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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:39 am
The rain was falling hard on her where she was running through the forest, but she didn’t mind. The only thing that was going through her mind was to run. Run for her life. She didn’t know what was chasing her, but it was big, mean and it was hungry. Sometimes she only heard it’s footsteps, other she could feel it’s hot breath in her neck. She was so afraid, so scared, so alone. The forest was blurry for her vision, and she couldn’t see properly the ground. The only thing that was clear was the sounds behind her, and the fear of getting captured. Suddenly she fell to the ground. The cold mud under her splashed up to her face, and her heart almost stooped. She looked back, in time to see the creature loom over her. It had big red eyes, it’s mouth opened showing white teeth with splatter of red blood on them.
She screamed. She covered her face whit hear arms, shutting her eyes and wishing that she wouldn’t die yet. The monster roared, but there was something wrong. She didn’t know what to do, but when it all became quiet, and she didn’t feel any pain, she looked up. There, instead of the monster now stood a person. A woman to be more precise. But she was only a silhouette, the only thing that had colour, was her eyes. Ruby red. The person hunkered down to her level, looking her straight in the eyes. -“ Maria, are you okay?” That voice, it sounded so familiar. She felt how someone shook her, and her vision became blurry once more. -“ Maria, wake up.”
Maria opened her eyes, and saw her mother sit on her bedside looking at her whit worried eyes. -“ How are you sweety?” He mother asked worried. “You screamed.” -“ Ah...I did?” Maria said, sitting up from bed. She was in her room again, and the sun told her that it was still morning. -“ Yes you did.” Her mother sighted. “You have been having lots of bad dreams these past few weeks. Is there something troubling you?” -" No." Maria said and let out a yawn. “ Not what I know about.” She smiled a little. Her mother sighted, but smiled. -“ Okay, but you know you can always talk to me, right?” -“ Right. Now get out so I can get dressed.” Maria said laughing. Her mother kissed her on the forehead before walking through the door. Maria looked at the door, before she sighted and got up. She looked at herself in the mirror, the dream still fresh in her head. She didn’t know what to think about it. It was just...there, making her sleep time more tiring then anything ells. She sighted, before walking to her closet. -“ I hope my dreams stop’s soon. Or ells I’ll go crazy.”
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So I was in a writing mood today, and decided I wanted to share whit you guys. Tell me what you think, but be nice when coming to spelling. My English spelling isn't the best, and when you are a little dyslexia (Is that even the right word in English?) it's kinda hard. I can't even spell that good in my mouther tongue. But I'm trying and that counts right? Oh well, hope you had a good read!
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:56 pm
Very good book. Kept me on the edge of my seat. (I would say toes, but I'm on a chair so... sweatdrop )
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ThatMayhemMayFollow Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 5:07 pm
dylexic, yeah, that makes it difficult. but it's really cool.
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:25 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:36 am
Love it! some advice ells=else
Other than that fantastic!
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:40 am
Thank you all for you're comments! heart I'm writing Chapter one now, I hope I can get it up by tomorrow, but I'm not sure... Oh well, we'll see!
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