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 Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:31 pm
Name: Jake Dean
Physical Description: Jake died 16 and a half, and now he doesn’t know how old he is. Jake is 5 foot 6 inches tall. He weighs 144 pounds and looks scrawny. He has long straightened bangs that go down to his eyes and the rest of his hair is about to his ears. All of his hair is a dark blue. He’s an American white boy. He also wears the standard soul reaper outfit.
Weakneses: Jake is deadly claustrophobic. He is very impacient and he knows it well. Oh and he is very scared of (sighs) bugs yea...
Zanpakuto: His Zanpakuto is a long black slender sword with a red rope tied handle. It also has a Japanese writing word on it, (he has no idea what it means). His sheath is a wooden brown with a hole in it. The hole is to show the writing.
Spirit: The name of Jake’s zanpakuto is
Kūkio mamoru
. but he will usually call him Kūkio
Shikai: (NOT ACHIEVED YET)
Jake shouts, ”Please protect me, Kūkio mamoru, or Please protect me, Kūkio
” then his sword instantly morphs. Meow takes the form of a little knife with a hook near the handle. The knife is hooked to a chain that can extend with his spiritual pressure. The chain is attached to a ring jake wears on his ring finger. Jakes main ability is being able to control the blade with air currents around him.
Jake has three attacks while in shikai:
Walk the dog: this where jake slings the blade upwards while using air currents to sling the blade with much more speed and power.
Air projectile: Jake throws the blade into the ground then pulls the chain and launching himself and his blade forward then using air to increase power and speed while holding the blade in front of him towrds the oppenent.
Rapid fire chain: Jake rapidly throws his chain at the enemy (kind of like a yoyo) using the air to increase the speed more and more each throw.
Pierce: Jake throws the dagger to the chain's limits and forces wind to ride along the chain, when the wind reaches the dagger the wind will continue to fo forward, cutting most objects in the way
Wind trap: (must be in a forest or place with a lot of surrounding walls) Jake throws his blade forward at the oponnent purposly missing them. Then the blade bounces off the walls around the opponent until it wraps around the opponent and traps them with the chains of the blade. Which Jake can then do whatever he pleases to the enemy.
Bankai: (NOT ACHIEVED YET)
Special Accessories: Jake wears bright yellow Mickey mouse shoes. He also has a small pair of glasses
Personality: He is very bipolar he gets it from his father. He was always known as the nerdy kid that everyone hated. Sometimes he is a smart allelic. He takes a lot of crap from a lot of people. He is learning to change it that though.
Biography/History: Jake was born in a small town outside of Austin Texas. His family moved a few weeks after he was born. They moved to Los Angeles California. On Jake's first birthday his family moved again to a small town outside of New York City. That is where he lived until his death. He was never excepted by anyone at his school except his one friend Matt. When Jake and Matt were walking home from school mat was being beat up by some bullies. Jake tried to help but the bullies were to strong. This happened almost everyday in Jake's life. A few days before Matt and Jake's 12th birthday, (they shared the same birthday) Matt was murdered while leaving a store in town. The killer was never found. Until his death 4 years later Jake never had a friend again.
One day Jake was sitting in his room when he received a text message from a popular girl at school. She invited him to meet her at the movie theater. Jake was so excited so he drove straight to the theater. On the way he was thinking about how much he liked this girl. He had many classes with her. He was glad that some one liked him. (Jake didnt have anymore friends) Instead of the girl meeting him there it was four jocks who always hated him. They started to beat him up in the middle of the street. Suddenly a car was driving up at a very high speed and the bullies ran and left him in the middle of the road. Then suddenly he showed up in the Soul society.
Powers: Jake only knows the basic Kidos 1-10.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:14 pm
It seems good to me, but why not add a weakness. If you want to add on to your profile that would be good too. You have some minor spelling errors, some words are not capitalized, and a few really short sentences. Other then that, good job. I cannot accept your profile, but I will address the person who can.
Oh and nice spirit, it is creative and cool. I like it, so good job.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:17 pm
Wow really? Thank you so much ill get on the weakness right now. Thank you again. mrgreen ninja
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:09 pm
NO BUMP! scream
Eh anyways. Profile looks good after edited. Just remember to capitalize things when posting. ^^;;
I give you my seal of approval, but before you post up a bankai, PM myself or Fousty. Also, add more to the personality and shikai. Maybe some attacks? Look at other profiles to find out what's tolerable.
Have fun RPing! :3
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