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 Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:10 pm
this is for any one interested in writing or poetry XD post fan fic (t-rated) here too XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:14 pm
this is an old poem i wrote one day when i was feeling depressed XD
I’m sorry for the pain iv caused
I’m sorry you feel that way
I didn’t want it to turn out this way
I gess that was my mistake
I don’t want to disappoint you
I don’t want you to turn your back
The trust you placed in me is shattered
I abused it and threw it away
My carelessness was futile
I should of listened.
Now look
I’m on my knees in tears
Wishing for that trust
Wishing I could forgive my self
Forgive my foolishness
I’m sorry for the pain iv cased
I`m sorry you feel that way
I`m upset that it ended this way..
I`m sorry…..
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:22 pm
Full Of Envy this is an old poem i wrote one day when i was feeling depressed XD I’m sorry for the pain iv caused I’m sorry you feel that way I didn’t want it to turn out this way I gess that was my mistake I don’t want to disappoint you I don’t want you to turn your back The trust you placed in me is shattered I abused it and threw it away My carelessness was futile I should of listened. Now look I’m on my knees in tears Wishing for that trust Wishing I could forgive my self Forgive my foolishness I’m sorry for the pain iv cased I`m sorry you feel that way I`m upset that it ended this way.. I`m sorry….. That's pretty good! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:26 pm
really? thanx i was feeling really bummed the day i wrote it XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:29 pm
Apparently that's when the best stuff is created.
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:30 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:37 pm
I mean when I wrote Glimpse(another poem) I was having such an emo day! Same for Cry too!
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:08 pm
lol man i know who that is....
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:32 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:34 pm
lol i mean how sorry my spelling suck i good fraction of the time....
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:36 pm
Yea I've noticed that. I suck too but most of the time I have spellcheck. Not today though.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:40 pm
ya i have spell check to but some times i just go with the word that sounds correct..
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:42 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:43 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:45 pm
Hmm... should I post my fanfic I wonder...
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