Welcome to Gaia! ::

The Real Twilight Shadow [VV]

Back to Guilds

A place for people who have hobbies, passions and a friendly manner of course 

Tags: Roleplay, Poetry, Anime, Friendship, Manga 

Reply Poets and writers
Life and Death(Vida y Muerte)

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

donate v2

PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:03 pm


Life and Death
by Javier Vázquez

Life and Death is not from birth to death,
Since the day of life's dawn,
it is the twilight of your life

You slowly start to decay,
as you walk and breathe everyday

Life is like a hour glass,
it eventually runs out,
from every small grain
to the last, you will,
find yourself reminiscing
about your past

As you go down your memories
you will surely be in glee
mostly due to a life of harmony

Death is the day you die,
it is the Apocalypse for some,
yet it is the final judgment for others,
do not fret, you'll be fine

Death is simpler than life,
yet full of sadness from all your dreams,
never to be seen again it will all be a lost memory
Death is simpler,
yet complicated
it's all the things you've ever hated


((Let me know what you think wink I didn't rhyme on some parts, a poem doesn't need to rhyme as long as it has a message it's all fine. ^_^)  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:45 pm


i think it's pretty good

x_Luna_Lilium_x
Vice Captain


donate v2

PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:08 pm


Arigato, it's just a prototype though, not my best work either as well. I liked my original version better, but I can't find it anymore. XD
PostPosted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:46 pm


bummer

x_Luna_Lilium_x
Vice Captain

Reply
Poets and writers

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum