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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:57 pm


(This was part 1)
Eneri:*sleeping on a bed*
Winry(from downstairs):EN! ER! I! WAKE UP!!!
Eneri:Waaa!*falls off the bed with a thud*
Winry(still downstairs):Come on! You have to eat and our regulars are here! Come down and say hi!
Eneri:...Regulars...*thinks for a moment and remembers to brothers she met 2 years back* ...Hell... I don't wanna see them...*stares at her desk clutered with a bunch of papers with transmutation circles on them* ...not when I'm so close...
~~~~~Later~~~~~
Eneri:*running down the stairs barefoot with her automail legs and left arm showing*
Winry:*sees her*Hey, Eneri! Come and say hi to-
Eneri:*goes out the front door and it slams with a bang*
Winry:...*sigh*Its no use...
Edward:*sitting on a couch*Winry? Who was that?
Alphonse:*in a box*You forgot didn't you Brother?
Edward:Whadya mean?
Alphonse:She was here when you were recovering from your auto mail surgery and when she had hers. Remember now?
Edward:...Grrrr... I remember now... After she had her surgery she was taller than me!
Pinako:Feh. That's how tall she would have been even if she had her legs.
Edward:Grrrrr!*random fighting starts*
Eneri:*standing outside the door*.................who cares......*walks off to an empty clearing and starts shuffling leaf piles around* .......Tomorrow is the last day... I'll finish it today then tomorrow...*pauses then smiles an unsure smile* WE can leave. *continues moving leaves and uncovering... a huge transmutation circle*
(Didn't get many comments when it first went up. I complained later and people told me they just hadn't known what to say.)
PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:59 pm


(Part 2...)
~~~Later...(again)~~~
Eneri:.............done.*stands* I'll use it tomorrow... then I'm gone. *starts moving leaves again but stops after a bit* ...But... where can I go? ...I'll think of something later... gotta cover this up before someone sees me...*finishes moving the leaves back in place* ...I don't wanna go back yet. ...I'll just wander around...
~~~Ends up at a the graveyard~~~
Eneri:*wandering around until...*...Huh? What's... *kneels down in front of a grave stone with fresh flowers on it* ...So they weren't lying... tch... I don't wanna be the same as them... *hangs head and thinks for a moment then looks away from the grave* ...I won't be. It's flawless. He's gunna come back for sure.*clenches her fist then stands and looks at the grave again*...Sorry but... I can't be nice to them. Not now... and not ever.*walks away from the gravestone that reads "Trisha Elric"*
~~~Goes back to the Rockbell Automail shop~~~
Eneri:*opens the door and without say anything starts going up stairs*
Pinako:Hey! Where are you going? You haven't eaten all day, now come back down and eat.
Eneri:............*mumbles*Not hungry.*goes up the stairs and shuts her door*
Pinako:*yells up the stairs*Well don't blame us if you starve!
Eneri:*falls against the door to her room*...I d-don't need it... I don't need your charity... stop acting like you care...*lightly hits the door with her fist and slides to the floor* ...Just s-stop it... d-dammit...*has her head in her hands and starts quietly crying*
(Was told it was lacking detail. So I added more in the later ones.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:01 pm


