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Marsh the Sex Panda

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:50 am


T.o.C
01. T.o.C
02. Personality
03. Physical Desc
04. Home Life
05. Extra
PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:51 am


Personality


Name: Justin Aaron Mitchell

Nicknames: Aaron, Mitch

Age: 24

Birthday: July 25th, 1988

Sign: Leo

Blood Type: B-

Fav. Food: Spaghetti, he loves Spaghetti Tuesdays

Hated Food: Gourmet cuisine, he prefers good hardy food

Job: Mechanic at Jonny’s Auto Repair

Hobbies: Parties – Justin loves parties. He loves hosting parties, going to parties, crashing parties. He just loves the atmosphere, all the people and the loud music. His favourite is crowded house parties where you can’t move through a room without brushing up against people. He likes to mingle, hopping from one group to another, not at all shy with new people. He likes to have a good time, and will talk or dance with pretty much anyone. Cliques are for lame asses who are too scared to branch out of their circle of friends. Justin is the guy who’s most likely to be found in a bathroom getting high with three random strangers, and why not? Strangers are just friends you haven’t met yet.

Gamer – When Justin’s bored he can usually be found playing a game of some sort, his favourites being anything with online multiplayer, but he’ll play just about anything and he’s a notorious Nintendo fan boy. He loves going into random groups and getting to know people for the hour or two you’re playing and then not having to worry about keeping up with them. It’s like speed friendship. He’s also pretty good at them, doing the best in FPS's. He’s been playing games since he was four- plopping him down in front of a game was cheaper for his mother than hiring a baby sitter- even if he wasn’t totally sure of how to play back then. He routinely has game nights with his cousin and roommates, and usually manages to beat everyone, though he does have his losing streaks just like everyone else.

Star Gazing - Justin loves to stare at the stars. He's taught himself most the constellations in Destiny City's sky, and he's made up some of his own. He isn't sure what exactly draws him towards the stars, but he can't think of a better night than getting faded, lying in the grass and staring at the stars all night. Well, if he had somewhere there to cuddle with it would be beyond perfect. The ceiling of his room is covered in glow and the dark stars, arranged in the constellations he's made up. The largest constellation is a real one though. It's his favourite constellation, Leo.

Street Racing – Justin’s Dad’s first car was a 1967 Ford Mustang Shelby GT500 and when Jack died the car was rolled into the garage, covered with a tarp and left for Justin to find when he grew up. Justin wasn’t allowed to take the car until he was 18, it was a graduation present and probably the only reason Justin graduated high school with such high grades. Since then he’s refurbished it, doing most the work himself. He had to take it to a professional for the paint job but other than that it was all DIY. With a car like that it wasn’t a surprise when Justin started racing her. It’s mostly illegal, late night races down a dark stretch of Destiny City road. He’s fairly at good at it, managing to not total his car over the years. He races for the thrill and the fun of it, and sometimes he’ll race for money. He’s constantly working on Moira, trying to make her run better and faster. His job gives him access to cheap parts, and he does the work himself.

Gemstone: Onyx

Virtues: Laid Back – Justin very rarely gets angry. Sure he’ll get disappointed if something doesn’t go his way, but it doesn't last very long. He’s not one to yell or blow his top. It’s hard to ruffle his feathers and even if you manage it you won’t have much to show for it. The only thing that will get a violent reaction out of him is if you insult his family. A guy that Amelia rejected made the mistake of calling her a whore within hearing distance of Justin and got rewarded with a fist in the face. But, the majority of the time he just lets things roll off his back. It takes too much energy to get mad, and it’s just easier to let things go and move on.

Intelligent – Justin’s smart, really smart. If he had any motivation whatsoever he could probably be near the top of his class. Unfortunately for him he doesn’t have any motivation since getting his car, so his grades don’t reflect his real intelligence. Things like math and science come easy to him, able to pick up and understand concepts without too much trouble. He’s a fast reader, though he rarely reads just for pleasure. He’ll sometimes throw big words into his everyday vocabulary to surprise people, or just because it’s a word he particularly likes.

Generous – Need a ride? Call up Justin. Need to borrow money? Justin will most likely lend it to you. The man isn’t selfish in the least; if you asked for the shirt off his back and had a semi-decent reason he’d give it you. What does he care? It’s just a shirt, he can buy another one. He also enjoys helping friends out with their cars, fixing them up for free, and getting them a discount on any parts they may need.

