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skumskull

PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:44 pm


Sometimes the things that we hold dear
Are the things that hurt us most
Sometimes the feelings that we fear
Are the things that we adore
I’m twisted sideways by his words
But I don’t know why right now
I’m feeling binded by these chords
And feel ive been here before

Intercepted
I wanna feel ok
A funny feeling
That I feel today
Anticipation
I wanna find my way
It is a killer
To feel this way
To feel this way

Sometimes the things that we cant hear
Are the things that leave us deaf
Sometimes the things that we cant see
Are the things that look the best
I’m ripping stitches at his words
But I don’t know why right now
I’m feeling empty and ignored
And I’m laughing
empty and ignored
empty and ignored

Intercepted
But I feel ok
A funny feeling
That I feel today
Anticipation
I wanna find my way
It is a killer
To be intercepted
I just wanna feel ok
A funny feeling
That I feel today
Anticipation
I wanna find my way
It is a killer
To feel this way
To feel this way
It is a killer
To feel this way
To feel this way
PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:56 pm


As a song; very good.
I liked.

As a poem; Needs work.

(:

Peek Aw Chu


skumskull

PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:21 pm


Peek Aw Chu
As a song; very good.
I liked.

As a poem; Needs work.

(:

it's a song... i have weird-a** chords for it and everything... maybe record it soon... dunno...
PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:52 pm


skumskull
Peek Aw Chu
As a song; very good.
I liked.

As a poem; Needs work.

(:

it's a song... i have weird-a** chords for it and everything... maybe record it soon... dunno...

I knew it was lyrics.
But ever since I started writing actual poetry I've looked at it from both sides, and worked on them in the same way. smile
It's a useful thing to take up.

Peek Aw Chu


skumskull

PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:01 am


Peek Aw Chu
skumskull
Peek Aw Chu
As a song; very good.
I liked.

As a poem; Needs work.

(:

it's a song... i have weird-a** chords for it and everything... maybe record it soon... dunno...

I knew it was lyrics.
But ever since I started writing actual poetry I've looked at it from both sides, and worked on them in the same way. smile
It's a useful thing to take up.

i started as a poet and slow grew into lyric writing...
i've been listening to a boatload of radiohead lately and this was an attempt to try out their lyric style.... i really dig it... usually i'm much more for extended loose metaphors...
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