Just a little Apathetic | Page 1 | The Cranky Writers' Guild | Guild Forums

Gaia Guilds

The Cranky Writers' Guild

Back to Guilds

The Cranky Writers' Guild

Just a little Apathetic

JadedLaine

Offline

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 6:29 pm

Splinters of you
like a semi forgotten dream
images in my mind
sparked by nothing
but a broken lyric and
a passing car.
I saw you everywhere,
and wished you were nowhere.
Wishing I hated you more
and loved you less
and was just a
little apathetic.

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 10:39 am

Would someone mind giving me an opinion on this?

JadedLaine

Offline

UglyDisneyPrincess

Offline

Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 5:56 am

but a broken lyric and
a passing car.

That line really stood out to me, since my bedroom is right over a busy street and at night my thoughts always launch into tangents based off what other people are spewing out their stereo systems. It's very sentimental and sweet, should be a song except it doesn't rhyme. I've never been in a relationship dealing with love, but this is still neat. Something you'd find scrawled in black crayon on a wall somewhere and sigh over, you know?

Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 7:27 pm

I agree with UglyDisneyPrincess, it does have a certain lyrical quality to it.

Illiandra

Offline

Drakansa

Sexy Wife

Offline

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 12:38 pm

*sigh*
I love it so so much.
I like the way its broken up. It adds a lot to the feeling of it heart

The Cranky Writers' Guild

Welcome to Gaia! ::

Gaia Guilds

The Cranky Writers' Guild

Quick Reply

More Information