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Underground_X13

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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:39 am

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Question.

In my nightmares
I have but one simple
Question.

It perplexed me
as I fled

I heard answers
Being yelled
All around me.

But mine is
Never answered.

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 12:26 pm

✖we all feel like this in life

schizophrenic_ai
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purple_artemis00

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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:07 am

I agree with ai. The piece is extremely universal. It s something that everyone is able to relate to.

It's also nearly metered and that makes it flow very well. (That's especially important in such a short piece.)

The only thing I'm curious about is the capitalization. It's a bit curious to choose to capitalize every line when you are using end-stop punctuation. I'm not saying it's wrong, I was just wondering why.

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