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 Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:00 pm
basicely a remake of our old one...ONLY BETTER.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:18 pm
my ocs past my oc Name:Anala Age:17 proficon:Thife/spy bio: Anala was abandoned at a young age, well not really but no one knoes what happend to her parents. Because of this she dosent know how to act around other humans, being mostly scared of them. She lives in an abandent tempel with a few Jackles. She gets along better with them, though she dose like to sneek into the palice sometimes to take bits of food though mostly to watch Seth from afar. Apperance:  crush:Seth (aka high preist Seto) text color: blackItem:locket. present Name:Alice Age:17 Past: Alice moved to Japan Because she and her father couldent affored living in the states and he could only get a job there. she used to live near the sea so she would swim all the time and go camping. Personaly: shes the kind of girl that she dosent care what people think. its not there bisnues if she likes to ware Lolita style once in a while. Because of this she can seem mean at first but you would really jest need to get to know her. Apperince:  Item/yami:locket/anala Realishep with Yami: they get along well enufe, thay have spiffs but nothing bad. text color: dark blue
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:10 pm
~*~*~*ORANGE's OCs*~*~*~ ~~~~past Ammeterasu  aka: Amme Age: 16 Gender: Female Title: Royal Healer Story: Amme was born to a commoner family but when they saw she had the power to heal they offered her up to the Pharaoh. She was only a child when they discovered the power, they wanted to give her to the Pharaoh to not only help him and the royal family, but to give Amme a better life then what they could provide her. As a child she was heavily picked on, it was no secret that she was from the outside. However, as she grew up people began to respect her- since the very people who picked on her were ones who needed her help at one point or another. She never denied anybody. Personality: Calm, quiet, kind, secretive, lonely, gentle. Millennium Item: Millennium Orb Crush: Atem Text Color: Teal~~~~future Akiko Sarandon  Age: 16 Gender: Female Title: Student at Domino City HS Story: Akiko was born in Okinawa, Japan. Her mother is full Japanese and her father is Italian. Her father was not the best person, he abused Akiko's mother and ignored Akiko. At the age of 4, her father left them. However, when Akiko was 6 her mother met her soon to be step father, who she considers to be her real dad even though she knows he isn't. And even though her and her mother hate Akiko's biological father, they like the rest of his side of the family (his side of the family calls Akiko's biological father the "black sheep of the family"). They moved to Domino City when Akiko was entering into high school. Akiko is very much into music, playing instruments, and singing. She also enjoys games, preferably video games. Personality: Fun, shy until she gets to know someone, outgoing when she does know someone, humorous, a little childish, doesn't let people know what's upsetting her, sensitive, can get angry if provoked enough, happy, caring. Millennium Item: Millennium Orb Spirit (yami): Ammeterasu Relationship with her Yami: The two of them are almost opposites, yet they share a lot of similarities. Amme is very mother like to Akiko. Sometimes they argue but it's never anything serious. When it looks like Akiko is day dreaming, she's usually talking to Amme. Crush: Yugi Text Color: Dark Orange
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:19 pm
CANNON CHARACTERS:
*Egyptian times*
Atem- Anubisgirl
Seth- OrangeWindMage7
Mana- Anubisgirl
Mahado- OrangeWindMage7
Bakura- OrangeWindMage7
Ishuzu- OrangeWindMage7
Ryo- Anubisgirl
Shada= Anubisgirl
MINOR PARTS/CHARACTER TYPE COLOR
*Egyptian times
Commoner men
Weak enemies
Guards (Bakura)
Serious enemies
*Present time*
Joey- OrangeWindMage7
Yugi- Anubisgirl
Seto- OrangeWindMage7
MINOR CHARACTERS
*Present time*
Female teacher
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:30 pm
(im used to doing center posts now lol. and amme has no pic, it be pritty) Atem looked around the room from his thrown, mostly to see if there was a way to sneek out. All his priests were present as well as guards, that ment no, he was stuck there, lissing to reports about crime rate, sells and what ever else. He knew that this was part of being Pharaoh but couldent it be a little more intersting, like when Mahado had to show the prograss of some of his students, that was usaly fun to watch. note to self, make excape door in thrown he thought to himself, he wouldent really do that, he was jest having one of those days ware he jest dident want to do anything.
