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 Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 6:55 pm
I know life can be a mess, All the pain and stress always leaves you
taking a guess. Is it all worth it….Should I just give up and quit, Having
suicidal thoughts, U tried it but got caught. Now your in a mental home,
Wishing you could call him/her on the phone. Now You sit down and write
a poem. Then you look up in the sky, knowing life is all a lie, and you just
wanna die, then you get a call and guess what you saw. It was him/her
leaning on the wall with arms covered across yelling baby I don’t want
you to fall. Then in tears screaming in your ears, I love you and I don’t
want you to go, If you kill yourself the darkness will drag you below, but
please give it your best though, I want you too rise and glow like the star
you are, So smoke a cigar and relax, soon we’ll be laying back, and
giving the finger to life to the max and being better than that. Then he/her
leaves, then you start to believe………there is a purpose
Don’t do it…
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:03 pm
Wow.
That was beautiful. crying
Do you do write poetry regularly?
That was amazing.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:25 pm
very insightful.
poetry is a great release from all the hideous factors of life that make us want to end it all. i know this because i am a poet myself, although i only write every few months. inspiration is hard for me to find.
keep writing. this is beautiful. <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:22 pm
Ella Franki Wow.That was beautiful. crying Do you do write poetry regularly? That was amazing. yea i do and i love poetry it makes me feel a little bit better and im letting out feelings in the process glad u liked it as for my own opinions on poems i dont think im any good im not a very conceited person =
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