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Hm... It's hard to say with these pictures.

What tools do you use for line and colour? I would suggest using better paper than your class note paper. Try to get a bristol. It's like a thin cardboard that takes pencil, ink, marker, or whatever well. Whatever you used is bleeding a lot and makes things look less clean and controlled.

Here is another one i made this one for my friend

I'll be commenting on the chibi pic =)

I like the nice, solid colors. I see that you've done some shading on the skin, perhaps try some variation of the shading thickness - it'd look more natural.

Try some white paint on certain parts (e.g devil's tailtip, wings, breast, boots, etc) for some highlights!

In the first picture, the guy's torso is way too long. You could probably even cut it in half. In the second, I know crap about graffiti, so I'll just talk about the person. It looks like you were going for a super epic jump. When someone's jumping then their limbs are going to be spread out, like the Air Jordan logo. It doesn't have to be exactlly like that, but that's the idea. It doesn't look as dynamic as it could because his body is so compact. Composition tip of the night: Diagonals in composition are used to convey movement. Right now the figure is mostly vertical. Most vertical things are not usually known for their mobility. Trees, pillars, and light poles are all pretty stable objects. Making his limbs, or possibly his torso, more diagnal, that would also help show movement.

thank you for the crits ill keep it in mind

new art work did all of this for the art freebie forum
Amy
Adnarium
Anastasia
Lisa

soccerangel
dark hand
sleeping penguin
These r some sketches i did over the week plz leave some comments

In the eyes: The real eye looks flat. Obviously you were going for dimension since you added the shadows but the contours, and the way you drew them, detracts from that. It doesn't look fleshy. Eyelids are covering the eye ball, which is round. The transition from the inner corner tear thingy (I forgot the name) to the rest of the lid helps. It doesn't just go out into a straight point, the inner corner kind of pinches inward. more how you drew the outer corner. The outer corner is the pointer one, because the eyelid corners meet. Also, there should be more shading to the eyelids because they are fleshy and stick out quite a bit from the eye lid. This in turn makes the lashes look almost like they're growing from under the eyelids. It would help to study the profile of the eye. You may need a friend or photo.