(3.)
Eneri:*still sitting on the floor*..............Adam... why'd you help that b*****d... ...Why'd I try to kill him... ...I'm so... stupid...*grits her teeth* I'm such an idiot...*kneels forward remembering how everything began*
~~~FLASHBACK(3 YEARS AGO)~~~
Younger Eneri:*at a desk reading*
Servant:...Young miss?
Younger Eneri:Hmm?*not looking up*
Servant biggrin on't you want to see your father's alchemy?
Younger Eneri:Heh. Why would I?*turns to the servant with an evil look on her face*
Servant:*taken aback by the look*W-Well I thought you might have wanted to! ...C-Consitering that the young master is-
Younger Eneri:*eyes go wide and she interupts*What?! I-Is Adam helping him?!
Servant:*surprised look*Y-Yes but-
Younger Eneri:No! Dammit! I have to stop him! Help me!*Eneri points to her wheel chair*
Servant:Y-Yes!*helps Eneri into her chair*
Younger Eneri:*takes off down a hall and out a door to the outside*Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! Please let me get there in time! *stops on top of a hill and staring wide eyed* ADAM!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!*a huge transmutation circle has been activated in front of her eyes and a man lays dead on the ground while a small boy is being taken by the gate of truth* Dammit! What the hell is that!? Adam!!! I'm coming!*Starts down the hill I'm- Waaaaaaa!!*one of the wheels of her chair gets stuck and causes her to fly 4 feet out of the chair. She lands right next to the corpse and right in front of the rapidly disappearing boy and reaches her only hand out* A-Adam... grab on please...
Adam:*crying but tries to reach out to Eneri*S-Sissy... help me...
Younger Eneri:Uhh... nnnn...*her reach is too short to reach her brother and as she struggles to reach him... he vanishes without a trace**staring at the spot where Adam just was in confusion* .....A...dam...?...No... No...! Dammit... *screams at the sky* DAMMIT WHY!!!!!!! YOU TOOK HIM WITH YOU!!!!! DAMMIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!! GIVE HIM BAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!*starts crying and looks over at the corpse*...Why...? You're finally dead... but why did you ask him to help you with what I...Nngh...*screams out in anguish* ADAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!!!!!!!!!!*the whole scene fades to black*
~~~BACK TO THE PRESENT....~~~
Eneri:*laying on the floor with a wet face* ...I fell asleep. ...Why... Why won't that day just disappear...? ...I made such a huge mistake... I'm so sorry Adam...*someone knocks on her door and she turns* ...What?
Ed:Granny told me to get you. You have to eat dinner now. She said I'll have to drag you down there if you won't come. Though I don't see why...
Eneri:...Fine. I'll go.*opens the door and looks down at Ed* ...Still a shrimp I see...
Ed:I'M NOT A SHRIMP!!!
Eneri:Keep telling yourself that. Maybe you'll grow.*starts walking down the stairs*
Ed:Hey! I'm not done with you!
Eneri:*doesn't look back, waves, and continues down the stairs*
(Sorry for not metioning this earlier... but there's swearing. Felt lacking without it.)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:16 pm


(i like it X3 and as long as the swearing isn't too bad then i don't care XD)

