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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:52 pm
Judging Rubric::
/10 Creativity/Originality
/10 General Appeal
/10 Matching
/10 Layering
/10 Theme
/50 total
Judging due March 11. (:
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:53 pm
115//150 Dee - 10. 8. 7. 7. 8. = 40 It matches well, but it's not super appealing to me. DII - 8.5/7/7/6.5/7= 36 Im not sure how to feel about this one pug. You had possibly one of the hardest gowns, just because that shape is hard to layer in one piece. Given this fact, i'd say you did pretty well but at the same time the layering is a bit simplistic givent the theme of this round. Gin: 9, 8, 7, 7, 8 = 39
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:55 pm
137.5//150 Dee - 10. 9. 8.5. 9. 10. = 46.5 I think this is a pretty nice tektek. Matching is good. Nice layering. DII - 8.5/8.5/9/8.5/8.5= 43 Im a big fan of the head of this avatar. I am in love with the head. not so much the face but just the intricate design of the head. Down towards the torso i'm less impressed but still a fan, and then at the legs im completely un dazzled. As far as Jam designs go i'd say this isint your best work. For each of the gowns i picked there were certain area's that were supposed to be hard to work with, this one has the opening of the legs working against the curve of the dresses tail, and all i see going on there is Jinxi's charm shorts and that little scarf thing. It's not terrible, none of these entries are, but it's not up to your set par either. Gin: 10, 10, 9, 9, 10 = 48
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:56 pm
118//150 DII - 10/7/7/7/8.5=41.5 Some of the layering is a bit iffy for me, and in a layering based challange that is not something that should be true. For example the urn used at the bottom. I agree that you needed some sort of item to detail the bottom of that gown, that was one of the reasons that this gown was chosen, because that area is extremely difficult to layer but the way you selected to do it was not the best. I do however like your basic theme. The shades.. need a lot of work. Dee - 10. 5. 7.5. 7. 8 = 37.5 This doesn't flow well. It's not terrible, you matched, but the layering looks a bit messy. Gin: 9, 8, 7, 7, 8 = 39
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:01 pm
114//150Dee - 10. 6.5. 6.5. 9. 8.5 = 40.5 I think you could have done better with spreading out the colors, for example by having more white on the bottom. I like how this keeps the definite shape of a dress. dii - 10/7/6.5/9.5/8.5=31.5 i think you could have distributed the blue a little more in small tints while still keeping your personal theme. The arms are a little bare even with the texture you've given. I do like however that you were able to balance skin tone within the ensemble. Gin: 10, 7, 7, 9, 9 = 42
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:02 pm
91.5//150Cyan Azzura Ri 
Ta-da!dii: 7:7:5.5:7=26.5 I think this would have looked so much better if you would have had it be more than one color, at the same time your shades of white are all pretty different from one another i dont think theres alot going for you in that category of judging, you really lost alot of points there. Dee - 6. 6. 7. 7. 7. = 33 When working with different shades of white on Gaia, you have to really focus on matching, because it looks terrible if you don't. It may seem to match because they're all whites, but really it seems as if you just threw on a whole bunch of random whites and said, "Okay it matches!". I'm not saying that you necessarily did this, but it looks like you did. Maybe you tried really hard, but again, that's the danger (wrong word usage, but i'm hoping it still makes sense) in using different shades of white. It usually doesn't turn out very appealing. Using just one or two whites would have probably looked better because it would have been easier to match and not looked like it was all over the place. I wish you would've just added a new color to it. I think it could've turned out awesome. Gin: 7, 6, 6, 6, 7 = 32
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:04 pm
136//150-Le Chien Chat-  I hope you enjoy this. The dress was incredibly hard to work with... But I thank you guys for giving me such an interesting dress. It turned out so pretty, literally showing my love of Victorian dress. : D So there's a little piece of me in that avi. XD Dee - 10. 7.5. 7. 9.5. 10. = 44 Nice matching, and awesome layering. I'm loving the Victorian. More of that goldish yellow on top, like on your head would have been nice, but I don't know how possible that is. Overall, I like it. (: Dii - 10-8-7.5-10-10= 45.5 I really like this. It may just be my favorite for this round. I would have never imagined that this came from such an ugly item. the theme completely changes out of old sea witch to beautiful victorian. I wish there was a little more brown near the face but considering the limitations of gaia's items this was definitely a splendid avatar. Gin: 10, 8.5, 8, 10, 10 = 46.5
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