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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:41 pm
Please get judging in by February 18.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:42 pm
Jamais Changeant Using Autio's Enviro:  Added 1 item: the Patchouli (only because I KNOW she wants it!) Dee - 10. 8. 7. 8. 10. = 43 Lin: 9, 8, 8, 6.5, 10 = 41.5 Wow, good job on making an avatar that actually layers! Awesome color scheme, I love the creamy yellow color of the Prince Patchouli vest. Also, good incorporation of that elephant head. It's kinda hard to give a technical critique to an avatar that has to actually layer, since I always feel bad saying "Oh there should be more of this color there" since I know sometimes it's simply not possible. But, that said, I do wish that there was a little more of the yellow color at the feet, and that the hair matched a little better. Gin: 10, 9, 8.5, 8, 10 = 45.5
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:43 pm
Shawana_Chou
Just move to the beat
It ain’t that hard
Heat’s rising up
Party’s just begun
You don’t have to be afraid, I’ma show you how
Say it with me now LA CHA CHA TA
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I used Autio's enviro, and I did use dream free layering, cause I didn't know that we couldn't until after I had already done it.. : /
I did not add any items that were not already in her inventory.
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Going all night so live it up
Go with the music and have some fun
Put it on repeat
This is how we groove
Come on everybody
Show them how we do it
Dee - 10. 8. 9. 9. 10. = 46 Lin: 8, 8.5, 8.5, 7.5, 10 = 42.5 Nice, what jumps out at me first is how nicely you balanced the tail with the Heartbreaker ball-and-chain. (And I usually hate both those items!) The next thing is the face, it's awesome. I can't even figure out how you did it. : D Reds could be matched a bit better, and the color scheme is pretty overused, but overall I do like it. Great detail! Gin: 10, 9, 9, 9, 10 = 47
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:45 pm
Dee- 10. 7. 7. 8. 10. = 42 Lin: 6.5, 8, 9.5, 6.5, 10 = 40.5 Yay, my invo! C: Wow, I have to say, this is exquisitely matched. I'm impressed! Overall it's really cute, bright and happy. There could be more detail though, and I wish the skin balance was better. Maybe you could have added White Skin Dye? I can't remember whether there was a limit on the price of items your could add....well, anyway, nicely done. I like it. Gin: 8, 8, 8.5, 8, 9 = 41.5
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:46 pm
Riyo Ongaku  Tektek's enviro tool is finicky, but the only extra items should be the Marionette, Belt, and Wool top. The other items were in the Enviro, but tektek labels them as a different gen at the end. Dee - 10. 6. 6. 8. 10. = 40 Lin: 6.5, 6, 7, 6, 10 = 35.5 Oh, unfortunately not my favorite of your work, Riyo! D: The item distribution is pretty wack (the petals on the ground, the antennae), and there are lots of little issues like red matching and skin balance and the fact that the eye doesn't really match anything. I DO like the colors you chose, they look good together. But I think I might have stuck with either dark gray OR white, not both. Gin: 7, 7, 6.5, 7, 8 = 35.5
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:48 pm
Pugnacious Banana  impre's inventory.Dee - 10. 7. 10. 10. 10.= 47 Lin: 8, 9, 8, 8.5, 10 = 43.5 Oh wow, I never would have though of making that face with my items! this is my favorite entry this round, it's really lovely. Besides the awesome face, I like the constrasting colors and nice flow. I think I might have added a white belt, to break up the comparatively large chunk of green in the middle - oh, and used different red shoes - but still, definitely well done. C: Gin: 9, 8, 8.5, 9, 10 = 44.5
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:49 pm
the only shark goth Here it is. I did a simple avatar, and I used Gin Gin's Enviro for this. A lot of items appear to be away from the enviro, but they're all there.  Simplicity is my favorite  Dee - 10. 6. 6. 6. 9. = 37 Remember, though simple avatars are nice, they aren't always fit for contests. Remember to always follow the rubric. Even if it's an enviro, matching is part of the rubric, so points must be taken off for that. Same goes for layering as well. Lin: 5, 6, 8, 5, 10 = 34 I agree with Dee, you need to be able to make good judgement calls about what kind of avatar you make in what situation. Even with something so simple, you need to apply the same rules, like skin balance and color distribution. I would definitely add a white skin (since you were allowed to add items) and make the break between the white and black higher up. Oh, and I would lose the gold anklets. Overall, you've got a nice idea - a simple, clean halfatar - but it needs some work. Gin: 7, 6, 7, 6, 9 = 35
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:52 pm
Cyan Azzura Ri  Sorry it's late, I was gone and forgot to send it before I left. >.<Dee - 10. 8. 9. 9. 10. = 46 Lin: 8, 8, 8.5, 8, 10 = 42.5 Oh wow, I really like how you matched the antique gold of the mask to the antique gold of the Reve Key! (I wish the shoes matched too.) The layering on the head and torso are nice, and this is actually a pretty original take on a black/white/gold avatar. It's a little top heavy though, maybe you could have used some wider/poofier black pants? Gin: 9, 8, 9, 8, 10 = 44
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