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 Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:04 pm
Love is beautiful
Yet painful when it's broken
Nothing prepares you for it
((it was meant to be a haiku but i fail at poetry. I just wanted to write what i feel right now))
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:38 pm
It's still pretty good, I like the effort. With time&practice you'll see improvements though. ^_^
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PrimeMaterialDragon Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:58 am
no need for time or practice, if you just fit t into the haiku thing itd be perfect 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:03 am
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x_Luna_Lilium_x Vice Captain
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