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Shokotsku

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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 1:53 pm

I did this one 2 years ago. At that time I didn't like getting into shading.http://i50.tinypic.com/2m48tqx.jpg

I did this one last year (I was really in to Naruto Shippuden).http://i50.tinypic.com/jijcig.jpg

This one was done like last week. I made my brother download GIMP on his laptop so I could color it, but he uninstalled it and change the administrative password.http://i47.tinypic.com/r2uys5.jpg

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:18 pm

Your third picture has the same link as the second picture.

They're pretty good overall, but there are a few things that seem weird... For example, in the second picture, the guy on the left seems like his eyes and nose are too high.

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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:25 pm

fixed it

Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:07 pm

His eye seems like it might be on a weird angle and his mouth might look a bit better of it was a bit higher. His jaw looks like it's a bit forward too much... maybe. I dunno, a lot of things are done quite well, but some other things seem a bit off.

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