Loving – Make love not war is pretty much Justin’s motto. He loves anyone and everyone, believing strangers are just friends you haven’t met yet. He also tends to fall in love quickly and with more than one person at a time. It seems odd, but if you asked him he’d explain that he really did love you, but that he loved Kelly, Nathan, and Jacquelyn too and of course there’s more than enough of him to go around. He’s also very affectionate and touchy-feely, even with his friends. He loves to cuddle and rub against people, and often will make physical contact with a person while talking to them.

Flaws: Unambitious – A career? Who needs it. Justin really doesn’t care about his future at all. He doesn’t see a reason too, everything’s fine just the way it is. He doesn’t need a fancy career to make him happy. He has his family, his car, his friends, and a house and that’s good enough for him. His job was gotten more out of necessity than anything, he needed to be able to pay rent and also getting cheap parts is a plus. But other than his gig as a mechanic Justin really doesn’t have anything going for him. He drifts through life, content to be going nowhere.

Doesn’t understand social customs – Cheating? He’s not cheating, he’s just sharing the love. Justin doesn’t quite understand why so many girls, and guys, get upset when he sleeps with someone else. Well yes they were going out, but she just seemed so lonely, he was cheering her up, it didn’t mean anything really. Common sense issues don’t seem to compute in his head. Things like respecting personal space, and not walking into a room without knocking aren’t things Justin thinks about. He doesn’t do it maliciously, he just doesn’t see the harm in it and honestly doesn’t understand why people get so angry at him.

Disorganized – The PS3 controller? Oh yeah, it’s over there, somewhere. Justin has a nasty habit of picking things up and then leaving them somewhere and forgetting where that somewhere is. It doesn’t help that he’s naturally not a very organized person. His room is constantly a mess, papers strewn across the desk, and dirty clothes piling up on the floor. It always takes him twice the amount of time to find something as it would a normal person. It’s not that he lost it, it just wasn’t where he put it last, that’s all.

Flakey – Oh damn, was Justin supposed to meet you and he never showed up? That’s pretty much the story of his life. The man is extremely forgetful, routinely making plans and then never showing up for them. He tends to drop out of people’s lives for weeks at a time before he shows up again acting like nothing ever happened. He also has a bad habit of not following through on his promises. He either procrastinates till it’s irrelevant, or he just forgets. But it’s okay, because it wasn’t that important anyways, right?

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:52 am


Physical Description


Eyes: Ivy green with gold flecks

Hair: Colour is naturally chocolate brown with lighter streaks, something like this: . Style is up to you, just something that looks cool. Something like either of these: .

Face: Happy-go-lucky and relaxed, always has a smile on his face.

Body: At 6’0 Justin’s tall and lanky thanks to a fast metabolism. Though he’s developed muscles from hauling around heavy car parts at work. He's olive skinned and has an addiction to ink. On the inside of his left wrist is the date ’10-13-49' which is his Dad's birthday. On his right shoulder is the Triforce, it's for both him and Amelia since the Legend of Zelda is their favourite game series. Behind his ear he has three gears and cogs. When he was drunk one night he thought it would be an awesome idea to get gears, on his head, because he's a gearhead, eh eh? Yeah the next morning he felt kinda dumb, but he shrugged it off, it looked neat at least. Across the top of his back, shoulder to shoulder is the quote 'Strangers are just friends I haven't met yet.', that quote is basically Justin's way of life.

Fashion: Justin likes to go shirtless when he can to show off his tattoos. When he does have to get dressed he usually ops for jeans, and a short sleeve shirt. He doesn’t like fancy clothes instead preferring to be comfortable.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:53 am


Family/Home/Job


Family:
  • Jack Mitchell (deceased) – Father, died before Justin was born.
  • Lydia Mitchell (57) – Mother, never remarried
  • Amelia Kane (18 ) – Cousin, treats her more like a younger sister though.


Home: A suburban style home When he turned twenty Justin decided it was time to finally move out. He loved his mother, but he knew it’d be easier on the both of them if he wasn’t living with her. Less expenses for her and more privacy for him. His cousin, Amelia, decided to move out with him at the same time and together they found a house and a couple of roommates to split the rent with.

Job: Justin’s a mechanic at Jonny’s Auto Repair. He’s good at his job even though he routinely shows up high, but his boss doesn’t care as long as he gets his work done and doesn’t screw anything up. Justin uses his job to get discounts on parts for Moira. Jonny also let's him use the garage to do custom work on the side as long as he finishes his actual work first. The work he does customizing and improving people's cars is a big supplement to his income, which is good because he tends to give his money away like candy.

Marsh the Sex Panda

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Marsh the Sex Panda

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:54 am


Extra
PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:55 am


And open for crits =D

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Pyry

Justice Nerd

PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:58 pm


I hope it makes sense.

