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 Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:29 pm
I drew his picture of two dark elves and in my opinion something looks a little off but I couldn't see anything wrong but the one on the left is kind of going on a slope. Feel free to be harsh. 
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:24 am
This may come as a shock, but... The one on the right, its hand on the ground... the thumb is on the wrong side. That one's legs also seem to be different lengths.
The one on the left, his head seems a bit big and his neck too long... Either that or the rest of his body is too short. I'm not sure if he should appear older or younger.
I think the shapes of the arms, legs, and feet look quite nice. The feet should be about as long as the forearm, though (or at least that's how it seems to be for most people).
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 2:12 am
wow seriously didn't reliese any of those. Thanks for the help. Oh and when I'm drawing I never draw the feet as long as the forearms or it looks like they have clown feet.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:46 pm
I see... Well, I think it's fine to bend the rules or make new rules of your own to create your own style. I think the guy on the left's foot is still too small, though. The one on the right has a better size, I think. The one on the left might need bigger feet since he's taller, but at the very least I'd try to match the size since it doesn't make much sense for his feet to be smaller than the character to the right... Unless that's intended or something; some people do have feet bigger/smaller than average, so it could be a part of the character.
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