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PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 3:08 pm


Everyone always thinks of paintings when they talk about surrealism but the movement manifested in pretty much every field of self-expression
Surrealist poetry is, I find, a nice change from trite cliches that abound in more literalist poetry

Take these for example:



The shape of your eyes
Paul Eluard (1926)

The shape of your eyes goes round my heart,
A round of dance and sweetness.
Halo of time, cradle nightly and sure
No longer do I know what I've lived,
Your eyes have not always seen me.

Leaves of day and moss of dew,
Reeds of wind and scented smiles,
Wings lighting up the world,
Boats laden with sky and sea,
Hunters of sound and sources of colour,

Scents the echoes of a covey of dawns
Recumbent on the straw of stars,
As the day depends on innocence
The world relies on your pure sight
All my blood courses in its glance.



I want to sleep with you
Joyce Mansour (1955)

I want to sleep with you side by side
Our hair intertwined
Our sexes joined
With your mouth for a pillow.
I want to sleep with you back to back
With no breath to part us
No words to distract us
No eyes to lie to us
With no clothes on.
To sleep with you breast to breast
Tense and sweating
Shining with a thousand quivers
Consumed by ecstatic mad inertia
Stretched out on your shadow
Hammered by your tongue
To die in a rabbit's rotting teeth
Happy.


No wretched rhyming of "love" and "dove," no over-used refferences to roses but plenty of visceral emotion
PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 3:11 pm


For a bit of fun give the Surrealist Poem Generator a try

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