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 Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 1:41 pm
I want to start a new rp and i want people to be in it. I would like you to read the beginning and give me advice of how i could make it better. thanks
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:15 pm
Meh....
It should be more like:
On your fourteenth birthday your entire life changed. Tattoos formed all over your body and along with them, came powers. The tattoos spread over your body. They went over your face, your arms and legs, your hands and feet, your back and chest. They were every where. You tried to get them lazered off, but they just came back. When you put make-up over them, it did nothing. The tattoos swirled over your body, taking different shapes that resemble your powers that you got with them.
The person you became is called a Generator. People like you mainly have the power to control an element, like water, ice, fire ground, metal, and many others. Although, others have formed different powers, these people are very rare, and extremely powerful. Every single Generator can use a bit of magic. Maybe they could form a ball of magic, or hide their tattoos.
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 1:08 am
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 4:31 pm
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 4:32 pm
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 4:34 pm
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 4:42 pm
keep making more!! biggrin biggrin biggrin heart
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