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Please rate my drawing?

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Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:14 pm

http://media.nterface.com/images/7161606/168x420.jpeg
It took me like an hour to do this. Any comments are loved. If you insult this all I ask is that you give reason and explanation why.

Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:45 pm

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4/5
You would've done better if you fix up the hands, and legs.
Especially the left thigh is a bit too big or the knee is way up too high
Other than that you've done a great job~
It looked best if colored too(:

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Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:43 pm

4/5
It's a great start, but there are a few things that you need to work on. The proportions of the body are pretty good, but I suggest that you try sketching your or someone else's hand so you can get a feel for how it bends and looks. And also, the positioning is a little awkward, but totally fixable with some more practice. If her lower body is facing one direction, then it would make sense that the upper body and face would be facing that direction a little more too, and vice versa. Overall, it's really good - better than when my first attempts at drawing. LOL.

Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:03 pm

3/5 - proportions a facial features need work

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Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 8:31 pm

It's nice but a lot of the proportions are wrong, but your only starting out then you get a 4/10

Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:03 pm

I think that this lineart has some real potential. If you were to go back and really study the human body and include areas of muscle I think you'd have an easier time making sure everything was in order.

Usually, when I draw (now-a-days xp) I sketch the major muscles on my figure before I add on any other layers. This allows me to make sure that they're turning in a natural way, that the foreshortening is correct, and that everything is in perspective to one another. You know? So, I like it. I like how she's happy and cheerful, and I think she has a neat outfit. I also think that no work is finished (ever) until it's a masterpiece.

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