Outside sitting in a corner of the court yard Anala sat and munched on an apple that she took from the kitchen. she was sitting out there to wait and see if any of the priests would come out, well really jest one, she lurend almost no one came over to that corner so she felt safe there sitting in her old black torn dress jest waiting to see if she would get lucky.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:36 pm
Unlike Atem who was contemplating how to escape the palace, Amme was already out and about the villagers. It wasn't because she didn't like the palace or anything of the sort. It was because she knew a lot of people within the kingdom were in need of healing. She noticed it when she was young, when many came to the palace seeking help. They never told them of their young healer. So instead, Amme went out to them, seeing to anyone who was in need. Of course, sneaking out was getting harder and harder now-a-days. Besides general people looking for her when they needed her for anything, Priest Seth had taken it upon himself to keep an extra eye on her. He didn't believe her ideology- that she should be out and helping anybody. It led to arguments, arguments that seemed very one sided. Yes she voiced her opinion, but she wasn't very good at standing up to anyone. She would have to make it back soon before Seth started looking for her. Amme pulled the hood on her cloak more over her face so nobody could tell who she was. All they knew was that she was a healer, nothing more.
Seth was the only one to wonder into the court yard. However, he was not facing the direction of where Anala was. He had with him scrolls that he wanted to study. He knew nobody would be in the court yard, not to mention, the lighting was much better then the records room with candle light. He looked up at the sun, he had a good amount of time until other priests came to pollute the area. Seth wasn't a very social person, he enjoyed his solitaire way of life. He was a serious man, someone who wanted to simply learn and better the kingdom. He seldom participated in social events. Rather, he stood off to the side and made sure things were in order. Festivities.... what a waste of time. Work had to be done and all anybody ever wanted to do was get drunk and dance. If it wasn't in celebration of the gods, he would force his opinion to ban such pointless things. Seth sat up against the tree and unraveled a scroll. He didn't even detect Anala's presence. At least not yet.
[[can I play the part of Bakura in the past? :3 ]]
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:52 pm
Atum was a bit jelice that Seth got to leave when he still had things to do. Normaly he dident mind this kind of thing, he knew it was part of responsabulty yes but still to day he jest dident want to. Couldent jest take one day to jest spent with the few friends he had and not worry about anything. He also started to wonder why Ra made the sun rise so early, he wosent much of a morrning person and dident like to be woken up. "Is there anything else that needs my attition" he asked and pryed to any god that would lessen the answer would be no
Anala stayed ware she was quietly. she had a little smile seeing Seth though thats all she did. she wondered what it would be like to hold him, or to have him do that thing ware you press your mouths togather. She wouldent know though, she knew that if she wanted a chance she would need to be smart, she always sees him reading, and she dident know how. She could mimic the symbols yes but she dident know what they ment. she tryed though, she had learned to wright her name and Seths, along with night and fly, that was really all she knew though. Maybe if she learned more she wouldent need to hide. She found a stick near her side and quietly made symbols in the dirt, she saw them on the walls outside so she figured they mean something, though she still kept her eyes and ears open for movement. (sure, ill go change the name)
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:32 pm
"Well," said one of the counsel members, "two things and that will be it. One is a reminder about the Festival of Khonsu, the god of the moon and time. All arrangements are on schedule- food, entertainment, everything is in order. It's scheduled for tomorrow night." The man then looked at the other men as he paused. He then said, "The last bit of business is, well, about your um..." the man paused again, "constant refusal of acceptable wives. The other counsel members are worried." The man froze for a few seconds, then tried to butter up his last statement, "I mean it's only been three refused sessions and if your not happy with any of them that's acceptable. The counsel just wants to remind you that you are not limited to one wife. So perfection does not have to be found in just one woman." It has been a worry within the counsel men. If the Pharaoh doesn't marry, he does not have children, he does not pass down the royal blood, the blood of the kings dies. That's all they really worried about, but it was a simple tradition that never seemed to be a problem before. There were no royal women capable of bearing children, so they looked to other kingdoms- other princesses.
Amme visited her last family and looked up at the sun. If she went right back now she would have no problem keeping another outing a secret. She made her way back to the palace, keeping her head down. She then stopped for a moment whole passing an alley. She felt like.... something was watching her. Which was silly because nobody was around. She looked around slowly, just incase. She looked down an alley way, filled with darkness. She stayed perfectly still, something was very ominous. She didn't care to find out, so she continued on her way, quickly. She noted to herself- not to leave the palace at night. The alley had spooked her even though she told herself that there was obviously nothing there. Finally she was back at the palace. But she could not simply enter through the steps like everyone else. She walked along the sides of the wall to find her secret passage.
