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Paper Hearts (Drabble)

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desiredblasphemy

PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:10 pm


A Kingdom Hearts drabble that I wrote last year out of boredom and a love for MaruNami.
Warning!: This drabble contains fluff between the characters Marluxia and Namine. If you are at all offended by the pairing of these two characters, please keep it to yourself. Criticize the writing, not my taste in couples.

Paper Hearts


He sits on the edge of the bed and she stands in between his knees. Her small hands capture his larger ones, and she smiles as she presses something into his palm. It is a sheet of pink paper, folded intricately into a heart.

"We don't have them, so I thought I'd make you one," she explains. Seeing her beaming, so utterly happy, he can't help but smile back.

"I have a heart," he says. He takes her tiny hands in his, and he holds her palms against his chest. Then, he places one of his hands on her chest, and she breaks one of her own free to cover it.

"You are my heart."
PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:42 pm


That was cute. :3
Perhaps that's just my love for drabbles talking. I always admired how people could write so little, but the words say so much. I always have to talk far longer than should be necassary to get my point across.

egoxromantic

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desiredblasphemy

PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 9:46 am


Thank you!
I tend to write drabbles and short oneshots more often than anything, because I find them to be simpler and more suited to my writing style. I don't usually handle length well; I have this awful fear of purple prose, and shorter stories present less of an opportunity for me to accidentally start using it. xD
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:34 pm


Haha.
I have a fear off drabbles, that if I write a decent one people will say: I wish you had written more.
D:

I write oneshots because they're easier. I have more time to write them... and also I tend to get bored with chapter fics or run out of ideas.

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