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Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:05 am


Why not?

This guild is so full of amazing writers, why should we not have a totaly awesome song to tell everyone else how totaly awesome we are? Let us all put our heads together and make the best song ever to represent us.
Idealy, I would LOVE for EVERY member of the guild to have some input into making this official guild song.

Let's make it happen!

So here is how it is going to work...

~ This song will be a parody of "Gotta Get Back to Hogwarts" from "A Very Potter Musical". (Here's a link in case you havn't heard it before http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wmwM_AKeMCk) I think this is the perfect song to run a spoof for our guild, because this song explains all the totaly awesome things about Hogwarts. Additionally, they refer to time at Hogwarts as "totaly awesome" several times over in the song.

~Brainstorm! If you would like to suggest ideas, but are not entirely sure how it would be worded in the song, feel free to simply suggest an idea in a normal post. We will have a look at it, and someone might be able to use it to word some lyrics.

~Write some lyrics. When you think you have an idea for how to word some piece of the song, write they lyrics you are suggesting in green. If you are suggesting an alternate wording to lyrics already in the song, be sure to include those lyrics in orange.

exclaim Note: exclaim When suggesting lyrics, post as shown in the following quote:
Quote:

...
(Line_before_suggested_change)
(Suggested_change)
(Line_after_suggested_change)
...

This way, we won't have to scroll through loads of text to see what ideas you have, and we will understand where you want to make the change.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:09 am


This post is to show what we are considering keeping for the final song so that you get a good feel of what we have come up with so far.


HARRY:
Underneath these stairs
I hear the sneers and feel glares of
my cousin, my uncle and my aunt.

Can't believe how cruel they are
and it stings my lighting scar
to know that they'll never ever give me what I want.

I know I don't deserve these
stupid rules made by the Dursleys
here on Privet drive.

Can't take all of these muggles,
but despite all of my struggles,
I'm still alive.

Im sick of summer and this waiting around.
Man, its September, and Im skipping this town
Hey Its no mystery, theres nothing here for me now

I gotta get back to
Rising Stars,
I gotta get back to school.
Gotta get myself to
Rising Stars
where everybody knows I'm cool.

Back to wizards and witches, and magical beasts,
to goblins and ghosts and to magical feasts.
Its all that I love, and it's all that I need.
Rising Stars, Rising Stars, I think I'm gonna join---

I'll see my friends, gonna laugh 'til we cry
take my Firebolt, gonna take to the sky
NO WAY this year anyone's gonna die, and it's gonna be totally awesome

I'll cast some spells, with a flick of my wand
defeat the dark arts, yeah bring it on!
and do it all with my best friend ron, 'cuz together we're totally awesome

RON: yeah, and it's gonna be totally awesome!

Dialogue

RON:
It's been so long, but we're going back
don't go for work, don't go there for class

HARRY:
As long as were together--

RON:
-- gonna kick some a**

HARRY & RON:
... and its gonna be totally awesome!
This year we'll take everybody by storm,
stay up all night, sneak out of our dorm

HERMIONE:
but let's not forget that we need to perform well in class
if we want to pass our OWLS!

Dialogue

HERMIONE:
I may be frumpy, but I'm super smart
check out my grades, they're "A's" for a start
what I lack in looks well I make up in heart,
and well guys, yeah, that's totally awesome

this year I plan to study a lot...

RON:
that would be cool if you were actually hot

HARRY:
hey Ron, come on, we're the only friends that she's got!

RON:
and that's cool...

HERMIONE:
... and that's totally awesome

HARRY, RON, HERMIONE:
yeah it's so cool, and it's totally awesome!

we're sick of summer and this waiting around
it's like we're sitting in the lost and found
don't take no sorcery
for anyone to see how...

we gotta get back to
Rising Stars
we gotta get back to school
we gotta get back to
Rising Stars
where everything is magic-cooooool

EVERYONE:
back to wizards and witches, and magical beasts
to goblins and ghosts and to magical feasts
it's all that I love, and it's all that I need at
Rising Stars, Rising Stars

HARRY, RON, HERMIONE:
--- I think we're gonna join...



Color coding:
Original AVPM Lyrics (Must be changed)
Official Guild song Lyrics(open to suggested change, but can be left as is

Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur


Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:28 am


CHOs POSSY:
Cho Chang
Domo arigato, Cho Chang
Gung Hey Fat Choy, Chang
Happy Happy New Year, Cho Chang

Dialogue

CEDRIC:
Oh, Cho Chang
I am so in love with Cho Chang
From Bangkok to Ding Dang
I sing my love aloud for Cho Chang

Dialogue

MALFOY:
this year you bet Im gonna get outta here
the reign of Malfoy is drawing near
Ill have the greatest wizard career,
and its gonna be totally awesome

Look out world, for the dawn of the day
When everyone will do whatever I say
And that Potter wont be in my way, and then
Ill be the one who is totally awesome!