Now that Seth was more settled down and had piece of mind, he felt almost like someone else was in the court yard. Was somebody? He was definite that he saw nobody. He looked up from his scrolls, nobody. He went back to reading his scrolls. Even as a child he was a studious person. Always by himself, finding a new document to read and learn from. He never even played with the other kids when younger! He was quite the loner. But why should he socialize? There wasn't anybody here that he connected with. Mostly because he thought everybody here was an idiot. Except the Pharaoh of course, nobody thought ill of him. Though he did wish the Pharaoh would work harder- it was dreadfully apparent to him that Atem would daze off during meetings and other important events. He couldn't imagine what he was day dreaming about or even why. Seth still felt like someone was near.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:02 pm
Atem forgot about that. He never understood why he had to pic from women that they said were good enufe for him, none of them would really care about him, he dident want to make a big seen though "I simply havent seen any as of yet that i think would make a good queen, I am simply waiting to see one that wants the best for Egypt" he said, it was only half a lie, there were plunty of women that he thought would be good as queen, there healer came to mind, though he tecenaly wosent alowed to pic her why should he care about that. "If it will make everyone feel better though I will choose from the next ones." he said simply to get it over with, He knew Isis and Amme would be there since they would take the bride to get fitted. and the next batch would take a few days to get ready.
Anala stayed still when she noticed movement. She wouldent want to be cought or killed because someone thought she wanted to hurt anyone, she dident. The palace jest had good food and Seth was there, Once she was sure he wosent looking in that direction anymore she made a few more lines in the dirt, now really jest doing it so she wouldent end up freezing up. After all if she was cought he might think shes a threat and do send her someware ware she couldent jest stay out of everyones buisness.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:49 pm
The consel men looked at each other, they also looked at the remaining priests who were there. The Pharaoh's priests somehow didn't look worried about his indecision. Well at least most of them. "Alright then," he answered taking Atem's word for it. "Then the meeting is complete," they said rising and bowing to the Pharaoh.
Amme counted her steps to the her path. She was there. She was easily able to climb up the wall using her environment around her. Even better was that it lead to the court yard- nobody was ever there at this time. And if she was still on schedule, Seth should still be in that meeting today. She climbed up and finally reached the top.
Now Seth knew he heard something. He closed the scroll and stood up. He walked over to where the noise was with the Millennium Rod close at hand. Surprisingly, it wasn't Anala he heard, he heard someone scaling the wall to the court yard. Once he reached the edge, he saw a hand grip the top. He knew nobody would be foolish enough to sneak in like this during the day. At least somebody who would get caught so easily. He had a good idea who it could be. So when the other hand came up to climb up Seth grabbed it and pulled the person up brutishly. And as he guessed, it was that damn healer. He took his free hand to pull off her hood once he pulled her up all the way. Needless to say, Amme look extremely shocked. "Why is it your tiny peasant mind can't comprehend one of your most important duties? Stay within the palace!" he said jerking her hand down and pulling her toward him. He used his free hand to point at her as he scolded her, "If someone here is hurt and dies because you were too busy playing outside with the rats, there will be a heavy price to pay, hear me now healer. I don't care if you don't want to be here, personally I don't want you here anyway. But your power is needed here."
Amme yelped when she was pulled up so harshly. What was Seth doing in the court yard?! Did the meeting finish early? There was no way he could be out here. But he was, and he caught her again. "Seth.... you're hurting me...." she said trying to get her hand back.
"Good. Maybe if you're hurt you'll listen better," he said out of pure anger. "Or maybe we can see if they can cut off your hand and use that to heal people. That way you can go back to your dirt people," he said just to scare her.
Amme's eyes widened. They wouldn't do that.... would they? That wasn't the first time someone has told her that.... they said that a lot when she was a child. But they hadn't done such a thing to her yet so they must not be planning it. "Seth.... I do not put my responsibilities behind me here. But are we not the ones who rule and care for our people? I do not spend much time out with the people while my whole life revolves around the palace. Please do not question my intentions, you should know where my loyalties stand," Amme said in a gentle meek voice.