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:15 pm


(Part 4.)
Eneri:*at the end of the stairs and wanders to the dining room and passes Al in his box* ...Why the hell are you in a box, Tincan?
Al:Umm... Hehe...
Eneri:...Well that means I pegged you right the first time I met you. *wanders to the table*
Al:...You don't have to be so mean...
Eneri:*sits at the table*..............
Pinako:...Well? Have you said hello to our guests?
Eneri:...The Shrimp and Tincan right?
Pinako:Yes but there was Major Armstrong too.
Eneri:...Major? He military?
Pinako:Yes. He's a state alchemist like Ed.
Eneri:*mumble*Surrounded by them...
Pinako:What was that?
Eneri:...Nothing. What's to eat anyway?
Armstrong:*comes through the door and ses Eneri*If it isn't Eneri Nonell! I have not seen you and your father in ages!*gives a crushing hug to Eneri*
Eneri:Let go of me... my ribs...
Armstong:Hohoho!*hugs tighter*
Eneri:AAAAGHH!!!*cracking sounds*
~~~LATER AT DINNER...~~~
Armstrong:Hohoho! I did not dream that I would meet the daughter of the highly praised Glass Alchemist out here! How has your father been? Well I hope!
Eneri:*with a mouthful of food*...That b*****d died 3 years back. Saw it with my own eyes. Good ridance I say.*swallows and takes a huge bite of some kinda meat*
Armstrong:Oh! I did not know that! Terribly sorry for your loss!*tries for another hug*
Eneri:*mouth full*Don't. Hug. Me. Again. Ever.
Ed:*his mouth is full too and notices Eneri's height*...How tall are you anyway?
Eneri:*still full*Don't know. Don't care.
Winry:Last maintainance she was... hmm... 5-7?
Ed:WHAAAAAAAA????
Eneri:Care about your own height shrimp.*takes a bite of a carrot*
Ed:WHO YOU CALLING A SHRIMP YOU GIANT!?!?!
Eneri:.........*snaps*Who am I calling a shrimp? Who else ya midget?!
Ed:M-MIDGET!?!?
Eneri:Yeah! Ya flipping bean! Why don't ya drink that milk in front of you huh?!
Ed:I'M NOT DRINKING SOME THING THAT CAME OUT OF THE END OF A COW!!!!!
Eneri:SHUT UP!!!!! GOD YOU REALLY GET ON MY NERVES!!! I'LL BE GLAD WHEN I CAN GET OUT OF THIS FLIPPIN' HOLE!!!
Al:O_O
Armstrong:............
Pinako:Just what do you mean by "hole"?
Eneri:WHAT ELSE?! I'M SO GLAD I'M GOING TO BE-ahh!*covers mouth with hands because she almost let her plans slip* .............I-I'm going to bed! *runs upstairs and shuts her door with a slam*
Ed:*goes back to eating*...What's her problem anyway?
Winry:...I hope she doesn't deside to leave now... Ed you idiot!*hits him with a wrench*
Ed:OWWWW!!! What'd I do?!
Al:You were really mean big brother...
Ed:I don't care! She started it!
Eneri:*can hear everything from her room*...Soon. It's tomorrow. I'm gunna finally leave.
(Wee.)
PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:24 pm


(Numero 5)
Eneri:*sleeping until the sun hits her face*......yaaaawn...*looks out the window and sees that the sun is already high in the sky*?!?! I OVER SLEPT!!! *goes out her door, down the stairs, and out the door* Ngh! How could I over sleep today! I gotta get over to-
Ed:*sitting on the grass with Al and interupts her*Over to where?
Eneri:*glares*Mind your business!
Ed:...Are you going to that transmutation circle?
Eneri confused !...I don't know what your talking about. I-
Ed:*interupts*I know you made it. I saw you hiding it and I erased it later after you left.
Eneri:YOU WHAT?!?!*grabs him by the shirt* Do you realize what you've done you God damn idiot!?
Ed:I erased something that might of harmed everyone.
Eneri:You b*****d! Now I'll never finish in time!*socks Ed in the jaw with her automail fist and runs off to the clearing where her circle is*
Al:Brother! Are you alright?
Ed:*rubbing his jaw*Ow... for a girl she hits hard...
Al:...Brother? Does she really have a circle somewhere?
Ed:...Yeah. It sorta looks like the one we used when...
Al:...........Did it look like it was going to work?
Ed:...Maybe. It did look like it would do something more than ours...
~~~AT THE CLEARING...~~~
Eneri:*moving leaves* ...Dammit! He really did mess with it! Dammit... I'm outta time... dammit... dammit... I'm so sorry Adam...*falls to her knees with her head in her hands crying*
(Dum da da da.)

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:02 am


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(i like it X3 and as long as the swearing isn't too bad then i don't care XD)

hey envy,how com u don't like it when people swear? confused i mean i know i get irratated when i hear swear words,especially at school. sad

oh and those are awesome fanfics cat biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 3:26 pm


eh i personally don't mined the minor one`s ^^ and i just don't want excessive swearing ^^

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:56 am


wow it's perfect (better than the last one i read )
PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:57 pm


