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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:53 pm
ok this is my fic pleaassss do not leave any comments if they aren't nice or constructive critasizem...
Greed grumbled as he walked down the hall way .”senile old bat if she needed the cross-dresser that bad why didn’t she get him herself!” He continued to grumble and swear till he reached envy`s room and begun to pound on his door. “HAY! UGLY! Open up master needs ya!” No reply. “HAY! Did ya not hear me? I said get your butt up and answer the God forsaken door!” Greed now frustrated by the lack of cooperation (and he is surprised why?) grabbed holed of the door knob and yanked the door open. “You even in here?” Greed question was answered when there was a soft snore. He casually looked arrowed the room then at the bed. And gave a wide toothy grin showing off all of his sharp teeth. Oh envy was here all right but the only visible thing of him was his head sticking out from the covers, and greed’s grin grew wider. A sleeping homunculus such a rarity that is not taken advantage of your one and most likely only chance will be terminated .greed sighlently walked over to the sleeping sin. Slowly moved the covers back leaned down and (at this part I was so deciding if they were going to kiss or not lol) took a deep breath then screamed “FIRE!!!!!!” envy instantly shot up cracked his head on greed’s and his diamond hared skin but that just caused envy to fall back on to his pillow both hands on his head swearing, greed stood there laughing, envy slowly sat up rubbing off the blood from the now healed wound onto his fingerless gloves while he was doing that glaring daggers at greed . “Awwww not happy to see me?” Geed smirked as he watched the other sin become angrier by the minuet; greed’s toothy grin turned into a smirk as he noticed the sins appearance. envy`s nose was red, his violet eyes glassy and his hair was more poufy and more messy and matted than ever. Greed walked up and brushed some of envy`s green hair out of his face then wiped his hand on his pants to get all of the sweat and grease off his fingers. Envy just sat there dumbfounded greed has never touched him without hitting or causing pain. His look turned in to a scowl.
“What do you want?” He said his voice scratchy and his through was raw. Greed blinked. “Oh…that…well master wanted you………but I can see that you’re clearly busy.” Envy blinked then fell back pillow. “Grrrr… that no good little,” he let out an irritable sigh, “fine I’ll be there in a minute”. Greed rubbed the back of his neck nervously and gave a smirk. “That requires you to get up.” Envy shot up with a murderess aura emitting off of him. “I KNOW! I SAID ID BE THERE IN A MINET”!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Envy put his hand on his head he sat up to fast .greed blinked at the other sin. “What is your problem hu?” Envy sniffed his stuffed up nose. “Nothing I’m fine!” He let out a hacking cough as he pulled the covers off his legs and put both feet on the Flore he was shaking furiously. greed let out an irritable sigh he was to stubborn and it drove him crazy I mean if greed was like that he use it as a free pass of a day with no work but no sadly envy is always up and moving and is barley ever home. Even when there master isn’t having them work. “Look.” greed said as he looked arrowed the room “lay back down ill tell master you’re not here”, envy blinked, “What`s in it for you?” The sin said eyeing greed up and down. Greed gave one of his famous toothy grins. “Nothing at all en I’m just counting this as my good deed for the day.” Greed said with a wink. Envy scowled but that was soon interrupted with a loud sneeze that burned his sciences. “Ugh” .He groaned as he fell back on to his pillow. “Fine go ahead I don’t care!” he growled as he placed his hand over his eyes. Greed let out a small snicker as he shut the door.
CHAPTER 2.
“Master!” greed yelled as he opened the door to Dante’s room. “Now now greed there is no need for yelling.” She said coolly eyeing the sin up and down. “He isn’t there”. Greed said casually placing his hands in his pocket. “Oh?” Dante replied. “Then if I were to go into his room right now he wouldn’t be in his bed resting?” Greed blinked then shrugged it off. “Heh isn’t a surprise that you knew he was here.” Dante gave an unpleasant smirk. “Now the problem at hand is what are we going to do with him?” She rested her head in the palm of her hand giving greed an amused smile.
Greed shrugged. “Let him sleep it off…do us all a favor and keep him out of our hair.” Dante sighed. “No greed you and I both know that that will not happen…..and besides that I don’t need him stirring up chaos when he is like this…….so I’m putting you in charge of him.” Greed blinked. “What? Why me?” Dante shrugged. “Every one is busy at the moment.” “But!” greed stammered. “No buts greed…you are excused….I have much work to be doing” and with that she waved him off. “Grrrr”. The sin muttered a verity of swear words as he left the room. (Later on X_X) Greed lightly opened the door just in case envy was asleep which he was. But this time the sin was clearly visible for the blankets were at his feet. Greed sighed and rubbed the back of his neck. “Must have kicked them off.” He muttered. He sat there for a minute watching the other sin shiver then concluded that if envy didn’t get better soon Dante would have his head. so he sighlently tiptoed (lol mental image XD) over to envy`s grabbed the covers
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:05 pm
meh it isn't vary good heh
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:18 pm
no it was good just keep at it
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:01 pm
thank ya he iv bin in a rut with this one though.....
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 3:30 pm
meh it's common for me and if it helps I make different fan fics when I'm stumped so at least I have some thing to work on till I think of some thing or listen to music that is based on the fan fic to help with the process (Like I'm writing a fanfic on final fantasy XII) you could try some of these
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 9:54 pm
thank you for the advise XD
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