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Yo me and a friend on Deviant art are writing a TDK(Total Drama Kids) Fan Fic please tell me what you think of the first chapter and Courtney and Duncans first Story
(I wrote it all bye my self)

Courtney’s side
Courtney slid on her red cap very last after getting dressed. It was the piece de resistance to her ensemble her trade marks. She sat down on the rail to down stairs sliding down landing upon her feet. “Mom I’m takin’ the board to school to day love yah see yah wouldn’t want to be yah.”Courtney said picking up her favorite skate board, the one with Cobra Starships Trade Mark on it. Flinging open the front door slamming her board to the ground jumping on it skating to school as fast as she could attempting not to be late again. “Maybe I’ll beat the bus if I try today…There it is!”Courtney said flinging herself and her board faster catching up to her schools, slower than a sloth, bus. Only managing to get to the very rear left window of the bus. Courtney looked up into the window checking to see if Trent was their one her of best friends. Nope just a different boy from school. Dark black hair, big blue eyes, cute concentrated face. What was she thinking she never talked to the kid he seemed to be sitting Alone in the back of the bus. A loaded back pack sat next to him in the bus seat with a large book sitting in his lap. The book was looking as it was more of an 11th grade book then a 7th grade one. Feeling sorry for the kid not having any friends having to sit in the back of the bus, and with her mind still denying she thought he was cute. Courtney picked up a rock while she was boarding and chucked it at his window. The black haired boy looked to her with a puzzled look but hesitantly opened the window. She knew this was going to be an Interesting day.
Duncan’s view
Sliding on the black shirt going over the creamish yellow shirt he usually wore he picked up his back pack loaded with home work for the next 4 weeks. Duncan usually got his work finished early so he could read in class. Sliding the loaded back pack on her slightly stumbled at the weight of it. Duncan was never that physical of a kid so the back pack he had some troubles with. He headed into the Kitchen to meet his Mother who was preparing breakfast for him. “Thank you mom But I’ll miss the bus just give them to Zoey.”Duncan said. His little sister loved breakfast and would kindly accept his. Duncan trudged toward the school bus stop barely making it. He jumped onto the bus only to have a flurry of papers thrown at him. “Nerd.” on Kid called. “Dork.” Another teased. Duncan retreated to the back of the bus his only safe refuge. He pulled “Gone with the Wind” out of his back pack continuing to ready the large book. Consumed within his reading he did not notice the small Skater girl admiring him. Finally, PLUNK! A rock hit the window almost hard enough to cause a crack. Duncan looked outside the window to see a Skater girl she was in all of his classes except home room. Long brown hair, deep brown eyes, deviously cute smirk. What was he thinking he hadn’t even spoken to the rebel girl in his classes always causing trouble. It was against to rules to open the windows but this girl seemed to want to talk to him. Denying he thought she was attractive just thinking he wanted to talk to her hesitantly opened the window. “Y-Yes.” He stuttered. He guessed today was not going to be an average day.
End of Chapter 1

wooters

lol sorry but did you read it miss intimidated

I'm currently working on Chapter two Bridgett and Geoff

The surfer girl and the party boy

lol whats up with you today are you high

thank explains everything

no they deleted it and she changed her name....i think im being hacked