(Aaaaaaaaand 6.)
Eneri:*stops crying when she notices one part of the erased circle* ...This is... what I used to kill...*her voice trails off* ...I put it in this one!? ...Why? Did I want to die when I did this? ..........Maybe I can still make it. If I hurry... with no mistakes...*starts muttering to herself and runs back to the automail shop*
~~~AT THE SHOP...~~~
Al:*still in his box and sees Eneri run in and up the stairs* ? *sees her run down stairs with a paper in her mouth and a bunch of objects in her hands* ...What are you doing?
Eneri confused *voice muffled by the paper* ...Mixming mur momer's mismake.
Al:Huh?
Eneri:*puts some stuff on the ground and takes the paper out of her mouth* Fixing your brother's mistake!
Al:Ohh. ...Then you really have a transmutation circle almost ready?
Eneri:Yeah. I'm going to use it...*walks up to Al and glares in his face*...and no one is going to stop me. Got it? I'm bringing my brother back no matter the cost.
Al:........Your brother?
Eneri:...Eep.*realizes what she just blurted out and goes a bit red* Y-Yeah! You got a problem with it?!
Al:Haha. No, it's just that... you seem a lot like brother.
Eneri:...Do I look like a shrimp to you? Seriously... *sigh*That's not funny at all.
Al:Yes it is.
Eneri:Hell no!
Al:Hahaha! That proves it. You both get mad real easily.
Eneri:*gets redder and sticks her tongue out at Al then picks up her stuff and gets ready to go fix her circle*
Al:...I hope you get your brother back.
Eneri:....................................*looks down*...Why do you care? You don't know anything about why I'm doing all this.
Al:*thinks for a bit*...I'm willing to listen though.
Eneri:..............I'd take you up on that...*starts going out the door* ...if I knew I might come back. ...............See ya, Tincan.*slams the door*
Al:............................I hope she comes back...
(I said it then and I'll say it now. I heart Al-in-the-box.)

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:03 pm


(Seeeeeeeeeeveeeeeen.)
~~~AT THE CLEARING...~~~
Eneri:*looking at her paper*......This was really screwed up. ...Last time I'm doing something based on memory alone... Bleh. It was too complicated more than this one...*stares at the paper* ...What was I copying anyway? ...It wasn't this... ...Crap. That old b*****d... no wonder why my symbol was there! I copied his! Damn! *raises head to the sky*HE'S NOT DEAD YET YOU STUPID OLD GEEZER!!! Huff... huff... *rubs mouth on her sleeve* ...The dead don't come back and he's not dead, I know it. *stares at her paper again*...I can finish in time. This won't take long at all.*small smile* *starts drawing another circle on the ground, this time the right one*
~~~DAWN COMES...~~~
Eneri:*covered in dirt and dust*...Finally... I'm done! *dusts herself off* Bleh. I'm covered in this stuff. *sigh*...I'm really gunna do it... ...*takes a tarnished silver watch from her pocket to look at the time*...........Somehow I get the feeling I'll need to eat first. ...*stares at her still dirty pants and shirt* ...And change clothes... ...I'll need some other stuff too... Maybe a few snacks and some clothes...*mutter mutter**starts wandering back to the shop*
~~~AT THE SHOP...~~~
Eneri:*throwing things around out of some drawers*...Nope. Not there... Wait... they might not fit him anymore... hmm... *stares in the drawer at a gray shirt and blue slacks*...That's what I wore when... ...It'll work.*grabs the clothes and runs down stairs* *at anyone who's around*Seeya losers! I'm never coming back again! Count on it!*slams the door*
~~~NIGHT AT THE CLEARING...~~~
Eneri:...Alright.*rubbing her hands together* Here goes...*kneels down and puts her hands on part of the circle**the circle starts flashing with shining energy* Where ever that black stuff took him... I'm gunna drag him back. ...So appear already dammit!*the shining energy starts going black around her* ...That's it... I'm paying up... ...I don't even care if I die.*she starts hearing a snapping sound*Wha- Nngh! What the hell?!*staring at her right arm that's now wrapped in black shadows* Wha... What is thissss?!?!*echoes*
~~~A WHITE SPACE~~~
Eneri:*laying on the floor unconsious*
???:*a girl who look exactly like Eneri and is standing over and pokes her* ? ...You are...
Eneri:Ngh...*slowly wakes up at the poke* ...WAA! *quickly backs away* W-w-what the hell?!?! W-w-why do you look like me?!
???:.................
Eneri biggrin ammit! Tell me!
???:*tilts head a bit*...You've forgotten... haven't you...?
Eneri:What the hell are you talking about?!
???:*looks at the gate behind Eneri*...It's coming now... It's going to make you relearn... the truth... I'm sorry...
Eneri:Wha-?*turns around* What is-*gate opens and the shadows come for her* Waa!*they get her and she's fighting against it* What did you do?! Why?! WHO ARE YOU!?!?
???:..........*sits on the ground*...I'll be waiting... for the day when you free me too... ...sister... *smiles*
Eneri confused !?! Ngh!*reaches out but...* Dammit!*...the gate takes her in and shuts*
???:*turns to someone*...The scent of your soul was on her... maybe... you'll be whole again soon... Right Alphonse Elric...?
Al's body:...................
???:...I hope so at least... it's going to get lonely around here I see... too bad...
(I typed so much that day... Parts 6-8 I think)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:10 pm


