Please tell me what you think,I haven't ever really done anything suspenseful and,or horrific before.
Damsel in Distress
Sixteen year old Alexis strolled home from work.The conclusion of this night had put her at three weeks she had been working as a waitress at,Sam's Pub & Grub.The only thing Alexis did not enjoy about the job,was the walk home.Although she had never seen anyone else around,whenever she walked home she always felt like someone was following her,watching her every move.Those thoughts scared her as she was an attractive,young,virgin.She walked quickly each and every night.
By the time Alexis reached the park,second to the last stretch on her journey,it was 10:18 as it always was when she arrived there.Alexis turned into the park,she clutched her purse tightly,and got goose bumbs all over when a slight gust of wind inclosed her.
10:18 written in cursive could be seen at the top of a list the stranger lurking just fifteen yards away from Alexis had in his hands.With it was a large barrage of information on young Alexis."Now would be the time to strike."The man whispered,and within seconds he was upon the girl.As she had not yet notice him,he put away his notebook and retrieved both his knife and a wash-cloth.The stranger lunged forward and gripped a handful of Alexis' then blonde hair,she squealed has he pulled her back and stuffed the wash-cloth in her mouth.The squeal became muffled.Putting the knife to her throat,he pulled a roll of ducktape off his wrist.The sound of the ducktape detatching from itself was yet another add-on to the fear Alexis was experiencing.As the ducktape cover her mouth,of which had already been gagged with a wash-cloth,tears began to roll down her cheeks.
"Quit your crying b***h."The man said as he dragged,her flailing about as she was,into a group of bushes that had a tree in the midst of it.He took off his belt and tied her hands to the tree with it.Alexis only cried more."Here's whats gonna happen....First,I'm gonna have some fun with you.Then,I'm gonna rape you."Another muffled squeal and more tears."Hahaha.After that.."He pulled his knife forward and showed it to her face."..I'm gonna take this knife.."Alexis' eyes were open wide,fearing what the man might say."...And I'm gonna open you up.Haha,yeah.I'm gonna make a ******** sleeping bag out of your tight little a**."
"Having fun" with her was feeling up,kissing,and hitting her.The man smacked her across the face a few times,and laughed while doing it.Then he would go back to touching her gently,grabbing her breasts and kissing her stomach.
"Now,for the real fun part.Heh,heh,heh."Alexis was moving and gerking around even more when he said this.Slowly,he began to unbutton Alexis' pants.....
Alexis' head hung to the side.She was still crying.Her body was tied to a tree,bruised,covered in semen,and she was no longer a virgin.The man placed the knife's blade against Alexis' neck."Wasn't that fantasic?Now you have happy experience to go out on."Something Alexis hadn't thought of yet occured.'Why is his voice so familiar?'She hadn't yet seen his face.With the knife still at her throat,the man removed the ducktape and gag."Before I kill you...I want you to know who I am."A click could heard and then there was a small flashlight shining on the face of the rapist.
"...Uhhh...D-D-Daddy-?"Alexis was slilenced by her father's hand,and then he immediatly slit his own daughters throat.He kept himself at a distance so no blood would get on him.She was stil alive.He drove the knife into his daughter's stomach four times,and held her mouth shut until the life left her eyes."Now,to go tell the misses' that I had no luck finding her for a ride home."He walked towards his car chuckling."...Searched the whole neighborhood...hahaha..and no sign of her.I tell you though,it's gonna be one hell of a surprise to that jogger,when he finds her there in the morning.Hahaha."He got in his car and drove off,a father no longer.
By the time Alexis reached the park,second to the last stretch on her journey,it was 10:18 as it always was when she arrived there.Alexis turned into the park,she clutched her purse tightly,and got goose bumbs all over when a slight gust of wind inclosed her.
10:18 written in cursive could be seen at the top of a list the stranger lurking just fifteen yards away from Alexis had in his hands.With it was a large barrage of information on young Alexis."Now would be the time to strike."The man whispered,and within seconds he was upon the girl.As she had not yet notice him,he put away his notebook and retrieved both his knife and a wash-cloth.The stranger lunged forward and gripped a handful of Alexis' then blonde hair,she squealed has he pulled her back and stuffed the wash-cloth in her mouth.The squeal became muffled.Putting the knife to her throat,he pulled a roll of ducktape off his wrist.The sound of the ducktape detatching from itself was yet another add-on to the fear Alexis was experiencing.As the ducktape cover her mouth,of which had already been gagged with a wash-cloth,tears began to roll down her cheeks.
"Quit your crying b***h."The man said as he dragged,her flailing about as she was,into a group of bushes that had a tree in the midst of it.He took off his belt and tied her hands to the tree with it.Alexis only cried more."Here's whats gonna happen....First,I'm gonna have some fun with you.Then,I'm gonna rape you."Another muffled squeal and more tears."Hahaha.After that.."He pulled his knife forward and showed it to her face."..I'm gonna take this knife.."Alexis' eyes were open wide,fearing what the man might say."...And I'm gonna open you up.Haha,yeah.I'm gonna make a ******** sleeping bag out of your tight little a**."
"Having fun" with her was feeling up,kissing,and hitting her.The man smacked her across the face a few times,and laughed while doing it.Then he would go back to touching her gently,grabbing her breasts and kissing her stomach.
"Now,for the real fun part.Heh,heh,heh."Alexis was moving and gerking around even more when he said this.Slowly,he began to unbutton Alexis' pants.....
Alexis' head hung to the side.She was still crying.Her body was tied to a tree,bruised,covered in semen,and she was no longer a virgin.The man placed the knife's blade against Alexis' neck."Wasn't that fantasic?Now you have happy experience to go out on."Something Alexis hadn't thought of yet occured.'Why is his voice so familiar?'She hadn't yet seen his face.With the knife still at her throat,the man removed the ducktape and gag."Before I kill you...I want you to know who I am."A click could heard and then there was a small flashlight shining on the face of the rapist.
"...Uhhh...D-D-Daddy-?"Alexis was slilenced by her father's hand,and then he immediatly slit his own daughters throat.He kept himself at a distance so no blood would get on him.She was stil alive.He drove the knife into his daughter's stomach four times,and held her mouth shut until the life left her eyes."Now,to go tell the misses' that I had no luck finding her for a ride home."He walked towards his car chuckling."...Searched the whole neighborhood...hahaha..and no sign of her.I tell you though,it's gonna be one hell of a surprise to that jogger,when he finds her there in the morning.Hahaha."He got in his car and drove off,a father no longer.
*EDIT: Failed to mention that it isn't a short story,it's a chapter from a book I am thinking about writing.Tell me if this chapter is worth it,an I'll continue posting chapters.