GOYLE:
Yeah youll be the one who is totally awesome.

HERMIONE: Come on guys! Were gonna miss the train!

ALL:
Who knows how fast this years gonna go?
Hand me a glass, let the butterbeer flow

HARRY:
Maybe at last, Im gonna talk to Cho,

RON:
Oh no, that be WAY too awesome

ALL:
Were back to learn everything that we can
Its great to come back to where we began
And here we are, and alakazam! here we go, this is totally awesome!

Come on and teach us everything you know
The summers over and were itchin to go
I think were ready for

NEVILLE:
Albus Dumbledore! Oooooo
Ahhhhhh.

DUMBLEDORE:
Welcome, all of you to Hogwarts
I Welcome back you all to school
Did you know that here at Hogwarts
Weve got a hidden swimming pool?

Welcome, welcome, welcome Hogwarts
Welcome, all you hotties, nerds, and tools
Now that I've got you here at Hogwarts
Id like to go over just a couple of rules:

Dialogue

ALL:
back to wizards and witches, and magical beasts
to goblins and ghosts and to magical feasts
it's all that I love, and all that i need.
at HOGWARTS, HOGWARTS,

Back to spells and enchantments, potions and friends
To Gryffindors!
Hufflepuffs!
Ravenclaws!
Slytherins!
Back to the place where our story begins
Its Hogwarts, Howarts,

DUMBLEDORE:
Im sorry, whats its name?

ALL:
Hogwarts, Hogwarts

DUMBLEDORE:
I didnt hear you kids!

ALL:
Hogwarts, Hogwarts

HARRY:
Man, Im glad Im back.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:47 am


Brainstorming notepad:
Hogwarts = Rising Stars
Albus Dumbledore (Headmaster) = Signora Della Luna (guild captian)
Harry Potter = Average gaian in the writer's forum
Ron Weasley = Fun loving guild member

Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur


Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:51 am


F.A.Q's
question So what are we going to do with this song once we're done?
~When this song is completely written, I am going to try to find people with recording equimnet and even youtube accounts to work on making a music video. Once we have a music video that puts the tune with the words and maybe even with a visual, we can share that with people all over gaia. We might even get people who are not on gaia to join gaia so that they can join this guild!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:22 am



...
to know that they'll never ever give me what I want.

I know I don't need to hear
that my writing is so last year
here in Gaia Towns

I want constructive critique
I know where to find what I seek,
I'm hearing sounds


Im sick of summer and this waiting around.
...

Color coding:
Original AVPM Lyrics (Must be changed)
Official Guild song Lyrics(open to suggested change, but can be left as is
Gellert's ideas

Gellert Grindelvald


Gellert Grindelvald

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:26 am


If we finish it soon, I might be able to help record. I have recording crap, an okay voice, and some passion.

But on Monday, I'm going to boarding school, where it might be harder to record.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:30 am


I very much appreciate your offer, but I do not thing we will be finished by monday. I'm thinking it may take at least two weeks to get out a finished product.

The advantage to having it take more time, is that we can get more input from more guild members. The disadvantage is that it takes some patience.

Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur


Gellert Grindelvald

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:38 am


Alright, my dear, I'm sorry I couldn't help. Also, for me, it's not a matter of patience, rather the fact that I am going to a school where if anyone steps out of line, they're tortured, basically.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:45 am


Oh, come now, any little bit is a great help.
Suggesting a couple lines for the song, for instance, is a big help.

Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur


egoxromantic

Anxious Conventioneer

PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:44 am


WOW.
That was hilarious!!
An incredibly long opening song... but oh well. xD
I just had to favorite that to my youtube.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:34 pm


Well, if we start with a long song, then we can edit out stuff if we want to later. It is slightly more difficult to add in stuff.

Angles and Dangles
Captain

Dedicated Entrepreneur


egoxromantic

Anxious Conventioneer

PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:11 pm


Neville:
I think it's time for
Albus Dumbledore!


Someone:
I think it's time you meet her--
our fabulous guild leader!


(CORNY!!!)
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:51 am


Back to wizards and witches, and magical beasts,
to goblins and ghosts and to magical feasts.
Its all that I love, and it's all that I need.
Rising Stars, Rising Stars, I think I'm gonna join---



Back to netbooks and laptops and Google Docs
to pencils on paper and crayons and chalk

Its all that I love, and it rocks my socks
Rising Stars, Rising Stars, I think I'm gonna join---



Kind of silly, but only thing I could think of that fit thematically and didn't have the scansion of a dead cat.

phantomkitsune

Dangerous Enabler

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