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Sorry, another one.

This's a WIP of free Gaia chibi art.

Work to be done on: darkening the hair shadow, highlights, as well as coloring the...sea monster...thing.

All comments welcome!

Thanks for your encouragement Errol! =) I hope so too..

Ok, will try with a shadow next time.

Mmm...sorry, I'm a bit slow, not too certain what you mean by volume. The amount of hair, or the number of works drawn, or....?

Hey, I think it's a pretty cute drawing. There are always places to improve upon, though! xP

Light source - from what I've gathered, she's slightly back lit and slightly front lit (though only one shadow is appearing). I'd suggest being a little bit more consistent with it, such as on the legs, arms, etc. It may help to map out the shadows/highlights beforehand or at least keep them in mind as you are doing the drawing.

Anatomy - I think you have the basic gist correct, but you could benefit from cross referencing and from studying the human figure a bit more. Right now she has a bit of that anorexic anime girl look about her. Particularly the torso feels a bit too long and thin, but also the folds in the cloth make me think she's a bit emaciated. Her head is a bit off center, too, I feel, and her left shoulder (our right) is extremely broad when compared with her head/neck.

Clothing - This is a person pet peeve of mine, but see if you can't contour the stockings around the volume of her legs. As is, they are just something of a flat and uniform pattern. They make her legs look flat, despite the highlights you've put in. It's a little more work, but I personally think it pays off. Also, with her swimming suit / body suit / whatever... you should look into studying how that type of fabric bends and reflects.

http://www.dangerstyle.com/images/4183.jpg
<< A random image search on google turned this up. Notice how in the back view of the model the fabric is stretched on one side and a bit slack on the other. If you wanted this effect, you should direct the fabric folds a bit lower and only on one side.

Anyhow... that's about all I have time for right now. Good luck with your art.

Edit: As for drawing volumes, what that means is to draw in 2-D as if you were seeing that figure in 3-D. For example, if you were using guidelines to get your anatomy in the right place, you would attempt to draw "spheres" instead of "circles". Yes, on the page they will look the same (at first), but mapping it out it can help. It's great for helping out with things like highlights, shadows, and even perspective. Techniques to enhance volume include shading along the contour of the body, adding shadows, etc. If you have any questions, let me know. I'm not sure i'm explaining properly. smile

I'm very glad you're investing in more dynamic poses, rather than static, stiff poses. It adds to the fun, playful style in which you draw your figures. It's great that you've learned to use the values in colors to shade, rather than just adding black.

You need something in the background other than white, especially given the color the figures are rendered in. Sometimes, addressing the negative space is just as important in describing figures as is addressing the positive space. Usually more neutral colors can be used for the background to help identify the picture frame, and to put the character or figure within a context of space rather than a white void. A white background makes your bright colors and highlights not as intense as they could be if you were to have, let's say, a graduated blue-gray.

As for the lighting issue, I just think your reflective light is too strong. Remember: light source > reflective light

Spanking new completed commission - not quite happy with two things. 1) The right trouser leg cloth folds 2) The glowing gem.
That's a gem that he's clasping (the teensy one in the robot hand) - not too sure how to effectively make it 'glow'. The backlighting is blue...but it doesn't seem to be glowing.

Very nice new artwork. Really loving the clothing design. However the legs seem too short and the leg in the back seems like it's longer than the leg in the front. Other than that I really like it! xd

Edit: also the body seems a little narrow for the size of the head. sweatdrop

Does this look good?
http://iEnigma8.deviantart.com/art/Example-155502288