Seth gritted his teeth and released her wrist. Amme always brought out the worse in him when she did stupid things like this. She was offered something no other commoner could have. She had everything here, why could she not obey this one rule? "Hmf," Seth said turning away from her, "Don't worry, you'll have all your after life to spend with your rat kind. You will ascend like us royalty will." Seth went back to the tree and picked up his scroll. Now he was in a bad mood. He came out here for piece and quiet and Amme had practically ruined that. He headed for the palace to try and find some piece and quiet.
Amme stood still until Seth went back into the palace. From there she took off her hooded robe revealing her palace clothing. She sat on the ground, trying to mentally calm herself. There were many things Seth said to upset her, but she mustn't let that get to her. She couldn't show that to others. She crossed her legs and placed her palms on her forehead, trying to relax. She had become a master of locking away everything that she felt she never let any of these feelings out. Unknowing to her, there was someone else in the court yard. If she was to turn around now, she would be able to see them easily.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:47 pm
about time Atem thought, he could use some fresh air as well so he walked out to the court yard, since that usaly made him feel at piece for a while any way.
Anala stayed still and watched the woman, Seth dident like her she could tell that much, but why. She dident seem mean but she dident know much about people, maybe she could help, but she dident have anything for her. She though then something cought her eye and she picked up a rock and slowly made her way to Amme
Atem streched and spotted Amme, she looked destresed, whatch ment she ran into Seth. He though he told him to try and be nice to her. He started over to her and saw a girl, with a rock behind Amme and got paniced "AMME BEHIND YOU!" he yelled
Right when that chought came Anala brought the rock down but dident hit Amme, she hit the snake that was behind her and crushed its head before it could bite. She was going to ask for help but Atem being there and how he yelled spooked her and she ran out of the cortyard.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:29 pm
Amme was so concentrated on everything that just happened that she didn't hear either the snake nor Anala sneaking up behind her. However, she suddenly heard her name called out. Her head shot up. Everything was so fast. She didn't even see the girl with the rock until she got up and spun around to see a rock, a smashed snakes head, and a girl running away from the courtyard. "Wha.... what happened???" Amme said as she backed up. The girl was already gone by the time Amme came to. She... saved her from that snake biting her? Who was she? She's never seen her before. Was she even a person of the palace? She looked back down at the snake. As much as she knew snakes were a threat not only to humans but to other animals, she still felt bad that it was dead. Incredibly thankful she was saved, but still a little sad. People always told her not to be sad for snakes or other animals that may harm humans when they are killed to protect. But she was over sensitive to such things.
She turned back to Atem and walked to him, "That snake...." she said a little stunned by everything. She closed her eyes and tried to focus, "who was that girl? She.... I didn't even see that snake and it could have bit me. I've seen those snakes before, and the bites they leave." She looked back down again. Someone just saved her life and she couldn't even say 'thank you'. She was interested to find out who that was.
Seth went directly to his room with his scrolls. When he calmed down again, he thought about everything that happened. Not that he cared about the healer, but over the presence he felt. It bothered him. He felt Amme's presence obviously because he heard her climbing. But he still felt like someone else was there. Which was ridiculous, he saw with his own eyes nobody was there. He irritatingly flopped his arms on the desk he sat at. Now it was on his mind, now it was going to ruin his concentration, now it was going to bug him. "Damn it," he said hating being distracted. Of course, he would have to wait a while, so not to run into Ammeterasu again. Seeing her would only anger him again, not to mention be incredibly awkward. "If I want piece of mind, I'll simply go out there, look around, and see I'm imagining things. Then I can get back to my work," he said to himself.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:06 pm
Atem went up to Amme and put his hands on her sholders to keep her calm "Snake?" he questioned and looked over and there was indeed a dead snake, so that girl was saving Amme not hurting her. "I thought that girl was going to hurt you...It looked like that form what i saw, I dident see the snake...she saved you" he said said going over it agen in his mind, it did make sence, Amme did her best not to make anyone hate her, well Seth hated her, he ddident know why but that wosent importent.
"I dont know who she was, iv never seen her before. but if she saved you then she must not be much threat" If she was going to hurt someone she would have right
He also knew how Amme was when it came to death though "Do you want to go inside. away from the snakes body" he asked softly. he could order a guard to clean it up on the way in.
