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one of my recent drawings

kittygirl7778

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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:57 am

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:] I would very much appreciate some feedback on it ^^ [click]

EDIT: I fixed the lighting on it a little bit :3 how is is now? [click this insted]

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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 1:03 pm

i dont like how the mouth is so far to the side of the face.

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The Purple Bubble

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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 1:18 pm

Yep. The mouth looks a little weird, but other than that, I love it.
It's really pretty. : )

Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:42 pm

I'm agreeing with the others about the mouth issue. It looks like her mouth is stuck to her cheek in this piece. Just shifting it closer to the left would help out a lot smile

I love the red and blue contrast between her hair and the sea, as well as the ripples and design of her dress. I think the outline in the bubbles should be a light or dark blue though. The black makes them look thicker or more solid than what they should be. If you can, perhaps you should add purple to the shading or composition. That way, it'll be an analogous colour scheme and will flow nicely. biggrin

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kittygirl7778

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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:53 am

yeah, I try to get it closer to the area where it actually would be, but that seems to make it weirder *___*

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:01 pm

HOLY SHI- THAT IS PRETTY!

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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:32 pm

wee you the one that i asked to draw my dream avi and my other half? if so im sorry because i havent been on in a while because ive been grounded and i was wondering if you could pm me the pictures? thanks! (p.s. if you wanna respond then just pm me)

Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:35 pm

:3....I don't think you did >>

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Stoner_Bitch420

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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:31 pm

Oh wow whee

Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:11 pm

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Terix_FM

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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 6:49 pm

oh, that's her mouth? lol i just thought it was a random heart tattoo on her cheek sweatdrop

the hair could possibly be a little less coiled up, but other than that i like it though. if it were me i would've changed her position to lying down her falling headfirst, but i like this too, especially the way it makes the dress move--good job with paying attention to that. the colors work and for some reason my eyes keep gravitating to that necklace confused

Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 8:50 pm

Pretty~ But the hair was not flowing naturally. Try letting it loose more. And the back is a bit in an unnatural position.

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kittygirl7778

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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 1:35 pm

the mouth is kind of a style thing, I've tried putting it where it should go, I find this looks better but anyway~ I felt like the hair was a little too....plastic? so I'll try that next time ^^ thanks for the tips ;D

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