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Freak Show [Kingdom Hearts II Yaoi]

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Nobodys Fault

PostPosted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:32 pm


Warning:
In this fanfiction there is horribly written gore, blood, sadness, BAD British puns, blood, fire, fake french accents, blood, emo kids, angsty blondes, blood, Doctor Who references, blood, mad drunken raves, giant hammers, scars, the number 8, slight yaoi tendencies, the number 10, blood, singing, and a train.
I will not be held responsible for nightmares, daymares, or insomnia.
IF ANY OF THIS DOES NOT APPEAL TO YOU THEN TURN BACK!

Yes, it has happened.

Nobody wrote another damn Kingdom Hearts fanfiction.

Will she ever stop?

The world may never know.

[I have many, many more if you didn't know]

Quick overview--
It has grown into a little bit Yaoi in later chapters.

It's horror. Like, gore and crap. And my first time writing horror, so it's not very good.

It's all Organization XIII, because that's all I ever write about.

Inspiration: The Greatest Show Unearthed by Creature Feature and W I T H_A L L_H E A R T S

Damn that girl. She is very good at making me want to write fanfictions.

Disclaimer: I do not and never will own Kingdom Hearts or any of it's characters. (Although I totally wish I did. I want an Axel)

Whelp enjoy.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:33 pm


A/N--
Alright, chapter one.
Actually, I wrote this a long time ago. Late December...I think. Anyway, it's really short compared to the other chapters.
Thank you Hearts for all the blood sweat and tears put into this damn 5 paragraph chapter. We are so cool.

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Freak Show
A Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction


Chapter one: The beginning


This is how it is: there was a poor man, handsome, good at cards, polite, British. He lived alone in a small apartment owned by a large man with black dreadlocks and mutton chops. The poor man, mentioned before, had just received his last warning. His rent was one month late.

The man’s name was Luxord and he was to be evicted if he kept putting it off. Stressed, worried, and more than anything else, regretting the munny he wasted that card game last week Luxord started packing. Attempting to pay off the 20,000 munny that he owed was simply impossible.

“You are a month late, I’ll be back in two days to collect the munny, if not then you have to leave,” Those were the landlord, Xaldin’s, exact words. His indigo eyes trembled yet his emotionless expression was perfectly straight. The perfect poker face.

Luxord agreed, yet he had no intentions to actually pay the man. He was going to pack his few possessions that night and wait until the last day when he would run, like he always does. He would find another apartment in another town. He would weasel his way into their trust with his polite manor and fake British humor, and then he would cheat them and run.

Luxord rarely left his house, other than at night, so the workings and events of the modern world was lost to him. Because of this, Luxord was surprised to hear about the side show circus that was in town. “Free” is what caught the Brit’s attention. “Free” was good. “Free” was a pass time. “Free” was, well, free.

The free pulled him to the circus like a moth to a flame. It was dangerous and reckless and not something you should do when you are getting evicted within the week. Get too close and…

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Alright, review please.
If you like it, say so! I've got plenty more!

Nobodys Fault


egoxromantic

Anxious Conventioneer

PostPosted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 12:02 pm


Um.. way to leave a person hanging. ._.
You should keep posting... because it was well written so far, but because of the lack of... well... story? All I can say is well written.

Edit:
Forgot to mention~ I love your avi. <3
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