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Aphiliam

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 3:50 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 8:32 pm


No love? No comments? Nothing?! sad How sad.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 8:41 pm


I don't know much about poems, sorry. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 5:24 pm


Thank you for posting anyway. <3

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 11:16 am


I love yours ^^
Here's mine:

A Mirror of My Memory

The snowflake falls, gently, gently. Almost as if it were too delicate to fall.
The wind sweeps through the desolate garden as I look around this hall.
This lonely grey place hold not a trace of the thing I seek and wish for the most.
I was led here through desperation and fear, so I do not ask for more than a host.

Someone please find me, I'm lost and alone, in a mirror of memory.
And I have been waiting for countless years for someone to set me free.
All I ask is a hand to reach through the glass and pull me through.
It does not matter anymore where that hand might pull me to...

The winter wind sweeps, slowly, slowly. Almost as if it were to tired to blow.
The layer of frost clouds the crystal windows as I look for a place to go.
This cold, dark land I don't understand doesn't seem to have what I wish to see.
I found this world and hid from the cold only to be trapped in a reflection of reality.

Dreaming, dreaming, nightmares and tears. Not a moment of peaceful rest.
My host seems so cruel, invisible to me. Am I to be a permanent guest?
This hall of mirrors shows only me, in poisoned glamour of my vanity.
This memory, so painfully sweet, I feel as if driven towards insanity.

So here I walk, lost and alone, everyone else seems dead and gone.
I look at the garden of desolation, seeking to fullfill my desperation.
And as I look upon the land, I think I might finally understand....
but until I grasp my reality, I'll be here in a mirror of my memory...
PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 9:51 pm


Very nice! I like all of them! <3<3 Maybe we should set up a thread where everyone can submitt their poetry for everyone to read... Maybe even a poetry contest?

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:37 pm


+[Adania]+
Very nice! I like all of them! <3<3 Maybe we should set up a thread where everyone can submitt their poetry for everyone to read... Maybe even a poetry contest?
no wierd links for those. ^^
PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:30 pm


I'd share my poetry....

but I'm veeery shy of people reading it.. gonk

besides, everyone here seems alot better than I, so I shall keep on the low tide. 3nodding

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Mekaama

PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 9:09 pm


@ Aphliliam: scrap the last line of the first poem, the turn in tone doesn't suit it. But other than the last line I like it.
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