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Name: Cetalese
Age: 17 Turns
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual/Bicurious
Craft: N/A
Rank: Candidate

History: Cetalese is the oldest of three children, born to Darcet and Alise of Tillek Hold. As the oldest child she was left responsible for her siblings while her parents earned money with labor or through Hold crafts, and learned as much as she needed to to help her mother keep the house running. She had a few good friends at her Hold that she spent time with when she got some free time, but preferred her small group to having some huge conglomeration of aquaintances. That is, all of that applied until she was Searched. Now she spends her time trying to get acclimated to Weyr life, which is thankfully easy enough now that she's spending a longer amount of time there. So far, though, making friends has been fairly low on her priority list, not that she's had the time anyway with her around-the-Weyr duties.

Appearance: Deep green eyes are the feature that bring Ceta the most attention. Although she is pretty as a whole, her dark emeraldesque eyes are generally the first thing that people notice about her. She has thick, curly hair extending to mid-back that is often described as "unmanagable", but is a rich chocolate color bordering on ebony. The hair frames her oval-shaped face and accents her olive-toned skin. Her nose is almost too strong for her looks, but falls just short of not fitting her. Cetalese stands at 5' 4 3/4", but despite the strange place she stopped, it doesn't appear that she'll be growing any taller.

Personality: Ceta harbors a quiet joy and strength-- very quiet. It might shine in her so others can see it in her expression, but an exuberant or attention-grabbing action is extremely rare for her. Her quietness amplifies her calm personality, the combination creating a relaxed, soothing listener, but also creating a slew of problems for her. Unfortunately, because Ceta tends to bite her tongue, even when she shouldn't, she seems to be somewhat of a sheep and that places her into situations where she gets pushed around by more dominant personalities. It's just easier to take it than make trouble when the problem would otherwise pass over quickly. She hopes that becoming a dragonrider will give her more of the strength she needs to be able to speak up when she sees something foolish or wrong, because otherwise her silence can put those around her in danger-- or let others place themselves in danger. The last thing she wants is to see anyone suffer, even if they've done wrong, because she considers everyone capable of a second-- or third-- chance and wants to be able to provide them with that opportunity. As many times as they need it, really, unless the offense is so great there's no way she can convince herself that they deserve forgiveness.

She can adapt to any situation with considerable ease, which would come in handy for flights if she were to be paired with a male dragon who chased a Rising female. Even if the rider were female, Cetalese wouldn't mind sleeping with a female in the aftermath of a triumphant Flight, even though she otherwise prefers men.

Other: N/A