break from being battle torn to where he then entered the Arrancar stage of his life, a naturaly made Arrancar wondering the infinte white desert until he found Los Noches. He growled and fueded about living with other people but he was talked into living and working with other people in the Espada, were he has lived for the rest of his life..

Theme Song: This

Other: Thickened Hierro, Heightened Pesquisa.
He likes to draw and watch time go by.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:42 pm


-Firstly let me say, we cannot approve your profile unless its complete. And as for rank, you will need to contact the current leader of Hueco Mundo for it to be official, as they have the final say. smile

Now to your profile.
-Could you please add more to your characters personality, and his likes and dislikes, so we can get to know more about your character.
-As to your “general attack/ability”, this is focused on the zanpakuto’s ability not the characters abilities. So cero and corruption of reiatsu? The rest would be better placed in “Other“. But before you do that, please note your Arrancar can’t have perfect abilities in everything. Pick one or two for him to be strong in, the rest will have to be normal.
-“Release Ability: Can only make contact with the pieces that arent black, including his head and all his arms.” - Can you please explain this, its meaning isn’t clear.
-As for your attacks, I’d like to briefly discuss them with the leader of Hueco Mundo.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:43 pm


I'm going to need to contact the other Espada as some have yet to become active again and will be losing their ranks.

Your Generic Attack/Ability Can be the Corruption of Reiatsu as you discribed, but not this can only happen after you release your Zanpakuto.

I agree with Coati as you can only be an expert( or advanced) in one or two fields, expecially due to you being new. And yes they (i.e Ceros, Sonido, Heirro ect.) need to be placed in others.

Release ability, I believe he means that a good part of his body is black and plasma like, yes? You (the opponent) cannot make physical contact with that part of his body. So any physical blows to the head or arms would go straight through resulting in the Shroud Attack. A picture would be great as we do not know exactly what parts of your body are black and what are not.

Your attacks seem reasonable enoughm but on the Shroud Attack (#4) Describe the poison, please.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:57 am


The black goo that makes the body is more like a living liquid, the head and arms are the only physical body parts that can be hit otherwise can fall into the shroud.

As for the shroud ability being like poison, its corrupted reiatsu that is over flowing into all of your pours and orfices (holes) causing some entirnal damage.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:18 am


After careful consideration, I'm going to have to deny this profile. The attacks and other things are fine, though you could do better on the Bio and only two "Other" abilities (you have three), but to have only your arms and head being the only touchable thing on you, is a great gaping hole for God-Moding.

This would mean that to defeat you, the person would have to aim for your head and kill you which can't happen without your permission. The fact that the arms can be hit doesn't matter as you can still fight without them, using your body as the weapon.

Also, by internal damage you mean to the body or to the reiatsu in the body?

You need something in here that shows/allows for others to stand a chance against you without having to kill you.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:41 am


Ill adjust it a bit to see if its better but ill make it so it works out alright?

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:49 pm


Ok, but I want to first tell you that generic ability is AFTER you release your Zanpakuto, not before.

Explain Corrupted Reiatsu to me.

Also, for your 4th attack, would you need to appear infront/behind (or somewhere next to them) your opponent and toss your cape/cloak at them, or does it stretch out to incase them?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:54 pm


Well with the generic abilities i thought was more like what Ulqiuorra has with his eye thing.

The corruption of reiatsu is like the quincy do with pulling it in for there arrows, except it makes it so that its corrupted like bad food or tainted blood, either isnt good for you. i want to say but anyway its just making it bad energy that he can use for attacks.

I would have to wrap them in it so to speak so yes toss it over them, as for the stretching it only does that if the target(s) are larger then him. Mostly though its like he would get in close and toss it over them trapping them.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:20 pm


You put things like Ulquiorra's eye technique would be put in the Other slot. The Generic Ability...well think about it like another slot for an attack. I really don't see why we have that thouhg. -_- Oh well. Anyway that is what it is. You can say that it allows you to see 360 (with a limit to how far away think Byakugan), but you won't be able to use it unless you are in release.

Corruption of Reiatsu, ok that is fine.

When you wrap them in the Cloak are you able to still move? How can they get out? By someone from the outside?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:26 pm


Well ok ill change that so im guessing its like a section for passive skills or something like that right? or are we talking like Zommari's 50 eyes taking people over thing?

Ok the cloak, its a part of him so it would detach so he is able to move but without it he is cuting himself of from doing some of his moves. The manpulation of this energy is were some of his power lies but without the cloak he cant do slip stream so there is the draw back to doing it. Yes he can make another one but it takes a little time to do it so you could stop him before he can make another one.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:50 pm


But what about the others inside the cloak. Is there anyway for a person on the outside to take them out of the trance?
PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:26 am


Yes, simply strike it and it will relese the captive.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:52 am


Ok then.

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