(Eiiiiiiiiiiiight.)
~~~IN THE GATE~~~
Eneri:*all the info in going in her mind but she's no longer fighting* ...Again. ...Why am I learning again? When did I learn before? ...Somehow... I feel there's no point in struggling anymore... ...Why...?*closes eyes*
~~~ANOTHER WHITE SPACE~~~
Eneri:*opens her eyes* ...? *blink*............where...?
Truth:Back again at your free will are we?
Eneri:*eyes go wide and she gets a look of terror on her face*W-What are you?
Truth:You know who I am. Afterall... you have been here before.
Eneri:No I have-
Truth:Before you were born you came here. You've forgotten it.
Eneri:.....*breaks into a cold sweat* I... was... she... was...
Truth:Yes... do you remember now? ...What the toll was that time?
Eneri confused !*glances down at her automail legs and left arm*...This was... I didn't...
Truth: Now it's time to pay again. After all...*grins in her face*What's another limb for your brother's mind, body and soul? Right, Cursed Wings?
Eneri confused ! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!*echoes*
~~~BACK IN RESEMBOOL AT THE AUTOMAIL SHOP...~~~
Ed:*has his automail fixed*Al! Did you see that?!
Al:*out of his box and back in one piece*Uh-huh. Looked like alchemy.
Ed:*thinks for a second then...*Tch! She went through with it!
Al:What are we going to do, brother?
Ed biggrin ammit Al, what do you think?! I'm not letting another person die! Come on!*runs*
Al:Ahh! Wait for me!*runs after*
~~~AT THE CLEARING~~~
Eneri:GYYYAAAAAA!!!!!!*laying on the ground with broken automail around her and her right arm socket bleeding badly* Dammit! I-I can't did I... Adam... where are you...?Adam...!*there's nothing and no one in front of her* ...Dammit... dammit... it didn't work...*tears up* ...if he's really dead... let me be with... him...*falls unconscious and continues to bleed*
Ed:*comes to the clearing*Dammit! Al! She's bleeding to death! *gets some cloth and ties it around her wound*
Al:*comes behind him* W-What?! Brother! We have to take her back to the shop!
Ed:I know that! Pick her up and take her back!
Al:But-
Ed:Just hurry!
Al:..Right.*picks Eneri up and runs back to the shop*
Ed:*staring at the blood and pieces of automail*...It took her arm and destroyed her automail... for nothing? *stares at the now destroyed circle*...Why is there nothing...... ?*hears something in a nearby bush* Who's there?!
?:*crying*...Sissy... siiiiis... waaa... I don't wanna see you die...*sniff*
Ed confused *goes to the bush and moves the leaves* ...Impossible...*he's now staring at the little boy behind the bush, wearing clothes too big for his small frame, and gets the feeling he's seen him before* ...Now where did you come from, huh?
?:Waaaaaaaa!!!!!*glomps Ed* Don't let her die..! She can't die...! Sissy...! Waaaaaaa!
Ed:...*sigh* Come on. You can't stay here. Whadya say we go se your sis alright?*grin*
?:........*sniff**nod*
Ed:Follow me and lets go.*starts walking*
?:*following Ed like a baby chick*
(...Sad. ...Al's not in the box anymore... crying )