A lot of things work together really well in this profile.

Drugs stood out to me, just because it's one of those hobbies that can mean very different things for different people. Why does he use drugs? Why doesn't he do injections? I'm getting a vague idea, but I'd like to see the boundaries of his drug habit explicitly stated. Has he ever gotten caught? By authorities or otherwise. The main thing I wanted to mention, though, is that some substances dull attention and reaction time, so keeping street racing as a hobby will take a little bit of effort. How does drug use affect his racing? Parties I can see no problem.

His flaws work well together, but they're all along similar lines. I'd like to see bit of variety in him.
I'm falling asleep, sorry.

Edit: I can't type coherently when I'm too tired, and the exhaustion can come on pretty fast, so I couldn't manage to type an explanation that I'd finish critting in the morning. I decided to post what I had because I'm not a clear thinker after I've fallen asleep at the keyboard, so please let me know if you'd like me to clarify or expand on some point I've made. I don't want to be unhelpful or anything.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:25 am


Regarding his drug habit:
You say he won't regularly do "dangerous" drugs. What are you defining as dangerous? Cause ecstasy (like most drugs made in labs, such as crystal meth and LSD) is often considered to be a dangerous drug, since you don't really know what your getting in a pill (this can be argued for all illegal drugs since there is no regulated production, but is true especially for lab-made drugs). And even if you are getting the standard pill, its not something that is safe to do on a regular basis.
Not to be preaching that drugs are bad or that having a character who uses ecstasy wouldn't work or anything of that sort - but drug safety wise, it seems a little contradicting to say he takes ecstasy regularly but won't do regularly something dangerous.

Also, would you say that Justin has an addiction to any drugs (physically or psychologically, or is it just a hobby (something he can maintain but chooses not to)? From my personal experiences, those who take drugs on a regular basis (other than marijuana) have a physical addiction to a drug, and if they are getting high every day they usually find it hard to quit. They're 'always looking for their next fix' so to speak.

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Marsh the Sex Panda

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:24 am


Thanks for the crit guys! I'm about to run to class so I'll try and sum up quickly:

-I'm defining dangerous as drugs that aren't considered party drugs, if that makes sense. Like pcp, heroine, meth, more, uh, hardcore? drugs. He started doing drugs when he was 17, and he's had the same dealer for about three years, and while he's not guaranteed to not get E cut with something bad (It's early, I can't remember which drug I'm thinking of it being cut with, lol), there's less of a chance. He also doesn't do E all the time, if he's alone he won't roll, so if he's having a dry streak in the romance department he'll go months without rolling. Even if he's with someone he'll only roll maybe once every other month. He does ecstasy more regularly than other more 'dangerous' drugs because he likes the way it makes him feel.

-The only drug he takes every day (not literally every day, but like at least five times a week) is marijuana, he's not addicted to it, and he could stop if he wanted to, but he doesn't want to, he likes being high.

Hopefully that clears things up some? If not let me know, I'm glad to continue explaining when I have more time lol. And pyry I'll respond to your crit when I get home :3
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 9:40 am


Just slipping on though giving out ma crits <3

I really like this fun partying dude, there isn't anything that stands out as a "Please change this or my face will melt" problem. There were only a few things that could be picked on but a matter of changing some sentences around or explaining further would get the matter sorted.

Unmotivated: Although this flaw is perfectly fine in itself reading his bio I actually find him to be motivated in quite a few things! Getting good grades (although in his case easy due to his intelligence) to get the car required motivation, a much wanted goal even if he is no longer in school. Even going out to party and make friends night after night can also be tied in with motivation and going though the process of getting a new lover, caring for them, all desires a motivation to do it. MMO in themselves need motivation to play or complete when that dam ice dragon just won’t die! *goes off point*

Again I don't think this is a bad flaw I just think it needs to be worked on a little more, he just comes across as a motivated guy, maybe not in the sense that he wants to control the whole world but in his world at least he seems to be going for everything!

Flaky: Why he no late for work? I feel if this is the flaw you want to use then it should affect every part of his life as most flaws can't pick and choose when it comes into effect. Just a matter of deleting that last sentence would be fine, if he is as good as he is at his job (and hopefully has an easy going boss) there may not be reason (straight away) to fire his a**!

Hope this helped a little, I was really trying to find worthy critting points but I must admit I was pulling at teeth here, I see no reason for him not to get a trial/full stamp in the near future!

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Marsh the Sex Panda

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2012 3:10 pm


Matisha


Changed Unmotivated to Unambitious, and deleted the last line in the flaky flaw~
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 5:46 am


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 6:33 am


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