Anala ran, jest ran, she stayed away from the populated aireas and jest ran to ware she knew she would be safe. some Allys though she wouldent go in, she jest would get a bad feeling. Once out of the city and to a run down tempel she lived at she stopped. "Snakes are stupid" she said to herself and sat on the steps, she was hopeing that Seth would come back out agen, now she would have to wait till they forgot that event before going back, and Seth only went out to the town to find crimanls. She wondered if she should get cought steeling, maybe she would have to see Seth in order to get locked away. Prisaners must be locked in the Palace, maybe the lesser ones got food ans she would be near Seth atleast. She might do that that night.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:32 pm
Within the shadows of the alley both Anala and Amme sensed hide the Thief King Bakura. He had been watching his surroundings all day. One must be knowledgeable before he hoped to obtain great power. He has seen that dessert dog girl before. She always lurks about. Bakura had made an extra note to himself to watch her. He wasn't sure who the robed girl was, he couldn't catch her face. Though he knew he has seen her before as well.
Amme said quiet a while longer in her thoughts. She looked back at Atem and nodded, "Yes." She followed him inside, trying to think of something else to say to him. She wasn't very good at coming up with conversations, she much more preferred to listen to other people talk. "How did the counsel meeting go?" she asked meekly. She's been to a few of them when all royal priests and members were obligated to go. Sometimes they were confusing, other times boring, sometimes there was a lot of debating, and other times they were informative. Atem always seemed pretty bored with all of them, she wondered if he was even listening to the issues at hand. That made her wonder what he was even thinking during the meetings.
Seth finally got up and walked back outside. Thankfully, Ammeterasu wasn't there anymore. He took another look around, this time more thoroughly. Nothing. It was his imagination the whole time. "Stupid...." he mumbled hating being disturbed from his work by nothing. He looked down for a second and saw something strange. A dead snake, it's head bashed in. He thought nothing of it as he kicked it off to the side, "Disgusting," he commented.
"High Priest Seth," a voice called out behind him.
"Ugh, what is it now?" he mumbled to himself. He turned around to see a one of the palace women approaching him. He rolled his eyes then looked back at her, "What is it?"
The woman bowed to him, as she came up she brought out a golden fan and fanned herself seductively. "I come with a message from the guards. They want me to tell you not to forget about tonight. As you know, they have been investigating in the theft and killings of the commoners live stock. They need you to go with them tonight as arranged," she said. She was a simple messenger, but that didn't mean she couldn't flirt with him. Many women in the palace flirted with Seth, and why not? He was powerful, wise, attractive. Other women also flirted with Mahado for the same reason.
"I'm not a simpleton, I haven't forgot," he scowled at the girl. Not because of the message, but because he thought most of the palace women who flirted were just simply whores. Of course, he could not say such things to them. "I will be there as arranged. Now go," he said turning his back to her. Unlike Mahado, Seth gave these women close to no attention. It wasn't that he hated women, he simply hated these leeches who constantly plagued him. And contrary to popular belief, he didn't completely hate Ammeterasu. At least she had more common sense then these wenches. Too bad she couldn't listen to simple rules.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:39 pm
Atem sighed a little "jest information about the celabration tomarow, that livestock have been being killed and a slight increse in food being stolen" he said. despite how he looked when in meeting he did pay attition, though yest livestack and food going missing was importent, atleast none of the people have gatten hurt by who ever is doing it. It ovesaly wosent a normeal thife "I do know Jackles have been seen every few days, there the most likely reasion livestock have been dieing. and I think whoever is taking the fruit is jest hungrey, otherwise more importent things would go missing" thats how he could tell Bakura and his men wernt behand it, thay killed who ever they were taking from.
"and then that stupid wife thing" Atem said, he was pharaoh he was alowed to call it stupid "I dont know how they expect me to pic a woman that jest wants to be rich and have power." he looked at her and gave a soft smile "personaly i think you would make a better queen than any of them." he told her
Mana kicked her legs from the balcaney she was sitting on, there must be something she could do to help find who was stealing the food. Maybe she could try a traking spell, but she dident know any yet. Still she dident like that she couldent do anything to help.
Anala had seen some of the girls that flirt with pritty much everyone at the palace. They all had nice close and looked really nice. She looked at her reflection in a streem, her cloths were torn and dirty, as was most of herself. those girls talked to Seth all the time, he probely liked them more, she never stole more than food but maybe some new close and washing up in the water would giver her a chance of him atleast looking at her. Maybe she would see if she could get anything while she waited for the jackles to get done eating. She fallowed them around because she ate what little they dident, she did that since she first learnted they get food.
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