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:34 pm


(Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiineeeeeeeeee.)
~~~AUTOMAIL SHOP~~~
Ed:*comes in the door* Hey! I found a kid!
?:..........*peeking from behind Ed*
Winry:*comes down the stairs*What do you mean you found a kid?
Ed:I found some kid out there. See?*points to ?*
?:*hides behind Ed*
Ed:Oh come on...
Winry:Aww... he's adorable~!
?:*peeks out and is staring at Winry*
Ed(thinks):How long is he gunna stay there...*staring at ? behind him*
Winry:Come on... It's alright. Don't be shy now.
?:*runs out from behind Ed and hugs Winry*
Winry:Aww~! What a cutie~!
Ed:...Did Al come back yet?
Winry:Yeah. He came back with Eneri. ...What happened to her anyway? Why was her arm gone?! Why was her automail all smashed up like that?! There's barely any left!
Ed:Hey now! Don't get mad at me, Winry!
?:...Eneri...?*sniff**begins crying again*
Ed:Ack!
Winry:*keeps hugging ?*Do you know Eneri? Huh?
?:...Uh...*sniff*huh... ...SIIIIISSSSYYYYYY!!!!! WAAAAA!!!*starts bawling*
Ed:Holy crap! She's your sister?! Tell me!
?:*Ed scared him*WAAAAAA!!!
Winry:Stop it Ed! Why does it make a difference if they're related or not?!
Ed:Where's Al?! I need to tell him this!
Winry:He's upstairs with Eneri.
Ed:*runs up the stairs*
Winry:...What's his problem? *looks at ?*Hey what your name? Can you tell me?*smiles*
?:I-I'm Adam...*sniff* Nonell...*sniff*
Winry:I'm Winry Rockbell. Now can you tell me where you're from?
Adam:*shakes his head* I-I don't wanna go baaack... don't take me away from sissy...
Winry biggrin on't worry. I'm not going to send you away. Come on.*takes Adam by the hand* Lets go see your sister, alright?
Adam:*stops crying**grins at Winry*Yay~!
(Dee dee deeeeeee...)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:38 pm


(Teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen~!)
~~~ENERI'S ROOM~~~
Eneri:*glaring at Al from her bed* Are you gunna leave me alone yet?
Al:*staring at the floor* ...You're hurt... I can't leave...
Eneri:*glaring*What do you care! You're not the one who screwed up! Now leave me the hell alone! If I had my arms I'd throw something at you!
Al:...Why aren't you crying?
Eneri confused !*grits her teeth*
Al:...You should cry. You have every reason to.
Eneri:........Tch!*looks away from Al* J-Just go away already.
Al:...............*gets up to leave and gets to the door and is about to open it but...*
Ed:*opens the door and runs into Al*Bow! By bose!*translation"Ow! My nose!"*
Al:Sorry Brother!
Ed:*rubs his nose* Never mind me! *sees Eneri* Hey! *runs to her bed* What was your formula?! What did you use?!How did you know what to do?! Where are your notes?!
Eneri:*turns and looks coldly at Ed*........You want a formula for a failed transmutation? ...You're an idiot... *tears up a bit and starts glaring at the Elrics* I hate you! Both of you! You have everything I can't have! I'LL ALWAYS HATE YOU!!! NO MATTER WHAT THE CIRCUMSTANCES ARE!!! SO DON'T PITY ME!!! Ugh...*leans forward and starts crying*Waaaa... waaaaa...
Al:Eneri...
Ed:...Whadya mean failed? I found a kid who says he's your-
Adam:*standing in the doorway behind Al and staring at Eneri with big eyes*Sis...sy...
Eneri:*hears him but can't see because Al's in the way* Adam...? HEY TINCAN! MOVE IT! NOW!!!
Al:*turns and sees Adam* Oh! Sorry!*moves*
Adam:*runs and hugs Eneri and starts bawling*S-SISSYYYYY!!!!! WAAAAA!!!!!
Eneri:*tearing up*It did work... *rests her head on Adam's head* Sorry it took so long bro. Welcome back.
Adam:WAAAAAAAAAA!!! IT WAS SCARY!!!
Eneri:....I know... it's alright now... ...Shrimp and Tincan! Get out!
Ed:Why should we!?
Al:Come on Ed...*drags him out*
Ed:HEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!
Al:*shuts the door*
Ed:Al! I wasn't done asking her what sh-
Al:Shh! Listen brother.*points to the door*
Ed: What is it?*puts his ear on the door*
Eneri:*singing her own version of Brothers inside*
Al:Eneri sings well, doesn't she brother?
Ed:...............Come on lets go down stairs already.*starts walking downstairs*
Al:Ahh?! Wait up!*follows him*
(The lyrics of Eneri's version of brothers actually exist.)

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