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Iris Silver

PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:08 pm


I did a few sketches of some friends that I know in anime form. I was wondering what you guys think of it. C&C is of course appreciated. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:58 am


Very nice!

Necks seem to be a little too long to me, but that may just be me.

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YooHwa

PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 1:11 am


Not exactly critique... but I personally would like it better things other than the eyes were detailed as well
PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:10 pm


Lets see. Its good.
Critique.
On the first picture. The chibis are alittle unporportional to me. But they still look cute.
On the girl the spoon is what get me and The girl's hips. (Very difficult took me years lol. not rlly. but yeah.)
On the Second picture the hand near the face seems alittle small. but thats okay. Hands are a pain to draw........I have problem drawing hands.

The good stuff
both girls in are awesome. When i looked at the first picture you did awesome on the face. lolLucky. and details as well. I like that ALOT
And the little cibi's have the cuteness factor
The second picture The Eyes AGaIN so nicely done. seriously it compliment's the girl's face. I think that is how you should say it.
Her eyes add character to the girl. so does her smile.
SQUEE. and her hair is nicely drawn to it makes it seem like it accualy has texture insted of it looking flat.
good job on the shading too
Keep drawing. I like your art <3

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:28 pm


Thats awesome
how old r there? stare
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:31 pm


I love them. > w <
One thing though: the pose on the Chibi next to her holding the cake is a little awkward.
Otherwise wonderful. Keep on drawing. C:

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ninja_yuffie101

PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:10 pm


I am so serious that is amazing I'm good but not like that.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:37 pm


Thanks for all the comments and I take all the critiques to heart. blaugh The chibis have always been hard for me and I still have quite a bit of work on, a weakness of mine that I always wanted to fix. Details! I will definately be working on that besides just focusing on the face.

Thanks again for all of the positive comments and great critiques. heart

Iris Silver

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